Thump, Thump… Drag.

June 1st, 2008 by WHO WAS PHONE?

A teenage baby-sitter put the kids she was watching to sleep in their beds and went back downstairs. The late night news was on the TV — the reporter said a psychopath from a local mental institution was on the loose and that police thought he might be in the area. He cautioned residents to lock their doors and windows because this guy was very, very dangerous.

Well, the teenager checked the locks on the windows and the doors, but she forgot the door on the cellar bulkhead. Needless to say, the psychopath broke in about an hour later, coming up from the cellar, armed with an ax. The children heard some noises downstairs, but thought it was the baby-sitter moving some furniture around. Then it got real quiet.

All they heard for the remainder of the night was this noise: “Thump! Thump! Dra-aag… Thump! Thump! Dra-aag…” Evidently, they were too afraid to get up to see what it was. In the morning, their parents came home and were horrified to find the babysitter at the top of the stairs, dead with both arms hacked off at the elbows. She’d been climbing the stairs on the bloody stumps of her arms, pulling her badly injured body along. Was she trying to check on the children? Was she trying to get help? Or in the madness of her tortured soul, was she planning to kill the children herself?

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Posted in Murders & Deaths


62 Responses

  1. invisibillie

    This was the first ever one I heard ^_^

  2. Calypso

    This is the first creepypasta I read, and it actually scared me at the time.

  3. Anon

    how does she plan to kill them without arms or hands?

  4. Anonymous

    maybe she intends to bite em to death?

  5. Anonymous

    Maybe she’s a champion kickboxer.

  6. meowmixkid

    she wasn’t trying to kill them. I think she was trying to warn them

  7. Anonymous

    That’s not funny, my brothder died that way

  8. Anonymityrex

    So if her arms were cut off at the elbows…why did she not just stand up and walk up the stairs to the children? She must not have wanted to drink their sweet goo badly enough.

  9. Anonymous

    This is retarded, why couldn’t she just yell or someshit but had to drag drag thump her way up a buncha stairs?

  10. Anonymous

    Ok ok thats a little freakay and umm why didnt she just walk up the stairs instead of using her arms..or a quarter of an arm……

  11. blooooop

    this is totally my new favorite :)

  12. Rabidrogue

    Bloodloss would make her to weak to walk? Rofl, I dunno. I like this story.

  13. Anon E. Muss

    Well, it does say she was pulling her “badly injured” body, so maybe she couldn’t have walked if she wanted to.

    Regardless, this is one of the few good scary stories I’ve found lately. Kudos, Creepypasta! :)

  14. Just a Girl

    Bitch could have sucked it up and walked. Or kicked the living shit out of the attacker.

  15. Sedgewick

    Why didn’t she beat the attacker with her stumps? or squirt blood in his eyes?

  16. Readman

    I mean no offense, but I think several people are forgetting that she was dragging her BADLY INJURED body by bloody stumps.

    She couldn’t walk because her legs could have suffered a whack from the SHARP AXE.

    She couldn’t yell because the axe probably PUNCTURED A LUNG.

    Why couldn’t she fight back? I’d like to see you fight an axe-wielding madman with your BARE HANDS, an later your BARE STUBS.

    Besides, not everyone is a Painless Mcgee. She would have had trouble fighting back after the first hack, let alone however many it took to leave her a crawling, bleeding, armless lump of flesh.

  17. Big Samus

    She wasn’t going up the stairs to kill the children, she was going up there to see if they were killed also.

    She didn’t yell to them because either she was injured, or she didn’t want the murderer to know that they were there. She simply waited till he left and then went to warn them.

  18. Ed

    I have an agrument to explain all the plot holes.
    The author didn’t think it all the way through.

  19. Anonymous

    kind of reminds me of the black knight scene

  20. Fluffy

    But..

    Who was thump?!

  21. Anonymous

    More important than how she would kill the children is WHY WOULD SHE DO THAT!? That last sentence kind of seems tacked on in a vain effort to be spooky, but it kind of took away from the whole for me. Otherwise I found it a good throwback to primordial baby-sitter scary stories.

  22. Mr. Welldone

    Hello.

    Nonsensical and mundane, but with a purpose nonetheless.

  23. fkhjs g

    fuck this fucking shit gave me a fucking boner

  24. Ennuyé

    If I was her and the bad guy went away and I had no arms at the end of my elbows I’d spin so my blood sprayed everywhere and I could pretend to be a sprinkler until I eventually passed out and died from blood loss.
    At least I’d die happy =/

  25. emogirl

    Yeah because everyone wants to be a sprinkler before they die. It’s everyone’s life long dream.

  26. Royal-Sovereign

    @ 23

    WHAT.

    Also, this one was fairly good. Last sentence was totally superfluous, though.

  27. x

    I’ve heard this one before. Read it in a book of scary stories when I was like… 6.

  28. diana

    Just a Girl, the bitch isn’t hitmonlee.

  29. TBALLS

    hahahahah wtfff Ennuyé;

    that made me laugh so hard

  30. some guy

    anon 19

    I’M INVINCIBLE!

