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Facebook Chat



Estimated reading time — 2 minutes

I met James Vickers when we were both about 12. We were next door neighbours, and I had been out in my back yard playing soccer by myself, kicking the ball against the fence. It was at this point I met James. It took me a little while to notice his little spectacled face peering down at me from his bedroom window. When I spotted him, I waved. He waved back and opened his window to talk to me.

We spoke about lots of things. Interests, favourite food, favourite video games- all sorts. I asked James if he would like to come to my house and play soccer with me. He politely declined, and told me that he suffered terribly with Asthma- among other illnesses, and that his parents absolutely refused to let him out of the house, or let anyone in. He instead asked me if I had a Facebook account and said he would add me on that.

I checked my Facebook later that night, accepted James’ friend request and we got chatting. And from that day, that’s pretty much how our friendship went. I would head off to school in the morning, finish up, come home and get straight on Facebook to speak with James. That’s the way it was for about 5 years. Unfortunately though, James’ illnesses got the better of him one day, and he grew very sick.

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The inevitable happened though. I hadn’t spoken to James on Facebook for a few days. I had spent some time in my back garden too, waiting for him to open the window and let me know that he was fine. He never did. Instead his father came to my house one evening and presented me with a small invite to a funeral. “He told us about how much you both had in common.” His father told me. “You were his only friend as far as we know.”

The funeral was very touching. I did my best to hold back my tears, but completely lost it when Fields of Gold by Sting was played as they took James’ casket away. After the funeral in his honour still dressed in my suit, I had a bit of a kick around with the same soccer ball I had when I first met James and had a beer in the back garden. It felt weird knowing that the room he used to speak to me from was now empty and unoccupied.

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As sad as I felt, I knew he was in a better place. A place where his afflictions would no longer bother him. His death had come so sudden though. The funeral just hadn’t done it for me. Perhaps I needed some kind of closure just to let me know that James was truly gone, and wasn’t coming back. So that night, I logged on to Facebook once more, opened up a chat box to James’ account and typed “Hello James”. At this point I realised how silly I was being, and promptly deleted the message before settling down in bed. I left the computer on, just in case any of my other friends sent me any messages.

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Something then happened that sent a chill up my spine. The only light in the room was being emitted from the computer screen, and as I peered across the room at James’ still open chat box, I saw the words “James is typing…”

Credit To – Cooperwithacamera

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92 thoughts on “Facebook Chat”

  1. Normalsteve Jacinto (Normalste

    Then James said: This is James’ father. I am very sorry, yet James is really dead. James said to me his Facebook password and said to chat with you so that you won’t feel alone.

  2. & This is why, before I die, I’m giving my best friend my password so she can keep updating it, to freak everyone out. <3

  3. Yeah, it was more sad than creepy. I mean, it could have easily been anyone in James’ room typing on his computer, messing with the protagonist.

  4. Ok. Am I the only one who saw so many problems with this? Facebook came out to the public(without invitation) in 2006, assuming you submitted this the last submission date that meant you are only 18 years old. This story was not creepy, it was probably his dad typing the message. I could not enjoy this story at all without noticing all the eras of this submission. What the hell are you drinking a beer in the backyard at the age of 18?

    1. It’s a story. It’s fictional. Next you guys will be saying that Harry Potter is unrealistic, and that Super Mario is just ridiculous because he couldn’t possibly jump as high as he does.

  5. Had a predictable ending, not very well thought out. Seems like it was written as a lazy story, something to do for fun. 2 outta 10. Would not bang.

  6. YOU CAN'T HANDLE THE USERNAME!

    I fee like a tad more detial could have made this pasta. Say like saying how he always logged off facebook, and made sure no-one would guess his password, proving it couldn’t be his parents, and for some reason I think saying ‘Goodbye James’ would make more sense. But what do I know?
    7 and a half/10

  7. I loved it! It was such a sweet-sour story about friends who couldn’t be seperated by death, I hope he makes a sequal.

  8. I feel like I’ve seen the ‘contact from beyond the grave’ a lot of times, and this story didn’t do anything new with the idea. I think you should have started with the line, “James is typing”, say ‘that’s strange, given that James is dead’, and taken it from there. If you take the twist ending and set the story around it I think you would have something more original and interesting.

