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Before you read my girlfriend’s side of the story, you may want to read my first post that also contains last night’s unfortunate update. Here is the update copy/pasted:

Okay guys, I realize I am a bit late with my girlfriend’s story, but when you read my latest update, you’ll see that I was quite consumed with what was happening to us. Nothing happened since the incident last night. Police called to check in with us this morning; they still have no clue what is going on really.

So her story… Let me begin by telling you a bit about us. As I said before, I was born in Bosnia, moved to a nearby country in Balkans where I grew up. I came to the US over 6 years ago. My girlfriend was born in India, grew up in Kenya until she was 3, when she moved to Canada. I met her little over a year ago, and we’ve been together since.

So, my girl, let’s call her Lila, did have few encounters with Rose. First one that she remembers was on the plane. She was a flight attendant for Air Canada for several years. One day, about 6 years ago, she was flying her regular flight, but she can’t remember what destination it was. It lasted maybe two hours. Once they took off and seat-belt signs went away, she got up to serve complimentary drinks. Halfway through her section, she met Rose. She didn’t know it at the time, of course. She said that something was terribly off about the woman; she had this creepy grin on her face, was really pale and kept staring at her. When Lila offered her a drink and some snacks, she got no answer, only a wider and creepier fucking smile. Then, Rose spoke.

“I have something for you.” She said in a voice that definitely wasn’t natural for a woman her age. Her voice belonged more to a teenager than an adult. There was something playful but terrifying in it.

Now, Lila has seen some shit while flying, so she wasn’t taken back by this interaction.

“Yea? What would that be, ma’am?”

“Don’t patronize me, you bitch.” She said that fast. Like really fast. Her jaw was closed while saying that. Then she started grinding her teeth, never letting go of that fucking smile. This was a red flag for Lila. When passengers get aggressive, attendants walk away unless there is physical contact.

“Alright, well, you have a pleasant rest of the flight ma’am, okay?”

“I have this for you.” She whispered it holding taking an orange from behind her back. Never moving a muscle on her face. Still a teenage voice. Like when a 12 year old hits puberty kind of voice.

“No, thanks.” Lila decided to call it a day with the crazy cunt and walk away.

“Oh, but you should. Or one day, you know, one day.”

And that’s that. Lila gave her the fuck off look and walked away. Lady never bothered her again during that flight. During that flight.

Lila went home few days later and didn’t think much of what had happened. When her mom asked her how her flight was, Lila smiled and said “Good, other than one really crazy lady.” Mom wanted to hear more, so Lila started telling her about what happened. By the time she said the word “orange”, her mom started crying. Lila was in shock. It was story time. Well, apparently, when my girlfriend was a baby in Kenya, she had woken her parents up a few times with loud crying. When they’d walk into her room, she’d have an orange next to her in her crib. Everything in the house would be locked though. Windows, doors, everything. It got to the point where her parents moved the crib into their room and installed security cameras. Well, on Lila’s third birthday, that morning, when they woke up, they saw an orange laying on Lila’s chest. They were absolutely taken over by horror. They called the police; police came and looked over the camera footage. Cameras clearly showed a woman opening the front door (that was locked), walking into their room, placing an orange on Lila and just standing there. For like an hour. Just standing there, with her head tilted to the left, looking at her. By this point, it is unnecessary to say that Lila was completely horrified. Her mom wasn’t doing much better either. Anyways, to keep the story going, her parents didn’t know what to do. Police couldn’t find the mysterious woman, and no security measure (other than 24/7 bodyguards which they couldn’t afford) was enough. Some of their family was already in Canada and were pressuring them to move, so this incident was a final push. They moved and left this creature with an orange behind. Until that day, on that flight.

Lila was completely unable to do anything for the next few days after that conversation. She didn’t eat much, didn’t communicate with anyone. After a while, she got better. There was no sign of further horror, so she started believing it was all a fucked up coincidence. And she went on with her life. She hasn’t seen Rose in years after that. Last time she encountered Rose was one month before she (Lila) met me.

Lila did many transatlantic flights. She loved those. Long travels, decent money, seeing the world. She had it all. One month before we met, she was coming back from a Hong Kong trip. She flew to Toronto I believe (she’s asleep, and I don’t remember exactly, I believe it was Toronto though). Crew had a nice hotel, everyone had their own room. Lila was on the third floor. She loved drinking at that time, and got pretty drunk that night. She passed out at about 1:00 am. At around 4am, she heard a knock on the door. Then another one, and then another one. But they weren’t loud or fast knocks. No, they were slow and silent, yet loud enough to wake her drunk ass up. She rolled out of bed thinking it was one of her equally drunk crew members. Not thinking much, she opened the door and there she stood. Lila said that lights in her room were off, but TV was on. Light from the screen was shinning on Rose’s face. Shining on the grin. Shinning on the pearly white teeth, bright red lipstick and a white face paired up with tilted head. You know how when you’re drunk and some scary shit (accident, cops, etc.) happens and you sober the fuck up immediately? Yea. She just let out this helpless sound of horror. They both stood there. Rose started rocking back and forth. Every time she’d rock back, she’d reveal red shoes hidden underneath her white dress. Her teeth were grinding. Then she pulled out an orange.

