• Anonymous

    God damn, I’m sick of these Slenderman posts

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    • Slenderman

      I rarely post comments because to aton of people keep seeing me but if a author needs to be yelled at I will be the one to do it

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      • The Dream Walker

        Hi Slendy.

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      • ZachdaBeast527

        slendy dont yell this man is a good author

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      • Jeneva The Killer

        Jeff is better than you.

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  • Isaac

    Not bad for a slender man story

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  • Anonymous

    Why is this so highly rated? Terrible, cliche trash.

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    • Anonymous

      Most things on here, or evem /r/nosleep, or any Crepypasta like website, is cliche’d. Gotta deal with it. This is okay for a Slenderman story

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      Rating: +9 (from 13 votes)
  • Tim

    come up with something original for christ sake , and study up on a little literary concept called story development

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  • You want a username? YOU CAN’T HANDLE THE USERNAME!

    Can’t believe I’m saying this, but Slenderman isn’t scary anymore. Gimme something new. Make a new monster. A new Slenderman.

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  • Anonymous

    Slenderman loves to color?

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    • Anonymous

      Bitch He’s Got Long Ass Arms

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  • http://streamoffire Mophead

    NIce one, slenderman taking a person. I don’t at ALL feel like I’ve seen this before. Oh, and a piece of paper with slenderman and no no no no no no no on it, that is not at ALL copying slender the game. Seriously, this needs to be on crappypasta.

    Also, WHO WAS PAPER?

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    • anomnomnoms

      Right, because we all know Slenderman hasn’t been around for years, long before the video game was developed. Aren’t you just so smart?

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      • Pablo pedrobar

        The date of the comment is a single day after the story was posted and, presumably, fairly soon after it was written. As well, the game had been out for some months by this point, which makes it even less plausible for the idea to have been snatched by the game developers as the author developed his work.
        You are either a great troll, I am missing something profoundly important, or you aren’t very good at explaining what you mean to say. 

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  • typing a random username jdjdjdjdjjfklsavbvbfvaiu

    meh

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  • StoneH

    Shut up.

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  • http://www.youtube/cockneypasta cockney pasta

    my view (For whats its worth) i like the agoraphobic transition the protagnanist decends into. Slowly backing him self into smaller and smaller space to fell safe. Maby having the slender man as the rout of the fear ticks the cliche box but i thought the story was ok. 7/8 Mate.

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  • Name

    Mophead, how the flying fuck can you complain about Slenderman taking someone – WHEN THAT’S WHAT HE HAS ALWAYS DONE AND ALWAYS WILL DO. What do you expect him to do, cut grass?

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    • Anonymous

      Yes… I think he should.

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  • blah

    I like the typical slenderman stories but this one was too cliche and is clearly overrated. The story was missing the build up that any real slenderman story has. The writer just jumped right into the story where the protagonist has already seen the slenderman and with no back story on the protagonist. the papers came out of nowhere which right away is a dead giveaway that they took the idea from the game “SLENDER”. The papers were warnings in the game, in this story it had no real purpose.
    id give it a 4.5 on 10, the story lacked a HUGE part of the protagonists side of the story which usually plays in the background part of the story and how both characters crossed paths in the first place.

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  • Anonymous

    Extremely generic ending, some major point-of-view problems….. like the fact that you were speaking in the present tense for 90% of the story, and in the last 2 paragraphs you started speaking like you were talking from beyond the grave or something. The ending provided no new or interesting powers that the Slender Man has. The one part I really enjoyed was the “what the fuck is a Slenderman?” part, because it really made me feel like you had no idea what was going on. Also, I thought the beginning was a joke… the “Oh lordy jesus! Goodness gracious what is going on?!” thing. In short- very generic, minor grammar errors, moderately good story, terrible POV problems, and very good sections.

    6/10

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  • Anonymous

    I have had the same expirance in my dreams, this is fucking scaring me now, I’m 14, I have had the same dream, the man stood in the corner of my room, and looked at me with glowing red eyes, he just stared at me, and this weird sound happened and I woke up in tears

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    • Anonymous

      what kind of sound

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    • Raaarrrr

      I know what you mean I once had a nightmare that I was at my dads farm ( which is surrounded by woods and he was always right behind me I woke up when he made a noise I can’t describe and I was covered in tears

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  • the cake

    Stop dissing people who write about slendy. slenderman has a fan base that will eat anything written about him. so shaddup and enjoy the traffic. ruthless trolls.

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  • panda

    Slender is getting over used and over popular —- its time for a new monster to rise and take his place on the throne
    Perhaps a pig faced butcher or a tale of an asylum that takes its patients and tests on them trying to create the perfect little town
    Or maybe even a tale of a beast that had been tampered with by science and escaped into the world reeking havoc on the people of today

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    • YOU CAN’T HANDLE THE USERNAME!

      I swear Mr. P I’ll try.
      I’ll try. :'(

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    • http://yahoo.com Slendy J.R

      panda you made YOU CAN’T HANDLE THIS USERNAME! cry (P.S remember my dad AKA:Slender
      man is more then likely to kill you).

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  • Sharzuki

    If you dont like reading the Slenderman storys don’t fucking read them. If you feel you can do better then do fucking better. I found it entertaining at least.

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  • Junopunt

    I love the ending! The smile just makes me feel pleasured. Lol I’m sorry ;)

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    Rating: +7 (from 9 votes)
  • http://streamoffire Mophead

    Hey Name, Okay, I admit that this is what he does, but in Suit, which by the way, is an amazingly tasty pasta, he does it in a new and original way, which is by making the protagonist him. I stand by my original statements, in particular…

    WHO WAS PAPER?

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  • http://streamoffire Mophead

    I also agree with panda.

    DEATH TO SLENDERMAN! LONG LIVE THE BEING!!!

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  • Zach G.

    that was prety good! the text i got in the middle ofreading i made me jump!

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  • Pasta’s yum!

    Go to a *cough* mental institute *cough* because you’re crazy he isn’t real. But on the flip side great idea great story. 8/10 :)

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  • Spengrantest

    Anonymous, that is creepy!

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  • Lolwut

    I’m not scared of slenderman anymore. Not after I read jeff the killer. And I’m getting over it now. Slenderman come at me bro! I’ll read all the slenderman pastas I guess then.

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  • arcanum

    how did you write this if the darkness claimed you?…doesnt really make sense to me making ones creepy pasta story obviously fake…its much better when you cant stop thinking the story you just read might just be true?…

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    • Anon

      It’s an inner monologue

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