Scary Paranormal Stories & Short Horror Microfiction

Creepypasta

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The native villagers around these parts say that there’s a stretch of tundra just north of here that is occupied by benevolent spirits. These spirits grant insight and warning to whoever visits them at night, once the sun has disappeared entirely and left the world in jet darkness. I drove out to the middle of the frozen expanse of ice and waited, hoping to catch a glimpse of whatever commanded these people’s reverence. They send their children out, bundled in furs to keep from freezing, on the eve of their 15th birthday to seek an audience with these spirits. Once they have achieved this, the children run home to their parents to share the news. From then on these children are considered adults in the village. Engaged couples visit this tundra on the night before their wedding. The entire village stays up all night awaiting their return, as it is upon their return that the couple either decides to proceed with their marriage, or to abandon it. The elderly visit the tundra whenever they are sick or ailing, and often make their condition worse by staying all night in the cold. When they return, however, it is most often with an air of sheer serenity.

So I waited, curious to see what phenomenon might inspire people so powerfully. I waited for hours, bundled in my parka and sitting on the hood of my pickup. I waited until I felt that I was going to freeze to death, even in my thick clothing.

I heard the spirit before I saw it. A crunching of snow in the silence made me jump off my truck and spin around. A hunched, gray-skinned man stood a few meters away. Sad, yellowed eyes stared back at me, set inside a skull from which sprouted only a few greasy hairs. He breathed heavily, with a rattle that shook his fragile ribcage, and one of his arms looked as if it had been messily broken and then neglected, allowing it to knit back together imperfectly. Badly scarred flesh marred his splayed legs. The man stared at me for perhaps ten seconds, breathing in the frigid air and exhaling a sickly dribble of steam, before disappearing when I blinked my eyes.

I spun around, looking for the man, but he was truly gone. Approaching where he had stood, I found a pair of bloody footprints in the snow. Frantic with fear, I got into my pickup and headed for the village as fast as the ice would allow. A few villagers were waiting for me when I arrived, knowing that I had gone out and curious as to what might happen. I hastily got out of my truck and, approaching the nearest villager, I demanded, “What is so benevolent about these spirits? What is so insightful? How do these spirits help you?”

“What did you see?” he asked, the look on his face now mirroring the fear in mine.
“I saw a man, horribly disfigured and desperately sick!” I screamed into his face, and the rest of the villagers around us backed away a step. “Why? What does that mean?” I begged him.
“The spirits show only one thing,” the man explained. “They show their visitors, a year in the future.”


Credited to David Feuling.

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  • Carolina

    That was pretty good. Creepy ending. Poor guy for whatever happened to him.

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  • Guy

    Fist post!
    Also, ending seemed a bit too obvious once it started describing in detail the injuries of the old man/future guy.

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    Rating: -10 (from 14 votes)
  • Shan.

    Aww, poor kid.

    Really good story, though.

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  • Sinn

    I really liked this one

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    Rating: +3 (from 5 votes)
  • Heather

    I sure liked this!

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  • MisterVercetti

    Vedy, vedy interesting.

    I liked it much.

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    Rating: +1 (from 3 votes)
  • Niptuck

    Good one. Ending was not so impressive.

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  • Anonymous

    I gotta say this…

    It’s a must…

    Who was phone?

    XD

    Nice pasta… XD

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  • http://www.mybloghasadd.blogspot.com Addish

    Creepy. I feel so sorry for that dude.

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  • NISIOSIN

    So that vision is of the guy with the truck?

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  • ggg

    man that was a good one.

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  • ben dover

    didn’t like this that much

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  • Anomalous

    I kinda liked this one, it’s the first pasta in a while that genuinely sent a chill through me at the end

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    Rating: +4 (from 6 votes)
  • Feaster of Fear

    Hrm….I sort of liked this pasta…..almost like a ritual pasta told from the perspective of someone who performed it, and yet…..it doesn’t lack a storyline. It even has a twist at the end, albeit a bit predictable. All in all, I say this is a good pasta.

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    Rating: +8 (from 8 votes)
  • Sebastian

    Tasty!

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  • katie

    i really liked this one!

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  • Anonymous

    well I guess someone’s gonna become a shut-in.

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  • Cthulhu

    Poor guy

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  • Haha

    SO WHO WAS FUTURE SELF???

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  • Anonymous

    BUT THEN WHO WAS I?

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  • Mookster

    varying degrees of like were attributed to this pasta

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    Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
  • http://myspace.com/darkwolf4ever Father Crow

    OH SHI-
    That was awesome.

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  • Resi

    Wow. That was good.

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  • Diddler

    I found it enjoyable if not a little predictable. I really liked the description of the man in the future, though.

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  • blahhh

    mmmm… i just wasnt ‘feeling’ this one.

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