Scary Paranormal Stories & Short Horror Microfiction

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A man went to a hotel and walked up to the front desk to check in. The woman at the desk gave him his key and told him that on the way to his room, there was a door with no number that was locked and no one was allowed in there. Especially no one should look inside the room, under any circumstances. So he followed the instructions of the woman at the front desk, going straight to his room, and going to bed.

The next night his curiosity would not leave him alone about the room with no number on the door. He walked down the hall to the door and tried the handle. Sure enough it was locked. He bent down and looked through the wide keyhole. Cold air passed through it, chilling his eye. What he saw was a hotel bedroom, like his, and in the corner was a woman whose skin was completely white. She was leaning her head against the wall, facing away from the door. He stared in confusion for a while. He almost knocked on the door, out of curiosity, but decided not to.

This disinclination saved his life. He crept away from the door and walked back to his room. The next day, he returned to the door and looked through the wide keyhole. This time, all he saw was redness. He couldn’t make anything out besides a distinct red color, unmoving. Perhaps the inhabitants of the room knew he was spying the night before, and had blocked the keyhole with something red.

At this point he decided to consult the woman at the front desk for more information. She sighed and said, “Did you look through the keyhole?” The man told her that he had and she said, “Well, I might as well tell you the story. A long time ago, a man murdered his wife in that room, and her ghost haunts it. But these people were not ordinary. They were white all over, except for their eyes, which were red.”

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  • icarus

    I read quite a few of these stories before I went to bed. This one of two that stuck with me and really creeped me out.

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  • http://4chan.org Anon

    im sorry, but this is the lamest copypasta i’ve ever read. its been posted again and again and again

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    • Anonymous

      … Copy pasta? I think your eyes are exactly like the woman in this “copy pasta.”

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      • anon

        …he said copypasta cuz it was copy/pasted everywhere. -.-

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  • Lord Loss

    Hmm, this is kind of creepy kuz i had something similar happen to me except it was black instead of red, and i never asked about it.

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    • Awwwyeah

      Maybe because the keyhole was blocked…

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      • RDcracker

        I agree with this guy.

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    • https://www.facebook.com/rea.chan.33 Feda

      omg what was the story tell me !

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  • D

    The title ruins the surprise.

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    • ericmcmeric

      Not really…

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  • Yeah….

    It’s a really creepy, effective story. Thus far, it’s my favourite from this site. My only two problems with it is that, for starters… the way it’s written rushes the story along and ultimately makes the ending feel a little weird and incomplete. Also, the title completely ruins the surprise, and thus makes it entirely ineffective. The title should change to either “The Abandoned Room”, “The Pale Girl”, or simply “White with Red”.

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    • Mr. Dafuq

      It is called White with Red, moron

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      • lolidiot

        Maybe the title were changed since 2008… moron

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      • Cipiox

        It was changed, but you can see the original title in the URL.

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      • Mr. Dafuq

        You’re right. I’m an idiot. I’m gonna go kill myself. Enjoy your night.

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    • Anonymous

      Why not get it changed to “Keyhole” or “the room without a number?”

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      • Mimme

        i thought that “the keyhole” was the name of it, that’s what people call it on all the youtube videos.

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    • Your Name

      ‘The Pale Girl’ would ruin the suprise even more

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  • Just a Girl

    Change the title.
    Other than that, it’s creepy as hell.

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  • Aphia

    The name must have been changed today or yesterday, however I did not see it prior. What was the give-away name? “Red Eyes”?

    Is good. But rushed, yes.

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    • Biixerv

      It used to be called White With Red Eyes, but it was changed.

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  • Anonymous

    The first time I read it, it was titled “The Other Watcher.”

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  • Readman

    This one gave me shivers, and that doesn’t happen to me very often.

    I like it.

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  • Dammerung

    Reading this, I realize now that I so would have poked her in the eye. I mean, why is she so scary again? Oh no, a ghost with red eyes. A crazed woman high on weed, that’s scarier than some undead broad.

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  • Mezz

    This story scared the shit out of me.

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  • ScoolyardHero

    dammerung has a point but i think this is soo creepy is becuase the lady knew he was looking in there but then again how could she have known it’s not like when you look through a keyhole there’s a big red sign saying look at what im doing

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  • Miss Betterdone

    Hello.

    This would make a nice short scene in a film, and the climax could have been accompanied by a nice flinchy-jump sound.

    Maybe a pupil could have moved.

    Thank you for your time.

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    • Anonymous

      icarus: Quote

      Miss Betterdone:
      Hello.

      This would make a nice short scene in a film, and the climax could have been accompanied by a nice flinchy-jump sound.

      Maybe a pupil could have moved.

      Thank you for your time.

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  • Eilamme

    It’s not scary thinking about it, but when I read that I got that chill that usually goes down your back down my front. I guess that means it freaked me out doubly, or something.

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  • emogirl

    That was scary as hell. If he’d known the story earlier he might have died of shock or something.

    And what happens if you knock on the door?

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  • Pixie

    I like this one a lot. Before I read this version, I read a variant here:

    http://sayainunderworld.blogspot.com/2007/08/red-room.html

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  • http://yahoo.com I Was Phone

    Can you imagine how scary it would be when you relize you stareing strait into her eye?

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  • santi21xx

    One of my favorites :)

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  • BonerFruit

    Old but good.
    One of my first pastas.

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  • Foolish

    This is one of my favorites.

    Quite a shock at the end, despite the title.

    Although, when I first read this, I almost didn’t realize the connection. After about 5 seconds I shat bri/x/.

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  • oh gawd

    this is one of my fav pastas

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  • Fishyfishy

    So dat bitch was lookin at dat dood?? lololol

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  • Hot Sizzle

    i was phone, i woulda poked that bitch in that damn eye! ghost or not

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    • Attitude

      And she woulda poked you back.
      In your stomach.
      With a knife.

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  • ???

    @Dammerung

    stfu everyone knows you would have screamed like a little bitch if this actually happened to you :3

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  • __Dead__Man__

    Bri/x/ have been shat.

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