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Knocks



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You’re lying in bed fast asleep, until you hear a knock at your window. You wake up, contemplating on whether or not the sound was just your imagination, until you hear it again. Confused, you blankly stare at your window, wondering how the hell anyone could reach the second floor windows. After a few minutes of silence, you assume that it was just a couple of neighborhood kids throwing rocks at your window to scare you, or maybe just annoy you. You lay back down into your bed, and rest your head on your pillow. As you shut your eyes, hoping to fall back asleep, you hear the knock again.

Annoyed, you sit up immediately and peer at your window, expecting to see a rock hit the glass. That’s when you hear the knock once again. Except this time, you realize that it wasn’t coming from your window. Hesitantly, you get out of your bed and walk towards the door. You open your door, only to see that there was nothing there. A louder and harder knock is heard from downstairs. At this point, you’re now fully awake mind is confused and frustrated at what is happening so late at night.

You go downstairs and check every window and door only to find absolutely nothing. After waiting for about ten minutes to hear another knock, you walk back upstairs to finally get some rest. Upon entering your room, you notice that your window was open, allowing a cool breeze to flow throughout the room. You stop dead in your tracks,wondering what is happening, and how the window opened, until you hear one final, light knock on the wall behind you.

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You turn around, only to become face to face with me.

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Credit To: Me

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35 thoughts on “Knocks”

  1. If the knocks go farthur from you how the hell do find this “me” in your room if you heard the last knock downstairs i mean what the fuck.
    Very poorly written and the last sentence “become face to face” thats so badly written whoever wrote this shit should hav uploaded it on crappypasta.

  2. I just brought this back after a while, but I thought it was mediocre at best. Short and spicy, like i like my pasta. I guess what im trying to say is it’s okay. I did like the part of ‘me’. Puts an open mind to what the me is and its supposed to be a creature guys.

  3. So… you come and knock on my window in the dead of the night, then you knock on my door, then go downstair and knock on the front door, then open my window and knock on my room wall… the very second I am face to face with you, you get punched for being such a nuisance and not letting me sleep.
    Seriously, if the knocks actually getting farer instead of closer weren’t enough to put off the mood, that last line kills it completely.

  4. Great pasta! I think this would be a LOT better without the last line. It doesn’t really add anything except cheesiness.

  5. You cant be me. Im me. You must be you. Not really a true creepypasta, IMO. A little knocking, sudden person in the room, nothing supernatural or spooky, just a little annoying.

  6. Much more classic than most of the stuff posted lately, imo. I liked it a lot, but that classic flavor somehow made it feel cliche, in a way.

  7. That final sentence needs to be snappier, less clumsy. I would say "come face to face" rather than "become face to face".

  8. Well, I always like this kind of story. I like this story but, I don’t like how you use yourself as the knocker. You can use an unknown being and not yourself. Seriously, it’s ruin the creepiness. But after all, I like your story. I hope to see your writings soon.

    1. I liked the fact that they used the self as the knocker, I mean that’s usually never the case in pastas, but sadly it was t a very good pasta if it was longer, and more detailed I feel this could have been a wonderful pasta

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