“Wh…what do you want from me?” Lila begged.

Rose kept rocking with a smile.

“Please, just leave me alone. I don’t have anything.”

“You take it. You take it now. He will too.” She said that with that same teenager voice, only a little more playful tone was used this time. Like a happy-ish child.

Don’t know if it was her defense mechanism activating, but Lila took the fucking orange and threw it over Rose’s head and screamed “Get the fuck out of here, and take this shit with you, you freak!”

That was the first time either of us saw Rose lose her smile. White teeth disappeared underneath the thick red lips. Head went back from a gentle tilt into its natural position.

“I will see you two soon.” She said it in adult voice. And this voice was scarier than the teenager one. Lila says its because it sounded real. Like a conscious, normal person making a threat. Of course, at that time Lila didn’t know me and had no idea who “you two” were. She assumed it’d be her mom.

That brings us to today. Yea. If you read the update from my previous story, you saw that our room was broken into by Rose (logical assumption). Pictures of the break-in were taken before police came. They will be up on here today. Some stuff in our room was moved around. We are scared as fuck, clueless as to what’s going on. I will be skyping with my mom soon to see if she has any answers. Lila will talk to her mom as well.

I am personally just shocked at these developments. I never believed anything like this was even possible. Quite honestly, if one of you wrote this story here, I wouldn’t believe shit you said. And I cant blame you if you don’t believe me. But if you have any idea about what this might be, I’m all ears. I assume it’s some sort of a cult, but the only thing that fucks with my head is the fact that Rose knew my girlfriend before I did. Everything so far could’ve been explained in a logical way, but this took it to a super-fucking-natural level. Were they putting an effort into getting us together? How’d they do that? And more importantly, why? For what possible benefit? Fuck this man, fuck this.

Credit To – Milos Bogetic

NOTE: This is the second in a series of several popular Reddit posts documenting some seriously creepy experiences. We are publishing them here with express permission of Milos Bogetic aka inaaace, the original poster. The story is in multiple parts, and will be published completely over the next few days – much like what I did with the ‘Bedtime’ series earlier this year. After the stories have all gone up, I’ll edit each post with links to the other parts.

The OP has finished the book that he promised during his successful kickstarter project.

You can find the paperback and Kindle e-book versions here: The Story of Her Holding an Orange by Milos Bogetic  – full disclosure: our referral link is included.

I know that this will not be new material for all of you, but for those of you who – like myself – don’t use Reddit, I wanted to post it so that you guys could enjoy it as much as I did after having it brought to my attention. Thanks again to Milos for letting me post it, and enjoy!

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  • THEN WHO WAS….nevermind o.O

    I felt horrible for his gf having encountered that Rose thing as a baby. Must’ve been unspeakably terrifying to be defenseless and getting the shit scared outta her! Ugh. But this was definitely more creepy than the first….which however is also creepy. Really can’t wait to read more

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    • Anonymous

      Ok this happens to me I was sitting on my bed and on the laptop but I heard a tap on my window so I got up and looked out my window and I saw this photo taped on my window the woman you described so I looked it up on here to see if anyone had this happen to them but whenever I go to Starbucks I see the same woman you described in the back of the cafe it’s scary as hell!!! And whenever I sit down she comes up to me and says nothing but takes out an orange and she whisperS something in my here she says ‘come with me’ so why is this happening???

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      • …….

        Me too. Im almost thirteen. Ive only seen her about four times starting at around when i was ten. She wasnt at my window, i dont have any windows in my room. But ive seen her in my backyard she has the orange but she never says anything…….

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        • Anonymous

          you know nobody believes you guy right?

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        • Anonymous

          I had one thing happen to me. When I was young I always had a nightmare… One night I woke up and slender man but was pitch black and left no foot prints in the snow he has also always been in my dreams…fuck…

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        • Nena

          You don’t speak for everyone -.-

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        • anon

          I do ._____.

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        • Anonymous

          I believe this guy :)

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      • Kat

        It annoys me when people read a fake story and then start making up their own about the FAKE person in it. Honestly, nobody has REALLY had this happen to them. I’m a big believer in science and am very logical. I believe that anything that can’t be proven by science isn’t true (god, ghosts, spirits, etc.). These story were made for entertainment and entertainment ALONE.

