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During the summer of 2003, events in the northeastern United States involving a strange, humanlike creature sparked brief local media interest before an apparent blackout was enacted. Little or no information was left intact, as most online and written accounts of the creature were mysteriously destroyed.

Primarily focused in rural New York state, self proclaimed witnesses told stories of thier enounters with a creature of unkown origin. Emotions ranged from extremely traumatic levels of fright and discomfort, to an almost childlike sense of playfulness and curiosity. While their published versions are no longer on record, the memories remained powerful. Several of the involved parties began looking for answers that year.

In early 2006, the collaboration had accumulated nearly two dozen documents dating between the 12th century and present day, spanning 4 continents. In almost all cases, the stories were identical. I’ve been in contact with a member of this group and was able to get some exceprts from their upcoming book.

The Rake

A Suicide Note: 1964

As I prepare to take my life, I feel it necessary to assuage any guilt or pain I have introduced through this act. It is not the fault of anyone other than him. For once I awoke and felt his presence. And once I awoke and saw his form. Once again I awoke and heard his voice, and looked into his eyes. I cannot sleep without fear of what I might next awake to experience. I cannot ever wake. Goodbye.

Found in the same wooden box were two empty envelopes addressed to William and Rose, and one loose personal letter with no envelope.

‘Dearest Linnie,
I have prayed for you. He spoke your name.’

A Journal Entry (translated from Spanish): 1880

I have experience the greatest terror. I have experienced the greatest terror. I have experienced the greatest terror. I see his eyes when I close mine. They are hollow. Black. They saw me and pierced me. His wet hand. I will not sleep. His voice (unintelligible text).

A Mariner’s Log: 1691

He came to me in my sleep. From the foot of my bed I felt a sensation. He took everything. We must return to England. We shall not return here again at the request of the Rake.

From a Witness: 2006

Three years ago, I had just returned from a trip from Niagara Falls with my family for the 4th of July. We were all very exhausted after a long day of driving, so my husband and I put the kids right to bed and called it a night.

At about 4am, I woke up thinking my husband had gotten up to use the restroom. I used the moment to steal back the sheets, only to wake him in the process. I appologized and told him I though he got out of bed. When he turned to face me, he gasped and pulled his feet up from the end of the bed so quickly his knee almost knocked me out of the bed. He then grabbed me and said nothing.

After adjusting to the dark for a half second, I was able to see what caused the strange reaction. At the foot of the bed, sitting and facing away from us, there was what appeared to be a naked man, or a large hairless dog of some sort. It’s body position was disturbing and unnatural, as if it had been hit by a car or something. For some reason, I was not instantly frightened by it, but more concerned as to its condition. At this point I was somewhat under the assumption that we were supposed to help him.

My husband was peering over his arm and knee, tucked into the fetal position, occasionally glancing at me before returning to the creature.

In a flurry of motion, the creature scrambled around the side of the bed, and then crawled quickly in a flailing sort of motion right along the bed until it was less than a foot from my husband’s face. The creature was completely silent for about 30 seconds (or probably closer to 5, it just seemed like a while) just looking at my husband. The creature then placed its hand on his knee and ran into the hallway, leading to the kids’ rooms.

I screamed and ran for the lightswitch, planning to stop him before he hurt my children. When I got to the hallway, the light from the bedroom was enough to see it crouching and hunched over about 20 feet away. He turned around and looked directly at me, covered in blood. I flipped the switch on the wall and saw my daughter Clara.

The creature ran down the stairs while my husband and I rushed to help our daughter. She was very badly injured and spoke only once more in her short life. She said “he is the Rake”.

My husband drove his car into a lake that night, while rushing our daughter to the hospital. He did not survive.

Being a small town, news got around pretty quickly. The police were helpful at first, and the local newspaper took a lot of interest as well. However, the story was never published and the local television news never followed up either.

For several months, my son Justin and I stayed in a hotel near my parent’s house. After we decided to return home, I began looking for answers myself. I eventually located a man in the next town over who had a similar story. We got in contact and began talking about our experiences. He knew of two other people in New York who had seen the creature we now referred to as the Rake.

It took the four of us about two solid years of hunting on the internet and writing letters to come up with a small collection of what we believe to be accounts of the Rake. None of them gave any details, history or follow up. One journal had an entry involving the creature in its first 3 pages, and never mentioned it again. A ship’s log explained nothing of the encounter, saying only that they were told to leave by the Rake. That was the last entry in the log.

