• A

    Are you kidding me?

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  • Jake

    I really enjoyed this pasta. Good one.

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    Rating: +36 (from 50 votes)
    • Anonymous

      I like pasta

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      • a guy

        i like pasta too!!!

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  • Anonymous

    Now no-one can say first!

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  • Anonymous

    Creepy, gave me shudders. Keep up the good work!

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    Rating: +21 (from 31 votes)
  • http://www.creepypasta.com derpbutt

    inb4 this is oldpasta. Yes, we know, but it’s good and we didn’t have it archived yet on this site, so up it goes.

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    • http://instagram.com/fatcakes2123 TheForgotten1

      derpbutt you’re amazing :D

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  • Greta

    Yesss, people, beware Russians – we have wayyy more secrets than you think! LOL
    By the way, KGB was formed in 1954 :/

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    • alex

      OR WAS IT??

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      • russian ganstar boy

        ill blow you all up im with the cheka

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        • ireadcreepypasta

          your funny

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    • Serenity

      It didn’t say this was the KGB…
      As far as the commanding officer, so what?
      Maybe KGB was already in existence until we just barely heard of it in 1954.

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      • Matrim

        It said that the commander was ex-KGB.

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        • Anonymous

          Might of been Putin from the present gone back in time? I don’t know its fake.

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    • Anonymous

      thats what the government wants you to think

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    • Yakov Smirnoff

      In Soviet Russia, 1954 forms KGB!
      :/

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    • ireadcreepypasta

      Thats when KGB was revealed

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  • Jack

    it goes from having only 2 live survivors from the chamber to having 3 this is clearly fake and was good up until the story got messed up do more editing

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    • Anonymous

      Of course it’s fake it’s on a fucking horror story site of all fictional stories

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    • Mike

      I don’t understand how everyone is getting this confused. There were 4 patients when they opened the chamber, the 5th one being dead. In the struggle to remove the patients from the chamber, the 4th one died from a ruptured spleen. The last 3 were put into surgery and it was decided to put them back in the chamber. As they were getting prepped, the 3rd patient fell asleep and immediately died. The 2 are now in a room with 3 RESEARCHERS, when they decide to close the doors and put the gas on, so the last 2 don’t die. One of the researchers (or soldiers, w/e) shoots his commanding officer in the head, as well as 1 of the patients. The last researcher runs. Leaving one researcher (soldier) and the 1 final patient. At no point is the math off. Learn to read guys XD

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      • Delirium

        But didn’t one of the patients die in surgery? From the anesthetics?

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  • TheAyatollah

    Eh. Mostly good, but the ending is really melodramatic. Not my favorite.

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    • Austin

      I kinda agree on that. Should’ve gotten rid of the whole “We are the blah blah blah…”

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  • sum dude

    i dont get it

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    • russian ganstar boy

      thats because your not russian

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      • http://www.youtube.com Russian Rainbow-Dash

        I see where you’re going with this…..

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        • Anonymous

          I don’t

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      • Kamillla

        Can u explain it?????

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      • Anonymous

        im not russian but i get it just fine

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    • Anonymous

      What happened is that there were 3 guys that were being kept prisoner to see if they couldn’t sleep for 30 days. They went mad, and then they started mutilating themselves because of not sleeping. It says at the end that sleeping is why the madness I suppressed. I believe it is an extended metaphor for when you are tired that you get mad easily.

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      • Anonymous

        That’s actually not it. The story is a reflection of sleep psychology. There is a theory that we have an “unconscious mind”, the more animalistic portion of our minds that is all that is considered “mad”. Our conscious mind (The one you are reading with right now) is what we use everyday. Our unconscious mind is only seen when we are asleep, giving our conscious mind a break. (This could explain why dreams are sometimes violent or crazy.) The fact that the patients could not sleep, perhaps broke the conscious mind and left the unconscious mind in control and free.

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        • ND

          That’s not a theory. It’s a hypothesis. And that’s not what actual scientific studies of sleep have found. Not sleeping makes you fucked up, but it won’t make you super strong, immune to pain, or psychopathic. Try it some time. Lots of students do it regularly; very very very very very very few of them try to hurt anyone or themselves.

          Also, just as an editorial matter: this story needs some grammar and spelling work, as well as some extra plausibility in story structure. As some other commenters point out it is really liberally melodramatic, both in terms of the plot devices and the goofy monologue at the end. It’s a good start but it doesn’t hold together and it ends very weakly. Please edit.

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        • John_Doe

          I beg to differ, my ex went 10 days without sleep, she was under a lot of stress at work and with school, (i have no idea how she stayed up so long as i personally cant go 48 hours without sleep) well she got more and more irritated but never towards me, more like she couldn’t get a jar open and instead of asking me she threw it… out the window.. but i digress around the 9th night we go to bed, or i do at least, she stayed up to finish some homework, she hadn’t shown signs of paranoia or mental breakdowns.. just increasingly violent anger breakouts. i woke up 3 hours later with my gun in my face and she was screaming about something that i couldn’t even understand. I asked her why she was pointing a gun at me and she didn’t have an answer, i reached out and took it from her, she released it and i immediately put her in my car and took her to the hospital.. she slept for 3 days and was fine after that. sleep deprivation can seriously fuck you up, now i’m not saying this story is true, personally i don’t believe so, though the Russians did have some fucked up experiments. but i am saying i wouldn’t doubt something like this could happen if someone could stay awake for 14 days.