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        • Anonymous

          Haha. Just because something cant be explained by science right now doesn’t mean it wont be later. You are a perfect example of a close minded person. We dont know so much, how big the universe actually is, why we cant access all the parts of our brain, ect. Just because we dont know now, doenst mean that we will not ever know <.<

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        • vito petar marcich

          well,than explain how the mankind was born without god please just tell me…

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        • believer

          If you don’t believe than don’t comment Kat DX

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        • maddie

          some of us do believe this guy and believe in ghosts,spirits,god etc. so if you don’t you can just shut up and not read this story anymore.

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        • Anonymous

          Wow.Speechless.

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        • Anonymous

          I know right? I’m an atheist and I see everything from a logical standpoint. I’ve been lied to a lot, and know a lie when I see it. I really don’t believe this story. The guy who wrote it knows it didn’t happen either, and now he’s sitting back in his chair laughing at all the people who commented that they saw “Rose”. Nonetheless, it’s a damn good story. Stephen King should make it into a book or a movie or some shit.

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        • Anonymous

          It is perfectly fine to not believe in stories like this, heck I don’t believe in it. But that does not give you the right to shut down others beliefs. I do believe in ghosts and such, but things from the Internet I typically don’t trust, so this seems unlikely to me (and whats so scary bout an orange anyways?) but still, just because you are on anon and you don’t know the people who believe, it doesn’t mean you can’t make them feel bad for believing things. You can take my advice or not, but I hope you at least think about the way you talk to people online in the future.

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        • Anonymous

          so before humans went to space earth didn’t exist? before atoms were discovered it didn’t exist? before scientists discovered about prisms and light, rainbows didn’t exist? pull your head out of your ass and get out of your cave.

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    • DeathAngel

      Well, I had something like the orange experience. You know that feeling of DejaVu? Well, when I was five, I had the creepiest fucking dream. It was about some woman, she seemed normal. At first… But when she walked towards me, maneuvering through the scattered toys (This took place in Walmart), I noticed that there was a little trail of blood from where she was stepping… Then she turned and walked THROUGH the dividers for the aisle. I swear, when she was gone, I heard someone say “You will see me again… We will meet again very soon…” I told my parents about it, and they said I probably saw one to many scary tv shows (I’ve ALWAYS loved horror movies), so I brushed it off at the time… But three months ago, I was in Walmart, just walking around… and I saw that woman… It brought back the memories, and when she looked at me… She had a fucking Jeff the Killer smile… So, I did what any ordinary person would do and ran to the fucking back of the store to where my family was… I saw her, and she looked PISSED. I haven’t seen her since, and I hope I never see her again…

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      • Anonymous

        That’s freakin scary!! Jeff the killer still scares the crap out of me. I feel bad for you

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        • Anonymous

          Dis is the scrryiest shit evar not to be rude though that was the only way to express how fell about this story? I use the question mark because i am not sure if you would call somethig extreamly scary and real a “story”

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      • http://yahoo.com jeff the killer

        HEY, I take a large amount of offence in that. Even mass murderers have feelings

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        • Anonymous

          thats just perfect xD

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        • CandleJack

          give this man a cookie…..but dont say my name :D

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        • abz

          Candlejack. come get meh xD

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    • anonymous

      normally I go with logic but ,at times I will read or watch something paranormal(movies, books, etc.) but what you’re describing here sounds a lot like a demon. F.Y.I I don’t normally believe in these things but really there is no other explanation

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  • Awkward Thursdays

    In order to believe this is all true, you have to believe in either other powers running your life or an ability to see the future… I’m not quite sure I can believe this man honestly, but it makes for a good read nonetheless… I can tell this author is more of a concept-guy, focusing on the idea rather than the implementation into a story.

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    • THEN WHO WAS…….nevermind…

      Do what??!

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      • http://yahoo.com rainbow moustache

        what he said

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        • CandleJack

          your name is amazing……..may i tie it up with rope?

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    • Anonymous

      I have had an awful experience as a child. It was me my sister and my cousin and we were at a campground in Mississippi and I was around 7 or 8. (I’m 13 about to be 14.) anyways at the campground families are assigned a cabin and me my sis and cousin were riding our bikes on a trail and we ended up at a cabin that was kinda torn up. And there was a lady with black hair and skin that looked almost fake. I don’t remember what she was wearing but she was just standing there smiling this creepy smile almost like she was expecting us to end up there. She told us that she had a surprise inside the cabin and she wanted to show us. Obviously we were taught the “stranger danger” rule so we replied politely no thank you. She stepped closer and acted disappointed and said “awww I really wish you would” and started walking towards us but we just ride back to the trail and left as fast as we could. Later that day we saw her again by the camp’s lake. She smiled at us and then she walked away. I never saw her again but it still scared the crap out of me as a kid.

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  • Xombifier

    Cant wait to read more. And the book sounds good too

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  • TheWhiteNurse

    I have never wanted a part 3 more than ever O_O

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    • The DUDE

      HEAD TILTED, LIPSTICK ON, A SMILE AND BLACK HAIR, GUYS THIS IS ROSE.

