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It has been reported that some victims of rape, during the act, would retreat into a fantasy world from which they could not WAKE UP. In this catatonic state, the victim lived in a world just like their normal one, except they weren’t being raped. The only way that they realized they needed to WAKE UP was a note they found in their fantasy world. It would tell them about their condition, and tell them to WAKE UP. Even then, it would often take months until they were ready to discard their fantasy world and PLEASE WAKE UP
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Love using this one to fuck with people. I write it messily on a scrap of paper and leave it places.
THIS MADE ME HOLD MY BREATH FOR SECONDS.
WAKE UP
If someone tried to rape me they would already be dead…
Anyways, I rate this 3/10 and I will make no comment about why I chose this rating…It is inappropriate.
Sincerely,
Grim Gamer
omg im literally freaked out. im going to be so paranoid the next few days -____-
So Confused ;c
I Like To Go To Minecraft Servers And Post Signs That Just Say PLEASE WAKE UP
What I Don’t Like Is When People Capitalize Every First Letter In Every Word.
But I dun wanna!
OH MY LORD
At first I was like wtf…it took me a minute to get it
I’m stupid >..<
What if at the end of our lives is when our mind finally snaps out of it and we are returned to reality.
Doesn’t this tie into the Herobrine (Minecraft) legend somehow? It seems that every time Herobrine is mentioned this creepypasta is too.
What was the name of the story of a guy who was in a accident, a letter tells him to remember because his family is crying for him, twords the end if he didnt wake up and remember all of the details he would never wake up. i forget what the story was called, can anyone help me out?
THIS-CHANGES-EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great,love the implication.
http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110416035041/creepypasta/images/thumb/6/61/1290312635222.jpg/456px-1290312635222.jpg
no-one knows where this is from, do they? this actually stems from herobrine, a creepypasta in minecraft. the first hoax was when a guy was livestreaming, then faked a crash. a wall of random symbols would appear, but if you removed all of the text that wasn’t actual letters, this is what you would be left with.
Not likely.
This was posted on OCTOBER 21, 2008, and most likely originated before its posting here.
Minecraft wasn’t released until the following year. More likely that the guy you’re talking about was just a fan of this pasta.
Had to read this twice before I got it . Great pasta, gave me the creeps. Not extremely bone-chilling but a good read :) keep up the good work
This story reminds me of Matrix somehow…
Huh. Actually gave me shivers Lol.
Read about “catatonia” if this pasta chocks you. The state described here is often hard to get into though. It’s easier if you eat nothing and lay in your bed on the same side for a day or so straight, not sleeping a wink. I’ve gone (slightly) catatonic once, trying to escape vivid memories. I was able to leave my little sanctuary, but if I hadn’t – electroshocking would probably have been the only effective way to break me.
Gosh, call me a weenie, but I flinched a little at the end. XD
Written by someone who hasn’t actually been raped.
fuck some of you people really piss me off. ITS A FUCKING STORY AND ITS NOT SUPPOSED TO BE REALISTIC
This isn’t convincing because if this is a replica of the world I’VE seen and just a figment of my imagination and I just decided to take a random vacation to China it would just be a blank hole in the world and I don’t think your brain can just spawn random people you’ve never seen in your life. One more thing… Rape literally who the fuck is going to go in a fuckin coma because there getting raped. If your getting raped you just suck it up and deal with it like what kind of idiot falls asleep while getting raped come on.
if you want the real story, replace ‘rape’ with torture.
Not sure if this was copied from Herobrine or the other way around…
Either way, why would I want to wake up if I’m actually being raped?
I see what you did there. Clever, great concept, excellent delivery, but I would have chosen something different, like being in a coma from a traumatic accident, being strangled and that’s the only way to survive, or fighting a lobotomy.
Rape victims don’t do that. Trust me. There’s nothing that can take you out of the moment. No peace, no solace, and no freedom. That, in and of itself, is creepypasta.
I’M PRETTY SURE THAT MEANS I’M BEING RAPED.
NICE.
THEN WHO WAZ RAPIST?