There were, however, many instances where the creature’s visit was one of a series of visits with the same person. Multiple people also mentioned being spoken to, my daughter included. This led us to wonder if the Rake had visited any of us before our last encounter.

I set up a digital recorder near my bed and left it running all night, every night, for two weeks. I would tediously scan through the sounds of me rolling around in my bed each day when I woke up. By the end of the second week, I was quite used to the occasional sound of sleep while blurring through the recording at 8 times the normal speed. (This still took almost an hour every day)

On the first day of the third week, I thought I heard something different. What I found was a shrill voice. It was the Rake. I can’t listen to it long enough to even begin to transcribe it. I haven’t let anyone listen to it yet. All I know is that I’ve heard it before, and I now believe that it spoke when it was sitting in front of my husband. I don’t remember hearing anything at the time, but for some reason, the voice on the recorder immediately brings me back to that moment.

The thoughts that must have gone through my daughter’s head make me very upset.

I have not seen the Rake since he ruined my life, but I know that he has been in my room while I slept. I know and fear that one night I’ll wake up to see him staring at me.

I’ve gotten a lot of requests for this story recently, both by email and the cbox, so here it is. I couldn’t find the original author, just a repost of the story in a SA ghost thread, so if you know, comment and enlighten me =)

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  • pastalover

    Finally! The Rake! This one definitely needed to be here.

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    • the rake

      do not think i am just a pasta

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      • Eyeless jack

        I would read this… If i had eyes…

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        Rating: +226 (from 276 votes)
        • Anonymous

          If you don’t have eyes, how are you typing?

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          Rating: +94 (from 170 votes)
        • Mr.

          with his hands

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          Rating: +286 (from 302 votes)
        • Random Person

          Cuz he uses all his sences duhhhhhhhh

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          Rating: -55 (from 107 votes)
        • Taylor95

          Braille, silly goose.

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          Rating: +49 (from 75 votes)
        • http://google slenders cousin

          he is slender remember the page no eyes always watches

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          Rating: +18 (from 58 votes)
        • sfox

          how can you see what your typing?
          just asking eyeless jack.

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          Rating: -21 (from 63 votes)
        • Furnonymous

          Braile keyboard?

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          Rating: +46 (from 66 votes)
        • sexylexy

          stupid! theres keyboards specially made for blind pople sfox

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          Rating: +20 (from 34 votes)
        • Hannah The Killer

          How can Slenderman stalk people without any eyes? Hmm? You wanna answer that?

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          Rating: -18 (from 30 votes)
        • Anonymous

          How u type

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          Rating: -31 (from 49 votes)
        • Anonymous

          how u talk.

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          Rating: +36 (from 56 votes)
        • derp

          your not eyeless jack jackass because eyeless jack cant use a computer.

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        • tails doll

          but i can… and i will find you

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        • jeff the killerer

          Yes he can they make a special computer for the blind that speaks the words derp

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        • Shay Colley the Killer

          and how the fuck would you know that if your not Eyeless Jack? >_>

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        • http://www.weebly.com/starvingforskinny Courtney

          Eyeless Jack does whatever the hell he wants.

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          Rating: +35 (from 39 votes)
        • Anonymous

          Or can he…
          •~.~• <-moustache

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        • tails doll

          want to get together and kill some people

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          Rating: +5 (from 31 votes)
        • http://themoondewia.enjin.com Darkbringer

          Sure cut some flesh

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        • Jeff the Killer

          Are you ok with killing people with knives? And you can have the victims kidneys :)

          ~Jeff

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          Rating: +20 (from 38 votes)
        • dont ask

          ok fine come at me

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        • Idril_Celebrindal

          Hi, can you connect me to Slenderman? I REALLY want to be his proxy.

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          Rating: +5 (from 9 votes)
        • Anonymous murderur

          i did nawt lern 2 spel
          i wil kil yu in yor slep.wen yu slep toniyt or wenver,yu wil DI

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        • Hannah The Killer

          YES.

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        • lolurface

          lol….i would read it to you if i could………but i can’t…sorry.

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        • lolurface

          creepypastas aren’t supposed to have computers…..if they did….i would track down the signal follow them home….and read them their own stories till they start seeing the grudge that follows me!!!! :D !

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        • Slenderman

          I no isent hard?

