Scary Paranormal Stories & Short Horror Microfiction

Creepypasta

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There are beings not of this world. They call themselves “The Sumi”. Now that you know – they also know of you.

During WW2, Nazi medium Maria Orsitsch made the first (recorded) successful telepathic contact with them. After years of communication at the behest of her SS superiors she was abruptly taken in 1945 and never seen or heard from since. It has become clear that they view us as little more than lab rats to be studied from afar through means unknown to us, possibly powerful psychic abilities or technology unheard of to date. Anyone who knows about them is now considered a threat to their “tests” and someone or something will be sent after you.

In less than a day, you’ll start experiencing the sensation of not being alone anymore, anywhere. As it gradually homes in on your location through time and space you’ll start to catch its reflection or see its blurred outline becoming gradually clearer over the course of a week. After that it’ll start making physical entry into our reality and in less than a month it’ll grab you and you’ll never be heard from or seen again.

I write this so that someone might find a way to stop them, if only as a last desperate act. God help us all!

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  • RazDaz

    This is a great one. It really plays with you mind.

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  • Shuriken

    Sounds to me like you wrote it to be a deuche.

    … Asshole.

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  • Comment Leaver

    Ugh…Why can’t people just stop these things before they start. This dude just killed so many people.

    Overall good pasta but I don’t like the pointless reason he gives for having written it.

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  • God

    Fuck no. Why the hell would I help you all?
    Assholes.

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  • The Sumi #9302

    We have come to eat your fleeeesh.

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    • Endoplasmic Reticulum

      When you said fleeesh it looked to me like fleece. Lol

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  • SamStone22

    It doesn’t go into much detail. I don’t really care to much for this one.

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  • lostmyselfalongtheway

    Just great, now I have the sumi running after me along with the others. I better board up the cabin and load my gun while I still have time.

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  • crimson

    shit a biscut….

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  • Royal-Sovereign

    …hot fucking damn that was dumb.

    “Sumi”, what, are they lawyers? (lol get it “sue me”)

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    • lilac

      lol true lol!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • http://www.neopets.com/userlookup.phtml?user=silent_doom_tonight Jumbo Shrimp

    So I can add Sumi to the list of supernatural beings after my flesh and blood?
    Excellent.
    As if I don’t have enough already.
    And Candlejack, don’t even pretend your after me. How many times have I said your name? You’re never go

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  • Skwirral

    the writer is working for the Sumi! he’s writing this, because apparently if you know about them, they know about you. so everyone who reads this gets found out and “disappears” in a month. how is this helpful to anyone!? clearly it’s a conspiracy to get more victims for them.

    and since no one has done it yet…WHO WAS SUMI?

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    • Captian Obvious strikes again

      Nice one, did you figure that all by yourself, Sherlock?

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  • Cyarm

    I love that…

    Essentially… if this were true, I’d be very pissed off… because essentially… the story comes off as this…

    “I know about the sumi… and now that you know about them as well, you’re screwed too. IF I’M DYING, I’M DRAGGING YOU DOWN WITH ME! NOW HELP ME FIND OUT WHAT TO DO NEXT ASSHOLE!”

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  • Anonymous

    This is like losing the game or something. Fucking asshole writer.

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  • Debbie

    Man, there are so many “they’ll come and get you”-stories…
    Therefore: Please, Carmen Winstead, Jessica Smith, Lisa Smith, Candlejack, Bloody Mary, Uba-Yo-Sare, The Sumi and all the others line up, I’ll be there in a second!

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  • Sasu

    This is one of the better ones I’ve read.

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  • Miss Betterdone

    BUT THEN WHO WAS LAB RAT?

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  • Darkest

    This *is* like losing the game. Either you help this little prick out, or he kills us all with him.

    Asshat.

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  • Harry P. Ness

    I just lost the game.

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  • LAB RAT

    Here I am!

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  • Asshat

    Dhd somebody call me?

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  • Comment Leaver

    You know what’s amazing? You can actually *win* the game. I have.

    It’s online and it is the greatest thing ever.

    But really Sumi dude, get a life.

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    • LOST THE GAME

      The sequel is even more awesome

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  • life

    i liked this one i’ve heard it on other sites. it reminds me of the chain messages on youtube. in fact i think the last time i read it was about a month ag

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  • Anon

    Sounds to me like you’re just an ass, not like you’re asking for help.

    Screw you.

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  • Kate

    Shit. I just lost the game.

    :[

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  • The person formerly known as ‘Noneya’

    I truly love all of the funny commentors.

    Its like, ‘OMG SCARY STORY AHH!’

    Then

    ‘Oh, LOL at number’s 4, 12, 16, and 19″
    :-D

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