I may be being raped… but me wants to wake up already XC
Best. Pasta. Ever.
THEN WHO IS RAPING ME?
HA HA I’M AN IDIOT, I DIDN’T NOTICE THIS ACTUALLY WAS POSTED TWO YEARS AGO!
So, yea, this is awesome. :P
I like this one, but this one is definitely so old it’s already been on the ED article of creepypastas for over an year now. It’s still awesome.
Also, the reading really needs more energy on the WAKE UP parts, especially the last one. The guy is monotonic…
Flood was here.
This makes you think….
Whoever’s world this is, please don’t wake up. I really like this world and I don’t want to die.
*looks around*
doesn’t look like a fantasy world to me tho
I didn’t get it till I read it a second time, then I was like “Holy shit, IT’S SUPPOSED TO BE ME!”
I’ve been getting raped for nearly 19 years?
This is one of my favorites!
Nomnomnomnom
god damnit ive been raped
This pasta is terrifying and makes me want to go get a titanium chastity belt to protect my junk. Also, I’m going to carry a couple of the brix that I’ve just shat in my purse to use as a weapon just in case.
What if you got raped in your fantasy world?
if someone tried to rape me, i would rape them back
I AM AWAKE DAMNIT SHUT UP
I read a much better version of this about horrendous torture, and the “wake ups” were more subtle, not IN BLOCK CAPITALS WHICH KIND OF DETRACTS FROM THE STORY I FIND.
I’ve read this before, but it wasn’t about rape – it was about torture and that subtle difference make it more effective.
>Implying she knew she was being raped
The orginal version of this pasta i read involved a coma patient. And it was a lot better.
Saying this about rape is just unbelievable, people don’t retreat into a fantasy world during rape , THEY GET RAPED. That’s why the girl is screaming no, or sobbing, and not smiling and talking about the unicorns.
The premises of this pasta is awesome. The execution is fail
OH GOD
OH GOD
If I may ask, why exacty does the title of this story have a question mark? Confusing.
Fear the Darkness
-Nex
As I am quite tired, it took me a minute to get this story. Subject matter made me deeply uncomfortable, so yeah it got under my skin….
It was better when it was torture.
oooohhh, that was clever. I like the whole “what if your reality is actually a figment of your imagination” thing. there’s so much to play with in that premise
I love it, it’s subtle in an obivious way. also, that anonymous comment ^^ is freaky.
WAKE UP DAMNIT
Saw this pasta before going to bed last night. Woke up and turned on the radio. “This can be a sweet dream or a beautiful nightmare. Either way I don’t wanna wake up.” Needless to say, bricks were shat.
WAKE UP
wake up.
Quite clever but the “rape” part killed it and made it stupid. Delete that part and try again. Guaranteed you’ll end up with the clever pasta i was referring to earlier.
So I’m being raped? Win :D
WAKE UP BITCH WAKE UP
I really think for this one to really scare the shit out of you, a friend needs to read it to you. My friend said it to me and my heart suddenly dropped. It just felt so personal, and I felt like I just woke up… :p weird as flonkk
What happens if I’m raped in this fantasy world and also: WHARS MY MAGIC POWERZ, THAT’S MY FANTASY!
Funny and creepy, nice.
this story is so bs
..wat
wait so, i’m being raped? then how would i
OH SHI-
I also saw this as an image. I also saw a replica featuring the same idea but suggesting I was in some form of coma. Well done.
Lol… first time I saw this was as an image…. instead of being caps, the WAKE UP text was faded out. I shat brix then, as I just did now.
Though, if I am being raped, I don’t think I want to WAKE UP
So who was…
OH SWEET LORD MY ASS!! IT BURRNSSSS!!
not nearly convincing enough
I’ve read this one before, only it was torture instead of rape.
I thought the original was being tortured instead of raped?
BUT WHO WAS PEDO-BEAR?
My friend printed this out and put it in my book bag without me knowing ): very scary.