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      • http://lol lol

        lol

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      • Anabelle

        OH. MY. GLOB. SHE’S FOUND ALL OF US. xD

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  • Biohazard

    Incredible story. I’ve read quite a lot of stories here on Creepypasta, but this one is definitely one of the best. Long but interesting read. I like how this story gets creepy without resorting to violence or graphic horror stuff, can’t wait for the next parts.

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  • noname

    I need part 3 now!!!

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  • Dpahney

    Loving it so far! Cant wait to read part 3

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  • Jason

    Great story! Great sequel! I want more of these kind of stories. I’m also convinced (rather this one is or not) that there are a lot of real creepy events that people could be writing about. Think I’ll give mine a shot. Thanks for the motivation.

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  • Jane

    You will come. I have something for you

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    • :P

      seems legit

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    • Tsugirai

      You should have changed your name to Rose first.

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    • Anabelle

      OKAY!!

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  • Alen

    Hello.

    I think I know can help you and your girlfriend.

    Contact me on my email: poparic@live.com

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    • Alen

      And now grammatically correct…I think I know a way to help you and your girlfriend.

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    • ThatGirl

      I believe I help you now

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  • wxyz

    I don’t like it. Usually I agree with the general populace on pastas, but I cannot for the life of me understand what is so special about thus series. The grammar and profanity is distracting, the plot is pointless and random, and the attempt to make it “real” takes more away from it. This is just my opinion and I’d hate to hurt a popular story, so im not rating.

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  • TheGuyWithAnswers

    She is probably some kind of ghost. (Obviusly)
    She Will appear randomly when you await it at least.
    Trying to kill her will maybe help but i am not certain. Do never accept the orange, but maybe you should try smashing it.

    The best of luck.
    TheGuyWithAnswers

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    • dadada

      But, remember when he was waiting in line for the iPhone or whatever, and the orange was smashed and rotten? That has to symbolize something. I don’t know, maybe instead of freeing you, when you smash it, you die.
      Overall, I think that the story is a good idea, but I don’t believe it. :)

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    • Baron Wolf

      by doing so you could cause a even more severe situation to the conflict already however showing fear to a spirit or A ” Intellegent haunting ” with this type of information and such detail based upon this rose and the odd occurences that they are going through however by doing so i would prefer that you show it no fear and try to make contact with it be calm but keep god in your heart and accept jesus because by all means it could be a demon demons intend to trick the human mind making those who they wish to go after and torture seem a bit more different and really i would advise you to keep a bible with you and your girlfriend

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  • TheGuyWithAnswers

    And i believe you guys.

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  • The Banker

    Not trying to be a dick, really. This pasta just seems quite bland to me. I’m having a hard time understanding the high rating. There’s grammar and spelling errors abound, and the story is taking time to build steam. I think it’s the whole “This is a true story” that’s garnered all the positive critique.

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    • bobble

      but you dont understand this man wheather he it telling the truth or not is useing the errors to his effect it is makeing him sseem more frightened and in a haste to get the people to help him. p.s. i am half expecting the lady to be stareing at me through the window and it is creeping me out!

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    • dadada

      He’s already mentioned that he’s foreign- I think that he’s trying to use the grammar errors to make it more realistic.

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  • blah

    you will come both of you at the same time and make sure to clean the sheets after you do so

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  • Jake

    Creepy…i can just picture her face o_o

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    • http://HHHHHHHHHHHH JYTJ

      SAME Y IMAGINATION Y

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  • unknown

    where are the pictures????

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  • Rose

    You will come.

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    • Johnny C.

      Fuck, she lives.

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  • Old Man Mullet

    I believe thus story. Because most of the things people say happen to them in thier storys happen to me some times

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  • Fenris

    YOU. PART 3. NOW!

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  • Rose

    You will come now…..

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    • Mikiteru Shion

      ._. …. Well that’s just mean.

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    • me& me only

      Don’t. Be like that were alraedy. FREAKED out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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      • Lilyan

        Oh seriously x(

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  • Mirror Dave

    I like that each installment isn’t extremely long and that he doesn’t try to subtly suggest a plot. I hope this isn’t a true story for their sake.

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  • lollipop_gestapo

    I can’t even drink orange juice now.

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    • Johnny C.

      I love your username.

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  • omgplease

    scary sheets rite there

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  • Sharik

    One thing I noticed is that people in the story cry a lot.

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    • That One DJ

      I know, I saw that too.

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      • xXxXx

        Well, duh, if u see a crazy woman in a white dress with an orange on ur window sill, telling you to ‘come with me’ what would you do? I would definitely panic! I’ve seen a creepy man once. Not paranormal but just creepy, with flowers, red eyes and stuff. I kinda got creep-ed out..

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