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  1. John Syd
    September 8, 2012

    Ma.

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  2. Alberto N.
    September 8, 2012

    Wow, that was amazing! Great descriptions and plot, using the point-of-view of someone (or something) other than the victim or killer brought a whole new aspect to a story so simple as a stabbing. Some typos, of course, but after 5 more minutes on the stove and a pinch of salt in the sauce, this pasta will be scrumptious!
    nom nom nom

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  3. blah
    September 9, 2012

    what the hell did I just read?

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  4. AssHat
    September 9, 2012

    The ending was perfect.

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  5. TVATR
    September 9, 2012

    Creative, but….the story being told from a knife’s point of view is a little dumb, don’t you think?

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  6. Dirjel
    September 11, 2012

    Wow. That was spectacularly awful.

    I… really… there is no upside. I guess the IDEA to write from the knife’s perspective is interesting, but it was poorly executed, there was no setup, the plot was boring, and the writing… it BURNS.

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  7. Drea
    September 15, 2012

    Omg, i love your story’s point of view! Never before have i read a story from the point of view of an inanimate object. That was awesome. You should consider adding some more plot to future stories. I think you have great potential.

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  8. Endoplasmic Reticulum
    January 12, 2013

    For a while I thought that this was what a robot was thinking.

    Interesting twist

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  9. Duh
    July 10, 2013

    I knew it was the knife.

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  10. FlowerChild
    July 25, 2013

    The idea of this pasta was fantastic! The execution.. not so much. I think it would have been better if you did not let the reader know the story was being told from the point of view of the knife. Would have been better if revealed at the end of the pasta. Also, try to keep the context a bit simpler in your next pasta. Don’t try to bombard the pasta with a lot of big, complex wording.

    Over all, 7.5/10!

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  11. Knife.
    October 24, 2013

    Yes, it was I.

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