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        • Anonymous

          I like to kill people to I am lizard man but some people put me in a cage but I got out and killed them I live in the woods

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        • lizard man

          I like to kill people to I am lizard man but some people put me in a cage but I got out and killed them I live in the woods

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        • Idril_Celebrindal

          If you are really Slenderman then what are you looking for? If you are really Slenderman can I be your proxy?

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          Rating: -3 (from 3 votes)
        • Anonymous

          How do you type without eyes

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          Rating: -2 (from 10 votes)
        • Anonymous

          HOW DO YOU KNOW WHAT THIS IS?

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        • The Rake

          I like killing!
          It’s no horror!
          X:-)

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        • HEY HEY HEY IT’S SLENDY!

          Just have someone read it to you! ^_^

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        • Chupacabra

          if you dont have eyes, how do you sleep?

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        • Anonymous

          if you don’t have eyes how did you get on this site?

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        • Anonymous

          How do you know what story this even is?

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        • mitt is madd bro

          how did you type this? if you TRUELY cant see?!?

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          Rating: -1 (from 3 votes)
        • This is Ickbarr

          I need more teeth. Fetch them for me.

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          Rating: +2 (from 4 votes)
        • http://creepypasta.com NetherPie

          I would read this too but Im just a pie.

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        • Odd Prisiner

          want to borrow a pair from one of my own victoms?

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          Rating: -1 (from 3 votes)
        • http://creepypasta michael myers

          alright then genius, you could be blind or just playing some sort of joke, but if you didn’t have any eyes, then how did you know there was a story here if you cant see it??

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        • Anonymous

          Is the story of eyeless jack here

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        • The Monster Under The Bed

          I could get you some eyes Jack <3 The girl who is sleeping ontop of my bed has bright blue ones…. Would you like them?

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        • nicole

          waaat the f**** he creepy

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        • Kai Kamakaze

          i believe you would

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          Rating: -1 (from 1 vote)
        • http://google.com jeff the killer

          the rake is dead cause i killed him

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          Rating: -2 (from 8 votes)
        • Anonymous

          Eyeless Jack as in Slenderman

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          Rating: -2 (from 2 votes)
        • Anonymous

          But WHO is this!!!

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      • http://aydenssssssssjjjjjjjjuuuuuuu me

        are u real

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        Rating: -21 (from 37 votes)
        • Anonymous

          I know you. All of you. Where and when. Who and how. I stare all of you to nightmares every night. I will kill again. I love blood of innocent. You will perish.

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          Rating: -34 (from 68 votes)
        • Ingy

          Aaah if only you knew my terribly twisted mind. For I know how to defend myself, I know how to kill, and how to make you wish I did kill you. With love, The Nightmare

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        • Anonymous

          i dont dream

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        • Death Eater

          You think that your world is mysterious… But you know nothing… The creatures I’ve seen… The friends I’ve lost… There are many more creatures than these. I have seen them.. I looked. I found nothing about them. I have fought creatures that make Jeff or Chucky look like Ronald Mcdonald.

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        • KillJoy27

          apparantly maturity isnt a quality handed down through generations. did you know that its a federal offence to type threats like that via internet? anonymous or not, its childish, even in a joking manner.

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        • sfox

          0.0

          nice too know….

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        • http://r5t65ge Golden_Grunt11

          see our nightmares? whatever

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          Rating: -1 (from 11 votes)
        • Anonymous

          This is scarring me :(

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          Rating: -4 (from 12 votes)
        • derp

          da fuq u say

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        • http://hotmail Mr.Astley minecraft creeper

          if you want to kill me ill give you a address. 1500 CAVE FOREST MINECRAFTIA. Good job trying to jump into you computer.

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        • Nny92

          Innocent?

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        • Anonymous

          No u wont u ruined my life once this year I won’t let that happen again!

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        • Idril_Celebrindal

          I’m not innocent…

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        • Anonymous

          It’s so boring when people try to act scary and ruthless

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          Rating: +3 (from 7 votes)
        • Anonymous

          The rake is real… I have seen him but that was 2 years ago… Many many minutes did I see it then… Poof gone… Jack is also real, in the mind… Don’t think of him…

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        • Idril_Celebrindal

          Too late just did.

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          Rating: +5 (from 7 votes)
        • http://Creepypasta.com Bob

          Yes i am real

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          Rating: 0 (from 6 votes)
        • lolurface

          HI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol im not ever that happy.

