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The Scariest “Story” Ever



Estimated reading time — 4 minutes

Transcript taken from a video found under the link: SCARIEST “STORY” EVER

The video feed turns on in night vision mode. A teen girl, pale in the greenish light, stands in front of a leathery black backdrop, rods running through it. Her pupils glow as the light hits them, turning the same pale green as her skin while her irises stay black. She begins to speak in a calm, clear voice.
“My life has been a living hell. I can barely remember a time when I wasn’t afraid, and even that seems like it was years ago. But I know it hasn’t been years since this started. It started three days ago. It started with the video.

“The video was much like this one is. A cute teen boy filming himself on one of those cheap video cameras, making a home movie at dark. His voice was calm and sweet, completely the opposite of what he was saying. What He was saying was dark and cold. I should never have watched that video. You shouldn’t be watching this one. This is your last chance to turn back, to turn off the video, to save yourself from the terror that awaits you. Turn it off now.

“I see you didn’t listen. I don’t blame you. I didn’t listen to His warning either; I thought I could handle the story that was to come. I was dead wrong. I applaud you for your bravery, but you were stupid. Oh well. No turning back now.

“I suppose I should tell you what you’re in for. He never did that for me. He didn’t do anything for me. Everything was for himself. He said that they were looking for recruits for the group He was a part of. I was to be their newest recruit, having seen the video. That confused me. How was he supposed to find me? And what If I didn’t want to be part of their group? The latter obviously didn’t occur to Him. He said it with such finality it was as if no one in their right mind would refuse to be in the group. Or that you had no choice in the matter. He explained that special abilities and rewards were granted to those in the group. Granted. As if I had a choice. I suppose the abilities aren’t that bad. You’ll find out soon enough.

“At the end of the video He said They were coming for me, to be ready for Their arrival. That freaked me out. His voice was soothing but firm as he said that, and I had no doubt in my mind that They would find me. They did. That night.

“I was half asleep when they came, roused by an eerie silence and an odd, frightened feeling. Suddenly, I heard a rustling from outside my window. A whoosh followed soon after. I ran to the window and there They were. Five of them, beckoning. They were smiling, but Their eyes were cold, menacing. I screamed and ran toward my parents’ room on the opposite side of the house. I passed a hall window just as something huge swooped past it, too fast for me to make out. I glanced out the window as I sprinted down the hall and there They were on the front lawn, still beckoning, looking slightly annoyed. I made it to my parents’ bedroom and shoved them out of bed and to their window. Nothing. I pushed them to my bedroom window. Nothing. They were gone. Annoyed, my parents scolded me, saying I was too old for these kind of nightmares. If only that were true.

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“They were everywhere the next day. On the drive to school They were standing at the edge of the forests that border the road. Standing. Staring. My mom saw nothing. During classes, They were in the forest circling the school, just visible from the classroom windows. They darted in and out of sight, too fast for a normal human. I was the only one that saw them. By this time they were visibly agitated. A few looked furious. I was a nervous wreck. It was only a matter of time before they got to me.

“They got me that night. I didn’t stand a chance. I stayed awake, lying in bed, trying not to look out the window. I didn’t want to know where They were. I should have checked. A hand burst through the window, shattering the glass. I ran for the door, but He was too quick for me. He got there before I did. His sweetness was gone. Rage poured from his body and out of his bright, red eyes. I shrank to the floor, terror taking its hold. I felt two sharp needle pricks and lost consciousness.

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“When I woke up, They explained my new abilities. I liked them. I liked being able to run so fast people saw only a blur. I liked being much stronger than all of the boys at my school. I didn’t like that I wasn’t permitted to leave. There is no one here that I can relate to. Everyone else has been here so long that they’ve forgotten how to be human, how to be a teenager. Oh well, I’ll have you here soon. We can be friends.” The girl adjusts her position slightly, stretching and getting more comfortable. The backdrop moves with her, stretching out slightly and then folding in on itself. It attaches to the girl at her shoulder blades. It is a pair of wings. “Good luck trying to escape. You’re going to need it. They have been doing this for centuries. They know exactly what you’re going to try. You’ll see me tonight. We’ll be watching.”

The girl smiles slightly, then turns to look at the buttons controlling the camera. The feed ends.