  31. I WAS THUMP

    U GUZ R MEEN JFD;A,.K Z KL,.SXZL,.

  32. Foolish

    “Besides, not everyone is a Painless Mcgee”

    Or Russel.

    You know, I actually kind of suspect that she went mad with the pain, because what logic is there in putting so much effort into dragging herself upstairs? Unless she, as readman pointed out, punctured a lung, she could have at least called someone on a phone.

    Well, I guess in that case it would make sense to go upstairs and alert the children.

    Actually, come to think of it, how can someone be driven mad in such a short space of time? Unless the pain was the worst in the history of mankind. And, of course, unless she WAS driven mad, there would be no reason to kill the children, as they had no place in her maiming.

    The ending (more specifically, the last sentence) is too confusing. I, too, think that the author should have left her motives ambiguous, as opposed to listing her possible motives. It would have made the story just a tad more shocking, and spookier.

    Overall, thinking about it is making my head hurt.

  33. Hot Sizzle

    man that was weird
    anyone find out WHO PHONE WAS yet??

  34. Mr Man

    Just a girl
    your right she shoulda suck it up

  35. lalalala

    #24 & 25 made me laugh xD

    i liked this story, even though i think the last sentence wasn’t needed.

  36. Icecry0

    I found this scary, once I read the comments though I was laughing to death. THANKS FOR RUINING THE MOMENT

  37. PoopyButthair

    She was trying to bring the kids a sandwhich even though she wa sint hat much pain, it was the only thing she ever knew how to do…the kids never got there sandwhich *Sniff*

  38. dark times

    I loved this one. I think that she was trying to warn them. This gave me the creeps me out big time too.

  39. Jumbo Shrimp

    I was just about to make fun of this story… but then an image of a bloody, armless baby-sitter lunging at me in attempt to eat my face flashed infront of me.
    I’m scared now.

  40. UndeadBuddah

    37, that was a good laugh, thank for your contribution. 39, here’s a sandwich, it’ll be ok champ.

  41. MooMoon

    hmmmm…so that what happened to my sandwich

  42. drippingblood

    That nearly scared me I enjoyed it though. Yet I already new that the hidding in the basment was coming , because of the movies and the baby sitter thing.

  43. SKX

    That’s not fair. All she wanted to do was read them a bedtime story.
    Why is the world so cruel to little children?!

  44. Anonymous

    What are you going to do, bleed on me?

  45. Psycho with axe

    shit there were kids up there? I’ve still got work to do…

  46. MVO

    This creepypasta was kind of dissapointing because of the ending, oh yes I want to kill the children because I was attacked by a psycho, yes cause that’s my first reaction after being assaulted by some fucked up dude with an axe. Why even throw in that last sentence lol, it wasn’t needed.

  47. DJLoONa

    i don’t care who you are, you’re arms get hacked off you’re gonna scream in agony…and therefore the kids wouldve woken up and wouldve raced down the steps like dumb ass kids and wouldve been sliced n diced along with the babysitter

    and lmao at 45
    XD

  48. Justin

    Why didnt she just walk up the stairs?

  49. ARGHHH

    SWEET YOU DON’T HAVE TO PAY HER!!!

  50. Christobob

    you kiddin, DJ?
    fuck, man. any screams in my house and i fucking hid.
    what kind of fucktarded kids run downstairs?

  51. The Black Knight

    She’d lost both her arms? Bah. ’tis just a flesh wound.

  52. Anonymous

    why did the attacker come threw the cellar

  53. drippingblood

    EEEEEK!THIS ONE GAVE ME THE HEEBE JEEBIES BUT I DO ENJOY READING IT.

  54. Anonymous

    Maybe she was the psychopath killer, and went to chop the kids up. Since she was so psychopathic….she beat herself up and cut off her own arms…

    o.O

  55. DJLoONa

    @ christobob
    baby u were clearly smarter than most children…<3

  56. shortys roc my sox

    @ christobob,
    i wouldn’t hide i would clime out my window and leave the house
    i’m a scaredy cat and if i heard thump thump… drag i would be out of that house faster than a cheetah could attack its prey

  57. DJ LoONa

    i’d probably just piss myself and stay in bed, or lock myself in the bathroom =\

  58. pastamuncher

    @4 kk dude,maybe,shell do the thign that the zombies in house of the dead do whe nyou blow their rms aff and spin theyre heads really fast and hop it will hit you,lol,just blow theyre legs off too :P

  59. Para

    Ohgod the comments. They totally ruined the moment, but goddammit I love everyone who posted something nonsensical. xDD

  60. Anonymous

    greet pasta, (although i like the premise of the last sentence, it could have been better done)
    fantastic comments
    I laughed out loud for 10 minutes at 45’s comment XD

  61. shortys roc my sox

    @ 45 omk lol :)

  62. Anonymous

    Think of that last sentence this way: If you just got chopped up by some crazy-assed axe-motherfucker just because you were defending some ungrateful little brats for minimum wage, wouldn’t you be a wee bit pissed off at the spoiled twerps upstairs?

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