D: D: D: D: D: D: D: D:
This scared the crap outta me…
i wouldnt want to wake up
i will never wake up i probably will die
hmm what if i DONT waant to wake up hmmm!? I’ll just stay in my coma thank you lol
okay, ngl, this creeped me out
especially the “it could take months” bit, ughh
who was wake?
BUT WHO WAS VICTIMS!!
God, this is just awful, I mean this site is okay but some of the things that end up here are just terrible. What the hell is the point of this? It’s not creepy, it makes no sense with this stupid ‘Rape victims retreat into a fantasy world’ statement pulled from nowhere and it just seems petty and exploitive to use rape in such a stupid context with your horrid little “You’re being raped! Whattatwist!” Gag.
Feggedaboudit. It happens everywhere you go.
Don’t listen, being awake sucks, brb bed
i’m being raped? ;D
Ned Beatty needs to WAKE UP
I feel dumb…first I didn’t get it, I’m like, “Why is it capital-OOOHHHH”
Is that sum fukken Futurama?
I fantasize about being raped.
totally ineffective creepypasta.
THEN WHO WAS RAPE!?
This one sucks. Changing torture to rape diminished the impact.
I’m being raped whilst I type this? Crap/
FLAMING BRICKS WERE SHAT
@74
DAMN YOU!!!!
i can has a halp plz ?
GO AWAY, WEEGEE! WHY THE HELL DO YOU SHOW INTEREST IN KITTEN’S VAGINAS!?
so I was just raped? O.o
I don’t know why, but…this one scares the living shit out of me.
Stop saying you want to WAKE UP.
I’m not done yet.
@ skippy.
that’s the best idea ever. I’m printing this out at school and leaving it around
Someone print this out and leave it in a public place somewhere.
Holy shit that’s scary. Excellently written.
You can’t rape the willing. :D
I’M BEING RAPED SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT
‘this one horrifies me, especially because, near my house, the words “WAKE UP” are stencilled on a white wall three times.”
OH SH-
this one horrifies me, especially because, near my house, the words “WAKE UP” are stencilled on a white wall three times.
i am a heron. i haev a long neck and i pick fish out of the water w/ my beak. if you dont repost this comment on 10 other pages i will fly into your kitchen tonight and make a mess of your pots and pans
Nobody cares.
I’ve been through like, half this site now and this is still one of my favorites. Its kind of sad and unsettling.
Holy shit. This creepy pasta kicked so much more ass for me since I was raped when I was a kid!
…wait…
No bullshit by the way.
..I’m not hot enough to be raped. U.U
DUDE YOU BEING RAPE WAKE UP
dumbfucks dont know what disociation is.
also isnt a fantasy world, you just “escape” from yourself.
Good one, but the writer forgot. I’m the one doing all the raping!
Clever.
I hope my world is real
Lol @ Mr. Welldone, That’s exactly what a rapist would say =P
I liked this one, short and simple It really says Is the world really as you see it? or are you just covering up something nasty without even realizing it? and at the same time hiding as a simple statement of a fact apparently unrelated to the reader… It’s believable, and the fact that it says rape may get people thinking ‘well its obviously not about me!’ but it could definately be any horrible even that drasticly changes your life or your perception of yourself. excelent pasta.
…meh.
[as long as i don’t get raped]
also @47 — who was phone doesn’t fucking write these, mkay? nor does any one person. it’s a collective of other folks’ work.
and in any case, if you think it’s that bad, then don’t read.
it’s that simple.
fkfsdkhjsfd.
this one gave me the creeps a bit.
well-written mindfuck = amazing!! :)
also, @25, you were not the only one nerding out at the end of this. because that totally came to mind for me too. xD
@ 51 = srsly :c
Clever. I like.
mindfuck much?
OH SHI-
Now I will constantly wonder whether my ass is safe or not. Thanks alot…jerk.
It didn’t work.
That must be one hard raping.