Credit To: Ace

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102 thoughts on “The Scariest “Story” Ever”

  1. ThisIsANameForAComment

    “Story” … “Story” … if its not a story, what is it? Also, Scariest… I had higher hopes. I liked the concept, but really, where is everyone getting the idea of vampires from? Also, this title could have been completely different and it wouldn’t have had any effect on the story.

  2. Y'all are so stupid...

    So, all y’all saying this would be cool….
    Y’all want to see freaky people stalking you, and when you tell someone, they don’t believe you. AND they will break into your bedroom and give you two shots, then you have no way to leave. You also can like, NEVER see your family or friends again, and you’ll never be a normal kid again….
    Ain’t y’all smart…

  3. What is the link to this so called video???
    And if there is really a video which I totally doubt plz share the link .

  4. Ill be waiting in excitement. Sword in hand, I will not be apart of your group but I will take the powers for myself. Even if I am overpowered today is my 18th birthday and I will accept them honorably. If you do come you may just grant my life wish.

  5. Where should I sign for superspeed and wings? (not sure why I would even need wings having superspeed, though) O_o
    I definitely can’t see the connection with the video. Why would these vampires (in lack of a better term) only take someone who watched the video (and watched it all, to be sure)? And why would they even need new recruit to make their own videos, as if they were a meeting website? Isn’t the original video enough? Seems a pointless modus operandi.

  6. That was pretty cool. I totally visualized everything; I wanna’ read the whole story of it now. You should pursue writing the rest if you haven’t already.

  7. Soooo, I get taken and get powers. Then I get to be friends with some chick forever.

    …As long as she’s not ugly, I’m game.

    Oh wait…friends forever….forever in the friend zone! That is living hell!

  8. I don’t get why people keep saying “vampire”. Where in this story is the word vampire used? There isn’t even a reference to sucking blood or anything. She’s fast and has wings, yes, but I still don’t think of vampires at all. I agree with the Maximum Ride thing. Even though I didn’t care for the story myself, I still don’t see a reason to call the author a bad Twilight fanfic writer.

  9. My two problems with this were the constant capitalization of He, Him, They, Their, etc. If this is a video of a girl speaking to a camera, why would the viewer (and consequently, the reader of your story) know that she meant to capitalize these words? And even if they did, WHY would they be capitalized, as if holy? These things that stalk you and turn you into some winged creature certainly don’t sound holy. Also, I found the wording of the “dialog” very clunky and odd, because you set it up as a girl speaking continuously to a camera, again, to the viewer. Nobody really talks like that. It seems you didn’t think anything through when you set up this scenario. Maybe if it was some book or piece of paper someone found it would be creepier.

  10. Yeah, there was nothing scary about this. At all.

    “Watch this video and you get to be a vampire and hang out with a teenager girl and be super fast and super strong AND HAVE WINGS.”

    Uh… downside?

    The story itself was okay, and all the people crying Twilight are retarded.

  11. She only described what was to come, since the boy in the video she’d seen hadn’t done it for her. She didn’t actually say anything after. How2spoiler.

    1. They did it without the videos. They did it without videos and then started doing it with videos so they know who to get instead of randomly picking to make things more fair. Or just what Chabo said.

  12. This was amazingly fucking stupid, just some dumb twilight loving bitch wanting to write a story about her being a vampire. She should have her hands broken so she can never write again.

      1. hey they mnight be vampires they might not i agree vampires though a little but she didnt explain the other powers she couldve had more than those which she did say abilities hint plural and did really describe the wings really i think more of group of fallens angel or something but vampire is on the top 5 theories so yeah if you go on facebook and like my page Extraordinary Stories im posting this on it and you could comment or anything so yeah have a good one cuz class is in session 3:]

  13. My biggest complaint is the name, The Scariest Story Ever
    I feel like the name caused me to go in with extra cynicism, I would have enjoyed the story more with a different name

    1. that’s what I thought.but idk just two powers I mean if there were more I would but :/ but that’s cool you even get powers lol.

  14. It just seems like a rehashing of a vampire story with wings…and they were teenagers. Sorry, you just seem like a twilight fanfic writer. 1/10

      1. SO I looked for it and no such video exists I’ve looked on everything nothing and also the person that wrote this wouldn’t ave gotten taken it isn’t the original video also how did she have time to write the creepypasta

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