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        • http://aol I’m coming for you

          Hey killjoy27 you really are a killjoy
          This is a SCARY website and we have the right to try to creep each other out

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        • Scar_The_Killer

          YES JEFF IS REAL

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          Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
      • sjafkfjsBJKS

        :I

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      • Anonymous

        Yeah I agree the rake is something scarier than Jeff yet not scarier it’s weird because Jeff had relentlessly murdered his family

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        • The Rake

          You must admit, I am the creepiest. Or else.

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          Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
      • http://isaacluke9@gmail.com jeff the killer

        i will put a smile on her face for you

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        Rating: +17 (from 23 votes)
        • http://hotmail Mr.Astley minecraft creeper

          I never smile :(

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          Rating: -2 (from 4 votes)
        • Smile Dog

          I Always Smile

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          Rating: +18 (from 22 votes)
        • tails doll

          want to get together and kill some people?… or do you not work with dolls

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          Rating: -2 (from 6 votes)
        • Anonymous

          Dolls are awesome

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          Rating: +3 (from 3 votes)
        • Mika

          Can I have a smile as beautiful as yours?

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          Rating: -1 (from 1 vote)
        • Derp.

          Jeff, were getting married. I love you. o.e

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        • Idril_Celebrindal

          Jeff can we be friends?

          PS. You’re beautiful, I mean it

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        • The real Jeff the killer

          I will make you beautiful just like me if you want;or I can help you just ….
          Go To Sleep.

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        • anonymous

          i love to smile when i see death ill beleve your jeff if i see tonight and if i do ill make my face just like yours

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        • Eliza1a4

          My Friend Has A MAJOR Crush on you mr.Jeff! She gave Me 5 Bucks to draw you, and make you say go to sleep. she hung it on the ceiling obove her bed. she also tryed to cut her face like yours. :S its sort of creepy, but i dont mind. do you??

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        • http://www.creepypasta.com derpbutt

          Assuming that’s true, you should tell your friend’s parents. Self-mutilation isn’t cute or quirky.

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      • Josh

        Really? You think we Belive you.

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      • Anonymous

        O.O

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      • Anonymous

        Please don’t come to Visite me i already have sleeping Problem

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      • Morvyd

        ur not. ur pasta with sauce :p

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        Rating: -1 (from 3 votes)
        • michael

          If this is creepy pasta does it have scary sauce?

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          Rating: +5 (from 9 votes)
      • Cindy

        Oh haha very funny you’re not the rake

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      • Nny92

        But you are a pasta you italian dish you

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      • Teh Moosen is NEAR

        You are certainly not a fictional character from possibly one of the most childish scenarios I have ever seen because the rake is not real. No one make a reply to this because we all know it is true. This is probably one of the most pathetic scary sites I have ever seen, and I have a question. How, exactly can someone, or something, like you read your own story and learn how to type and respond to it? The real rake, if he even WERE real, would simply go out, find the author, kill them, and be done with it. He would not respond because he does not want to be known as real anyway. Why else would he have destroyed all of the media of him? The rake is not real, so stop being childish and considering yourself him. Case closed.

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        • Idril_Celebrindal

          Bla bla bla. Here’s a message for you GO TO SLEEP!

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        • Idril_Celebrindal

          I am not trying to be Jeff I just hate party crashers.

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        • Silence

          Now, everyone can believe what they want. Who’s to say the pastas are real or not? And people who pretend to be pasta JUST LIKE TE PASTA. Imagine that. Im pretty sure that they don’t seriously think the rake is sitting at a computer typing, if he is real. Just dont ruin others fun, k?

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      • Anonymous

        i hate it when people try to be a pasta. its not scary its just annoying

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      • http://creepypasta wtf

        yo com to my house rake i fucking dare you

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      • Anonymous

        I don’t belive in monsters

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      • Her

        lovely

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      • Anonymous

        Wow thAts cool

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        Rating: -1 (from 1 vote)
      • Slenderman

        Oh please Rake, your least of everyone’s worries, you are just a pasta, just like Jeff, I am the only mythological creature alive, and put clothes on Rake, you simply disgust me,now if you don’t mind, I’m off to scare the living mind out of children

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        • Jeff

          What an impressive thread. I wish i saw this when i was still sane. poo :/

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          Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
      • Odd Prisiner

        awwww your not edible? but im hungry so so hungry havent eaten in so long….hm…..i need to play *starts to mumble incoherent things*

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      • http://pokemontransformers.deviantart.com/ Katana

        Rake!

