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The Cabal



Estimated reading time — 3 minutes

“Whom the Gods would destroy, they first make mad”

Prometheus, The Masque of Pandora

In the upper echelons of society there exists an ever growing group of individuals with entirely too much time on their hands. The members hark from around the world, but share similar traits. Often from lives of exceptional wealth, they are apathetic individuals, detached from day to day life and merely looking for the next distraction. In this club they find that something they have been seeking to fill the void. The club allows its members anonymity and encourages pseudonyms taken from ancient gods.

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Now the name of the game is Despair. The members compete against each other, and a recognised hierarchy exists for individuals that have proven proficient in the past. A random person from across the world will be elected and presented to the player, who will then proceed to tear apart the person’s life in the most entertaining fashion. The resources of the cabal extend far and wide, and with the significant money at their disposal there are few doors that cannot be unlocked. The game is scored based on the speed with which the player can get the target to dispatch themselves.

It’s not clear exactly how long the club has been in existence, but the earliest records were shortly after World War 2. A small group of English officers returned from the war back to lives of luxury, and started to explore new ways in which hell could be inflicted upon an person. Over the years, the numbers have grown and imaginative characters have brought about the self-inflicted slaughter of thousands.

Over the years, rules for the game have had to be implemented. The most egregious examples would be in the late 70’s. “Ares” had just been given his target and had dropped out of sight. The cabal kept the victim under constant surveillance , awaiting what would come next. During a family dinner, “Ares” calmly walked in and executed 8 members of his family. He tossed a pistol at the poor boy, and instructed that either her shoot himself or the rest of his family would be dead by dawn. Took him 30 seconds to make the choice. “Ares” loves to brag about the fact that the “No killing” rule was brought in to bring him under control.

Now the games comprise of identity assassination and the destruction of a person’s faith in themselves. One of the more interesting examples was from “Isis”, who announced from the start that she had no care for the time taken and that this would be her magnus opus. She hired several individuals to undergo plastic surgery to make themselves identical to the target. They started to follow this young introverted woman around, always visible to her in the distance. She began to grow paranoid. At this point, the stalking escalated to several of them following at once and approaching her aggressively. She always ran from these encounters, heading home and locking her doors tight. They would post photos of her taken from her back garden through her letter box. It took 6 days before she finally snapped and opened up her arms with shards from the mirror.

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The current record is held by “Morpheus”. It was quite inspired. He paid a number of actors to approach the target, and to say deadpan “wake up, you’re in a coma” then act confused when he confronted them about what they had said. He hurled himself from the top floor of his offices before the day was out.

Now there is no limitation to who can become a target, save for the members of the club. This extends to celebrities from all walks of life. Many public rag scandals have come from machinations of the club, with the now fading star watching their glamour dissolve in front of their eyes. Those who have lived the high life often cannot continue once they are cast out.

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An interesting case was with “Jupiter”. They threw him a bit of a curveball, and elected a target from deep within the amazon forest. A tribesman with no significant concept of much outside his own village. He kidnapped the man in the night and proceeded to subject him to a clockwork orange-style lesson in the horrors and atrocities that have been committed by man. It took 3 days , but he clawed out his own eyes and died from the shock.

Now this brings us to You. You have been selected as the next target. My name is “Mercury” and you are my target. Knowing what you know now, why don’t you save us all some time and just swallow the goddamn capsule…

Credit To – The Silicon Lemming

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27 thoughts on “The Cabal”

  1. Ok, so, if people kept coming up to me and telling me I was in a coma..I would probably just say, “Thank god, I don’t have to go to work then” then kick them repeatedly screaming “ANARCHY!” because you know..it isn’t real.

  2. Random suicide pasta is… Good but should have been written better. The ending did feel really rushed witch brought me to mark it a 6/10 personally.

  3. 1) That ending would only work if I had a capsule next to me for whatever reason.

    2) Overall, this needs way more detail. The idea is solid, but the actual descriptions of the various events were underwhelming. It’s hardly terrifying to read that someone just plainly shot some other people. I’m not invested in those characters in any way at all to care.

    3) Even if the ending worked, and you made me believe I was the next target, I wouldn’t take the capsule because of 2). Without something truly scary to back it up, I feel like a lot of people would have the response “I’ll take my chances.”

    With all that said, I’d be interested in seeing this rewritten, with much more detail and some characters to actually hook us.

  4. Just a few questions…

    1. How do I join?

    2. Is the name system based on personality?

    3. If none of the above apply, where can I start this organization and not get caught.

  5. Reminds me a lot of the hostel movies, but the members can’t pay to play(or kill someone how they want to) good potential in this story if it was longer, not a good idea for a short pasta, just my opinion though

  6. In my opinion, this story did not entertain me at all, honestly and truthfully. Reading this all bored the crap out of me, it just didn’t progress. As if there was no major climax or interesting rising/falling action.. This author does have potential, they just need to work on a good hook to grab their reader’s attention.

  7. Oh dear. Mercury, you haven’t made the connection yet, have you? We can’t target club members, but then, you were never really a member. I told Loki that he was taking it too far, but he does like playing with his prey.

    As a bit of parting advice (I can’t let Loki overtake my record, now can I?), avoid women with red hair. Trust me, you’ll sleep better if you don’t know why.

  8. I thought this was a decent story. I loved the part about several people going up to one guy at different points and telling him “Wake up, you’re in a coma”. When I read that, I burst out laughing. Me and several of my friends have done that to people in the past. We would choose one random person on the street, and follow them without them noticing. Then, throughout the day, a different one of us would walk past them and quietly say things like “Wake up”, “This is all just a dream”, and “None of this is real”, then just keep walking as if nothing had happened. We have freaked out many a person doing that prank. XD

  9. I usually enjoy reading your stories but these last two have been very disappointing. This one made no sense to me either…I feel like you put so much detail into pieces of the story that are not as important as other parts that you lack detail in.

  10. This pasta had good potential, but, I didn’t really like the writing style Also, I don’t know why people feel the need to use the Lord’s name in vain. It’s so fucking disrespectful.

    1. depends on the god jeweljewel, not everyone follows a single religion after all.
      I could tell you some stories I personally have lived through that would make you wonder, from angels to demons to that which lay between our world is far more complicated then you may think. and sometimes 10 rules on a set of stone tablets isnt enough to guide you through what the world can truly offer.
      Many come for the scares, or the uneasy feelings they get from the stories that are posted here. I come to feel at home.

    2. Complaining about people using the lord’s name in vain, and then cussing is kind of contradictory… :/

      Also, I agree with BlackRose123. Not everyone is Christian, and for those of us who aren’t, saying things like “God damn it” does not pose a problem.

    3. The16thMartini

      Well I, for one, agree with Jewel on all counts. The writing style of this piece was horrendously overblown and I can’t stand it when some motherfucker has the goddamn audacity to take the name of Jesus Fucking Christ in vain. Is nothing sacred to you toadlicking shitkickers?

  11. Apart from a few grammatical errors here and there, I really enjoyed this story, at least until I got to the end.
    The ending felt rushed and wasn’t even vaguely creepy. I give it a solid 7/10 though as the rest really drew me in and made me want to know more about this club.

  12. So Ares tossed a loaded pistol to a boy after killing eight members of his family in front of his eyes? Why on Earth didn’t he just shoot Ares? And didn’t Ares realize tat such an action would likely end in him dying? That scene unsuspended my suspended belief with a passion.

    1. Because you’re supposed to make your target commit suicide. You are not allowed to kill them yourself.

      1. Ares tossed a loaded gun at his target after murdering eight members of his family. He got really lucky when the target did not respond by shooting him to death.

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