  9. It was obviously just gonna be the kids dad telling all his 1,160 freinds that the account was being deleted!

  10. THEN WHO WAS TYPING?

    No, seriously… That wasn’t very creepy. My first thought was that someone had misled this narrator and he had a very narrow brush with a pedophile trying to meet kids online or something like that, but that didn’t fit well at all. So what? James is a machine?

    I felt the ending was seriously lacking. If you had told us WHAT, exactly, was typing, I’d be more satisfied. A cyber hacker? A ghost? A pedophile? Or is it just a glitch?

    5/10.

  11. I feel like you could’ve gone so much farther with this. Instead of ending it like that, maybe James was still really alive and was asking for help through the Facebook chat. Maybe he never really had asthma and that his parents kept him inside for a different reason.

    1. Or maybe he was actually dead and one of the parents were replying to the main character, trying to lure him into their house and do whatever they did to James to the main character.

  12. Realllly over played concept. Would have been a lot better if youu expanded on it more. Went exploring in the house or something. Just really over used and very unoriginal.. Actually a pretty sad story if anything

  13. Eh.. I saw it coming. I’d be a lot better if he got addicted to talking to a ghost, or maybe James describes dying in a creepy way or something. Idk, but should have way more.
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  14. First! but really liked it kind of saw the ending coming not so much creepy but touching like a sad story that is really touching i really did shed a tear when you mentioned sting cuz i love fields of gold any ways 7/10 good job just need a little bit better story building

  15. Extremely generic fare. If you want constructive feedback I would say this: If a story has been written 1000 times, it is hard to make it worth reading the 1001 time.

    (weird error happened, hope I didn’t post this twice)

        1. I already saw that before, silly xD It’s me, the Purple Frog. Plus, you’re not talking in lingo. I talked to the real funny, and he doesn’t talk like that.

  16. Could be someone someone on his account like his father or something. Also, your choice of timeline here is strange considering you were on facebook at 12 years old back when most kids didn’t have it yet, and also mentioning you drinking a beer as though you were 21 or something. I’m just saying you could have picked a better age for you two yo have met and perhaps not mentionjng alcohol as though you were an adult, it’s just an awkward read. Just something to consider :)

    1. I’m 17, I don’t see a problem with having a beer in your backyard. Maybe its weird for you, but I get invited to have a beer with my older family members while outside cooking on the bbq, or with dinner on occasion.

        1. 17 is OK for beer in America and the majority of European countries, isn’t it? It isn’t particularly strange at all.

        2. @Slenderman it is legal in America as long as your Legal Gaurdians are the ones who had you the beer and consent to you having it.

  17. Okay, and then… ?

    It’s an excellent start, but an internet chat message isn’t terribly creepy on its own.

  18. This was a really nice story, not really creepy though. Kind of a cool thought that technology could transcend death.

  19. This is kinda sad but a little creepy. But there’s a possibility that someone hacked into this Facebook account?

    1. That’s kinda the reason why it’s not creepy. A paranoid mind would, at first, be scared but someone getting access in another’s account for a prank is nothing new.

    2. I’m pretty sure what he meant was that he never hitted the “Enter” button and actually sent the message – so unless somebody sat on his account staring at – the inactive – chat window for hours and hours, nobody, even his parents or a hacker would have found out he was typing something to him. Unless there is some browser addon I haven’t heard of will notify you when somebody is typing a message to you.

      If I am correct with this theory, then this will be on my top3 of most touching stories. The creepy part is that someone is typing to him even if he didn’t send any message to begin with.

      That little detail imrpoves my 4/5 to a golden 5/5 if the case is.

  20. MrsPatrickBateman

    This wasn’t a creepy story at all. It seemed real and sad but not creepy. I kept waiting for scary part or something but it just ended. That ending is very explainable, it could have been a parent typing. If you had kept going or had the kid dead from the beginning it could have worked but this just didn’t.

    1. But what parent kogs into their kid’s facebook account and says “Hmmm…. James actually admitted that to him?!”
      THERE IS NO PARENT WHO DID THIS

      1. The parent proberly had the password anyway, incase something goes wrong so yeah, some parents do that

      1. The point of the story is the cliffhanger at the end. The story wouldn’t have been much good with more in it.

    1. I loved that! I agree i wish there was more to it, but with very sensitive emotions, the funeral stuff almost made me cry :( but that was really good!

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