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Creepypasta

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Internet Story from Adam Butcher on Vimeo.

Credit: Adam Butcher

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Internet Story, 9.1 out of 10 based on 1659 ratings
  • Alicia

    that was epic

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    Rating: +89 (from 97 votes)
    • http://creepypasta.com jaren

      indeed,bro.that story was really getting to me when i read the yellow text

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      Rating: +18 (from 20 votes)
      • Totally freaked out

        That freaked me out… I feel bad for that guy looking for the treasure…

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        Rating: +9 (from 9 votes)
        • I Killed Him

          Your Next

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          Rating: -18 (from 22 votes)
        • Anonymous

          Yes. It is “his next” plz use grammar :(

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          Rating: +11 (from 37 votes)
        • http://bearbearak907@gmail.com Anonymous

          Ok, FIRST of all. You both here are wrong and are most likely a modern day retard. It is “YOU’RE” and “He’s”.

          Yep. Douche bags.

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        • Anonymous

          No, you’re wrong. The guy said “his next” to make fun of the other guy using the wrong your/you’re. As in your a douchebag, his a douchebag. Versus you’re a douchebag, he’s a douchebag. It was meant to be ironic. Douchebag.

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          Rating: +80 (from 80 votes)
  • shogunfish

    wow, that was really good.

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    Rating: +21 (from 25 votes)
    • Anonymous

      I think that the story was an interesting empty space

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      Rating: +6 (from 10 votes)
      • Random Guy

        It’s a video

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        Rating: -4 (from 6 votes)
        • meh

          Erm… Creepy, why would someone make a gigantic puzzle about that? it could have been to kill the person hunting the treasure, or it could have been the person… douche

          :D

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  • Themaninblack

    I’m guessing there’s a flash video? I’m on my iPhone and see nothing…

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    Rating: +46 (from 66 votes)
    • http://Yahoo Hunter1225

      Im on my Ipad and see nothing as well…

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      Rating: +18 (from 28 votes)
      • Anonymous

        Buy a computer instead….

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        Rating: +56 (from 80 votes)
        • jeffthfemkiller

          On my tab, i see nothing

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          Rating: -2 (from 20 votes)
        • KaneHall

          Click on he Internet story link before the authors name. I’m on the iPad also. I watched it and it was amazing.

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          Rating: +4 (from 8 votes)
      • Anonymous

        Me too

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        • O_o

          so is it a movie O.o

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      • Someone

        Same problem

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    • Angel

      Thank god I’m not the only one. I thought I was about to be in a pasta lol

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      Rating: +3 (from 3 votes)
  • http://www.creepypasta.com derpbutt

    Yup, it’s a video. Not technically a Creepypasta, either, but interesting and just weird enough that I agreed with the submitter that you guys might like it.

    I didn’t know that iPhones couldn’t deal with flash videos, that’s kind of surprising o.0

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    Rating: +28 (from 36 votes)
    • PastEcho

      Yea same problem for me I’m sure it’s good since it got so high ratings I’ll check it out on my pc later and get back and comment on it

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      • Zombiesoldier2

        IT’S DERPBUT!

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        Rating: +4 (from 6 votes)
        • http://instagram.com/fatcakes2123 TheForgotten1

          You got it wrong his name is, ‘derpbutt’

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  • miller

    Nice to have something fresh and different! more like this please ;)

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    Rating: +29 (from 31 votes)
    • http://gravatar meowingvelociraptor

      It wouldnt be different or fresh if there were more like it

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      Rating: +13 (from 23 votes)
  • a man of questionable sanity

    Does anyone else think there is a hidden code in the video?

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    • EpikMan48

      yes, think the `hidden clue` that may be there, is a hidden `path` to the REAL treasure?

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      Rating: +5 (from 5 votes)
      • Tropograph

        Or perhaps a hidden clue to the identity of the murderer?

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        Rating: +8 (from 8 votes)
        • Random guy

          *twilight zone theme starts playing* O.o

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          Rating: +28 (from 28 votes)
        • Herp

          More like -X-Files theme starts playing- xD

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          Rating: -2 (from 14 votes)
    • Rhi

      Did you not learn from this video? You’ll probably end up a unsolved murder too.

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      Rating: +12 (from 12 votes)
      • Anonymous

        It’s a shame that this never happened.

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  • :D

    I hate apple -.- my iPod won’t show flash videos D:

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    Rating: +6 (from 14 votes)
    • Anonymous

      if you hate it, why’d you get one in the first place?

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      Rating: +6 (from 16 votes)
      • LuluNightTerror

        Probably because he/she didn’t know that this kind of stuff would have happen O__O

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  • Garrett

    Very original, I even let out a light chuckle in parts.

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  • Undeadmuffins

    This was a wonderful surprise! Extremely entertaining and Fresh, a very uniquely presented story, very well plotted as well. Great work, I would love to see more like this!

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    Rating: +18 (from 22 votes)
  • LiamBrah

    I loved it.. not exactly creepy but entertaining none the less. Apple products don’t support flash programs as Apple has its own “version” of it. Quite annoying sometimes.

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    Rating: +5 (from 13 votes)
  • Sean

    Mind=blown

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    Rating: +10 (from 12 votes)
  • TVATR

    That was amazing. Even though it was a video, I was pretty creeped out by this. A guy asks people to solve his puzzle, and promises them money, only to lead them to their own death, ironically imitating the Pardoner’s Tale.

    What a sick, twisted genius that guy was.

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    Rating: +50 (from 52 votes)
  • Zea

    Al1= Alone. 1 one. al + 1 = ALONE! WTF!!!

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    Rating: +118 (from 122 votes)
    • Jade

      well that makes sense! ._.

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    • breakherlegs

      Wow. That’s some awesome detective skills. O.o
      Clever, clever.

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  • Rebecca

    I love this.

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    Rating: +9 (from 9 votes)
    • Nicolas

      I love you. :)

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      Rating: +14 (from 18 votes)
      • Ser

        Don’t be pathetic.

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        Rating: +2 (from 10 votes)
  • Len Lye

    The Fortress character was just a little too animated for my taste, but otherwise this was thouroughly enjoyable.

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    Rating: +20 (from 22 votes)
  • Anonymous

    Mabey Al1 is the killer because he might have been waiting for someone to solve the puzzle then they go there and die and Al1 gets off scott free

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    Rating: +3 (from 7 votes)
  • AJ

    Loved this from the first time I saw this.

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    Rating: +3 (from 3 votes)
  • JAY-RAD THE ARAB

    All of my wat

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  • http://creepypasta babybokaj

    it kinda creepy if you google al1 the site comse up and evrything stands there

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    Rating: +17 (from 17 votes)
  • elfie

    i went to the al1 site and no puzzle :-(

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    Rating: 0 (from 10 votes)
  • Anon

    I googled Al1… The site is there. Searched on YouTube for the vids; They are there.

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    • Anonymous

      Its all fake though.

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  • Sgt.PineTree

    For the ITouch/iPhone – users such as I – the video is on YouTube, just look it up and tap the one with AdamButcher for the author.

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  • Slender

    that was fuckin awesome

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  • Skole

    Very tasty and seemingly real, much like everything on the internet you can not be sure if it is fabricated or not. But as a fan of puzzles, riddles, and treasure hunts I’d like to beleive in this.

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    Rating: +11 (from 13 votes)
  • Trein

    this was amazing!

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    Rating: +8 (from 8 votes)

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