• Okay….

    I’m a little dense; anyone care to explain?

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    • Sonya loves Creepypasta

      Well since icky is her ex, I guess he killed the cat and the nerdy dude from the bar

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  • Kat-Chan

    Um, I think she killed him.

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  • Eh?

    Wait…. what?

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  • Anonymous

    LOL, I thought the stalker was the Geoffry guy, didn’t expect that to be honest.

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    • Annabella_Assassins

      Oh! So her stalker killed him! Maybe her stalker also killed her cat…

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  • Oh Rin

    ah it had to be bad luck

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  • OH YEAH

    confusing!

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  • r e l a p s e STAR

    Bad pasta tastes bad.

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  • r e l a p s e STAR

    Bad pasta is bad.

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  • Alexandar

    Interesting if she is insane. Possibly she killed off her boyfriend and rationalized about it by saying he left the poor girl? Then again… Ricky, in his fury, may have murdered our nerdy friend who may also have just killed himself. So many possibilities and none of them make this story good.
    Sorry, but I cannot figure out why you would post this publicly.

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  • Anonymous

    i think it was all “bad luck”
    she did it

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  • Richard C. Mongler

    I came buckets! :D

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  • Schteve

    the only way this makes sense is if you interpret “bad” really weirdly

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  • Omiyage

    BUT THEN WHO WAS LESLIE?

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  • Rahula

    wat

    Sorry, I tried to delve deep on that response, but came up dry. Good story, unique concept, and, for once, unpredictable, but the conclusion failed to seal the deal. I can’t seem to tear myself away from that very last sentence; it really did just ruin the entire story for me with its completely unnecessary detail and the simple fact that it trailed off. Seriously, amateur scary story writers out there, your unwillingness to conclude the final sentence with a good, old-fashioned period does not make your ending more spooky, it simply makes it more ambivalent and “noodly” in its lack of resolution…ironically fitting for creepypasta, admittedly, but that’s not at all the point.

    …Now that I’ve gotten that little rant out of my system, it was still pretty clever.

    (weakendinghadtogoandruinit)

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  • Anonymous

    Good idea. Could have been executed (ha ha) better.

    I would have been scared if it was paced well. The ending startled me; I was expecting a few more sentences!

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  • No name.

    XD fabulous story. I absulutly loved it! Keep writing, you’re very talented. :D

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  • Alice

    THEN WHO WAS CREEPY BASTARD?!

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  • candlejack

    Wait….. wut? I dont get it…. who killed who now?

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  • Lolphone

    I think Leslie did kill Geoffry….because they said that she was still having bad luck, and they found his corpse a week later…it could mean that since they found his body, they’ll probably find her too? o3o Eh, I’m probably wrong. XD

    -/stupid moment

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  • Lady of Desire

    Oh that is definately creepy pasta. Creepy, psycho pasta.

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  • cjkghjfgsdg

    Errr. I don’t get it?

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  • Ironphoenix

    I don’t get it.
    Someone care to elaborate?

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    • Nicola Marie Jackson

      I don’t get it either but I thought I’d say Hi as no one else replied in five years. I think it’s got potential but at the moment it’s just too mindfucky xxx

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  • teejayandjon

    URK! This pasta’s gone bad!

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  • http://lol.com MiloMurmur

    shit, what the fuck?

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  • lolwut

    I. DONT. GET. IT

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