Scary Paranormal Stories & Short Horror Microfiction

Creepypasta

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Next time when you’re lying in bed and the moon is new, when you’re at the moment where you’re almost asleep and your eyes are closed…try listening for the sounds. More specifically, sounds that shouldn’t exist in our realm. At this point, you’ll notice the world around you change, but don’t you dare open your eyes or make any movements.

If you lay right where you are, with your eyes closed, you’ll feel something trace a finger, a claw, or perhaps something even worse, across your forehead. The moment it stops tracing, you’ll wake up and it will be morning. Within that new week, you will die.

However, depending on what was traced on your head, you’ll either enter a paradise of a world, or you’ll enter an evil world of torture.

So…do you want to find out what’s on the other side?

ETA: It’s my birthday! But I’m still knocked out with a stomach virus, which is why I was late with the pastas again, sorry =(

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  • Flea

    Happy friggin’ birthday~! I hope your natural awesomeness kicks in soon to clear our the sickness. Poor dear. Try and enjoy yourself!

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  • Z

    WWP: Happy birthday, and I hope your virus clears up soon. :D

    As for the pasta… I really don’t think it would be worth it. o.O I personally wouldn’t want to chance it, although I can see if others would.

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  • Hippie

    Happy birthday!
    hope you feel better soon!

    nice story

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  • Stefanie

    Happy birthday Phone. Maybe your stomach virus will go away within the next few days and you can celebrate your birthday just slightly late. :D

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  • Aspire

    Happy Birthday! Thanks for all your hard work!

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  • Manduwala

    Happy birthday Phone, drink lots of water and may all your tracings invoke paradise.

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  • BonerFruit

    Of course, happy birthday Phone and thanks for keeping the website afloat.

    This pasta, I kinda like.
    Again with the whole, “is it worth it to prove this creepypasta?”

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  • Sigma

    “A finger, a claw,
    OR SOMETHING WORSE”
    Does anyone else LOL at a interpretation of that?

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    • Anonymous

      Now what naughty thoughts are you thinking about? eue

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    • Cleanandsober

      Eeeewwww GROSS!! Yeah, the possibilities are endless!

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  • MooMOo

    happy b-day !!!

    i had somthing wrong with my tummy once ….i thought i was going to die so i wrote out a will ( i was 7 or 8)

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  • blackneonsharpie

    at sigma: I didn’t until you mention it. Now I don’t WANT to know what it could possibly be.

    This is one of those rituals that I will NEVER try, unless, of course, I’m suicidal.

    Happy birthday, and I hope you feel better. :D

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  • Foolish

    A happy happy birthday to ya, WHO WAS PHONE ! I hope it’s filled with all things good n’creepy!

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  • Foolish

    @Sigma – Good grief. Now I get it. LOL.

    Very good ‘pasta, BTW. Nice work, WWP.

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  • ???

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY WHO WAS PHONE~~~~

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  • Dru

    Happy Birthday Phone! hope you feel better soon! Being sick sucks.

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  • Comment Leaver

    Happy birthday!!!!!!!!!! I hope you feel better. :/

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  • oh gawd

    wow this was good and hape b-day phone

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  • Maz

    @8

    I know I do.

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  • Toad

    @Sigma

    Like a penis?

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  • Foolish

    AUGH. Comments are acting weird.

    I already posted this in the forums, but I’ll say it again. Have a happy, happy birthday, full of all things good n’creepy! FEEL BETTER SOON!

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  • Luke

    Happy late birthday Phone I hope you feel better. I had a flu once it was bad and I was sick for ages I only got better when I visited CandleJa

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  • http://www.youtube.com/user/P4INKiller P4INKiller

    Happy birthday Phone!

    Anyway, this pasta wasn’t that believable due to the fact that I always end up in that particular state, except I never feel anything on my forehead.
    That’s right before my lucid dream starts.

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  • Sigma

    Toad #18, exactly.

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  • r

    WWP: sorry to hear you’re still sick. also, happy belated birthday.. though given the circumstances, you should celebrate a week’s worth once you’re better to commemorate your good health thus far and in hopes on many years of great constitution to come!

    i thoroughly enjoy this site. it actually helps me sleep at night while in bed.

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  • r

    oh yeah. that last statement was a bit unclear. i meant to heartily thank you for keeping this site up. when i stop being so broke, i’ll ‘buy you lunch’ one of these days. :3

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  • thepizzaelemental

    Sigma are the Wind beneath my Wings.

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