Ah shit… the rest of that didn’t show up in my text window, so I couldn’t alter it.:D
It has been reported that some victims of rape, during the act, would retreat into a fantasy world from which they could not STOP WRITING SHITTY PASTA. In this catatonic state, the victim lived in a world just like their normal one, except they weren’t being raped. The only way that they realized they needed to STOP WRITING SHITTY PASTA was a note they found in… fantasy world. It would tell them about their condition, and tell them to WAKE UP. Even then, it would often take months until they were ready to discard their fantasy world and PLEASE WAKE UP
THEN WHO WAS RAPE?
Hmm.
Now, heres a Pime Teradox for you all…
What happens if you read this, THEN get raped?
OH WHAT THE FUCK. Lmfao. It took me like 4 minutes to figure this out. Anyway, interesting. And odd..
ohmehgawd. that was good.
Pime Taradox!
Dude… I come by every once in a while…
I had a dream last night about being raped by some demon stud repeatedly and woke up sick and not going to work.
So I start my browser, do my stuff, log on creepypasta.com…
And I see this one…
DUDE!!
Fuck, I was probably asking for it. I’m such a slut.
@Sarah
Don’t wake up yet, I’m not done.
I was just thinking about this one today. Wierd.
Haha, I was wondering whether you had posted this one or not.
I loled
All I have to say is that you cant rape the willing.
;D
Seriously though, nice pasta. Simple, but just creepy enough.
Oh no my butt!
Brix were shat!
^That’s probably why my butt hurts…probably.
Ohhhh…I’ve read this somewhere before, and I never got it until now.
Remember kids, it’s not rape, it’s just surprisebuttschmex!
Neat, one actually based in reality. Yeah, this actually does happen to rape victims, as well as victims of other trauma. It’s a self defense mechanism.
I’m not quite sure how accurate the description of the fantasy world and the “Wake Up” are, but it does make for a very interesting premise. Perhaps it would be possible to piggyback another pasta off of this idea?
Why would my fantasy world be filled with so much murder, hate, racism, and rape (irony)? Wouldn’t people imagine themselves a world where they were the President or their wife was Jessica Alba?
It’s not suggesting so much that you’re being raped right now as much as it’s suggesting that you’re living in a reality you created for yourself and you need to WAKE UP so you can actually deal with it.
Five more minutes…
Not cool… ;_;
reminds me of the episode of Futurama called ‘The Sting’ where Leela falls into a coma and Fry is constantly telling her to wake up, in all the dreams she has
He insulted our fat queen!
Hello.
Beautiful.
PLEASE…WAKE UP
So anyone who reads this is being raped ?
Decent, but just too unbelievable
reminds me of UCB, where at the end of all the episodes, you find out none of it was real, and some austronaut was being raped the whole time.
I love that series.
D: For some reason, that scared the crap out of me.
Thanks.
Thanks a lot.
Wow, took me until the very edn to get it. Awesome, except I’m pretty sure I wasn’t raped….Maybe another tramautic event can replace the rape?
Oh noes, I’m being buttraped.
Yeah, fucking right.
BUT WHO WAS RAPIST?
im being raped?!?? :c DAMN PEDO BEAR !
*CRY*
Wow.
I really liked this one alot. I showed my friend and she liked it too.
No snarky comments from REKKUSU on this one!
But who was catatonic state?
Old.
I dont wanna wake up, i like my fantasy world. its a bitch but at least im not being raped here.
True dat.
wait,is that suggesting im being raped??the whole paqrt at the end???? w/e,on to ritualmagick.
hey i just logged onto the computer n sez the name i just used here was mr vercetti.
i didn’t use that name!!!!\
who did?
Maybe someone who recently came over
This reminded me of ToeJam & Earl.
…wake up…wake up, wake up…wake up…wake up…WAKE UP!!!!!!
Why would I want to wake up then?
To Anonymous 5: IT WAS YOU!
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-
THEN WHO WOKE UP?
You have to wake up.
Please. I beg you.
No one yet
Head exploded.
I always see this one around
It’s a good concept
I love this one. By the way, a guy with the ID SCPantera makes neat little audio versions of creeypastas on Youtube. He has adapted this one, and it is really good.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CVhSe1vltYA
PLEASE WAKE UP
I read something like this about Herobrine. Lolaherpderp.
Me too