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  • kaprice

    Yeeeah this kinda sucked.

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  • Pyromania

    I’m almost certain I’ve read this somewhere else before XD
    Can’t think were those since I don’t read creepypasta anywhere else but here..
    Still i always liked the story but i did notice that the amount of survivors increased and decreased in multiple parts of the story.

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  • Revolution666

    I really liked it. Definitely original and quite disturbing. The ending is a bit cliché, but nothing that truly ruins the rest of it. Also, the graphic detail in the middle of the story made me a little light-headed, haha. Very well done, whomever wrote this.

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  • Jivy

    BUT WHO WAS SLEEP?

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    • Test subject #6

      me

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      • Insanity…..

        We are free.
        Insane for eternity.
        With hearts of stone.
        And brains of the dead.
        They are the ones going home.
        The ones who will bleed red.
        They say they are free by being sane.
        But one day they will find out.
        That we were right all along.
        And that they shall pay…..

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      • Scientist with Gun

        No! Not You!!!!!!!!

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    • Sleep

      Um haha no me…..

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      • Scientist with Gun

        No! Not you either!!!!!!!!!

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  • New Techno Leader

    not bad, reminds me of one i read on the CREEPY TALES app on my phone called Gateway to the Mind, I’m new here so i’m not sure if that one is a creepypasta, i assumed it was as the app also has Candle Cove

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    • Anon

      Its on Creepypasta LOL.

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  • Len Lye

    I’d rather the last survivor not say anything at all, or at least something so vague it leaves an eerie aftertaste. For it to say it’s their “inner demon” is sadly cliche, however the rest of the story (such as it’s setting, style, and fantastic description) was wonderfully appreciated.

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    • That Guy

      Agreed.

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  • seeyoucreepin

    There’s an inconsistency with the amount of subject and multiple times. Sometimes there 3, sometimes 4. There 3 survivors when they first open the tank, then one of the 3 dies on the operating table but then there are 3 left to be put back in? Ruined the whole thing for me.

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    • http://Killthekillers.tumblr.com Ahriannah

      Asexual reproduction? Its a story so why the hell not?

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    • Anonymous

      u obviously lost count with the story

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  • Alfredo

    Yes, they open the tank; there are 4. One bleeds to death from a broken spleen. There are 3 then. Go to surgery; one dies by anesthesia. There are 2 then; oh wait! next paragraph, there are still 3; who was resurrected?

    The ending could have worked with a little more detail added. Feels a little bit rushed.

    Sorry for the bad english; it’s not my first language.

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    • Suzanne

      Yeah! I agree….:)

      And as far as your English? It’s fine.

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    • Anonymous

      Your english is better than most people whos first language is english

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      • Anonymous

        U DAM RITE

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  • Olivia

    all yous shut your mouth! so far this has been the scariest pasta i’ve read in a while. most pastas should be crappypastas but arnt.
    this should be one of the best creepypasta stories i’ve read in a while i really think that this story shouldnt be on crappypasta.
    its well written and i loved it and anyone who dosnt STFU!
    and my friend is russian hes nice extremly nice. somtimes so nice you’d think he was hitten on me….
    o.O

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    • Anonymous

      So someone who doesn’t like part of the story shouldn’t talk? Your logic is skewed.

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    • bugsbunny

      So someone who doesn’t like part of the story shouldn’t give their opinion? Your logic is skewed.

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    • bugsbunny

      Is friend nice enough to teach you English?

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    • Anna

      You must be some 10 year old reading some random pastas. Everyone here is free to express their opinion.
      And by the way, no one ever said anything about your beloved Russian friend.
      Just freaking grow up.

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  • Len Lye

    Yea… people we get it. He made a tiny mistake now shut up it’s not that deep

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    • Not So Jolly Boy John

      Or she…a twist in the tale

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  • Olivia

    You put disgrace on the name Olivia. Please, PLEASE… take time on proofreading. Here, I’ll do it for you:
    *All of you *So *I’ve *aren’t *This *I’ve *I *It’s *I *doesn’t
    *My *Russian. *He’s *nice… *extremely *Sometimes *hitting
    That hurt my brain.

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    • bugsbunny

      She won’t get it.

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  • Paeton

    This tapped into the darkest part of my mind. Its scary, and makes you think. Kindof like Psychosis. 10/10

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  • Hamy~

    Nice~ it really sucks you into the story and gets your heart pumping~

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  • lol

    i can make a better one

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    • atlol

      then do it don’t say you can and not do it. stupid.

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    • Anonymous

      Then freaking make a better one..
      I bet you can’t.. If you don’t like it then you should give your opinion not say shit like that..
      Grow up!!

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  • jeff

    wow i never realy knew what kind animals we realy were on the in side, but what do you realy expect someone to do in that type of systuation

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    • Wayne

      Well clearly you rip your guts out and scream until your voice chords are torn in half lol that would definately be most of us :P

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  • shadowlurker

    Damn scary…

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