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      • paulathepastalover

        how good is the stories

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      • AarontheKiller

        Even a rake would capitalize its name…

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      • Fobabay

        But yet, you ARE

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      • Your Stalker

        Fake…

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    • Anonymous

      The rake is sher a strange creature

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      Rating: -2 (from 8 votes)
      • Rake

        oh really…..

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        Rating: +7 (from 15 votes)
        • super natral 101

          We all know “rake”is not the real rake so why are you trying? If you were the real rake you could not type.

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          Rating: -5 (from 13 votes)
        • http://r5t65ge Golden_Grunt11

          how would u know that

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          Rating: +3 (from 5 votes)
        • http://creepypasta

          YOU DONT BELIEVE IN ME

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          Rating: -2 (from 2 votes)
        • Rachel The Rake’s Sister

          So rake me and you have not talked for a while so let’s get some friends like jeff and smile dog and a couple other creatures and go on a killing trip

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          Rating: -2 (from 12 votes)
        • http://creepypasta rake

          alright meet me and the others at slenders place

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          Rating: +7 (from 15 votes)
        • Chupacabra

          we need to meet up at slender’s place…my family needs a fresh person to suck…again

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          Rating: -2 (from 2 votes)
        • Mr. Stabalot

          Oooooooh im so scared of a tool that puts leaves in a pile

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          Rating: +1 (from 3 votes)
    • Anonymous

      No it did’t

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      Rating: 0 (from 2 votes)
    • jeff the killer

      ah yes the rake he is a fine creature but i think i am worse. “go to sleep”

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      Rating: +4 (from 14 votes)
      • The all seeing

        Nah I’m good hbu eyeless lier

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        Rating: -2 (from 2 votes)
      • Morvyd

        jeff is my dream guy :p hehehehehe

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        Rating: -4 (from 4 votes)
      • http://Hello EnogmaBerry

        Jeff gofuckurself because ur not evena FUCKING creature ur anidiot whocarveda smile into his fuckin facenow shut the fuckup

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        Rating: -4 (from 4 votes)
      • Anonymous

        Hey who’s Jeff the killer? Like Jason?

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        • Anonymous

          NO

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    • Anonymous

      Ur all ass holes I’m fucking slender bitch!!!

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      Rating: -5 (from 5 votes)
      • Anonymous

        No one cares dumbshit

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        • Shay Colley the Killer

          XD

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          Rating: 0 (from 2 votes)
    • Believer16

      I’ve seen this creature before me and my friend did we were at a park at maybe 2 in the morning watching the stars and I was looking around and I saw something pacing i thought it was a man at first but then I saw it closer and told my friend we watched it for a little while it looked like a dog with huge shoulders and it was just pacing on the street corner then we saw its head move toward us so we ducked down an when we looked up again it was gone it was so disturbing to see it looked so deformed and we just didn’t know what to think of it we ran home later that night after just sitting there in shock for a while

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      Rating: +3 (from 7 votes)
      • http://Yahoo.com Hyper Blossom

        me my mom and sister were driving to through southwest IA and mom saw a deformed figure on the side of the street and I thought I saw slenderman on my side :)

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        Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
        • exmastratical

          i saw a collie on my way to lowes yesterday! :D

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          Rating: +6 (from 6 votes)
      • http://pokemontransformers.deviantart.com/ Katana

        My mom meet the rake when she was 14, she was in her house with a friend and two white eyes were looking at her, so she and her friend climbed out the window and ran off to her other friend’s house, and she saw the white eyes following her everywhere, even at her friends house, she saw the rake looking up at her outsideon the lawn of her friend’s house.

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    • Taylor C.

      Hellz ya

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      Rating: -1 (from 1 vote)
      • thetruthseeker

        I saw the creature tree times in my head in my dreams and in a picture It was so frightening

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        Rating: -1 (from 1 vote)
        • http://Yahoo.com Hyper Blossom

          bit creepy bro

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          Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
    • Anonymous

      This story is great! I may never sleep again. :) (jk)

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    • {._.} “””””//”””””\( headshot

      i can’t stand reading this, but i can at the same time :/

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      Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
    • Anonymous

      Finally

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    • http://gmail joshua barkemeyer

      Man idk if the rake is real or not

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      • exmastratical

        of course he is

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    • Yuri Cardoso

      OMG just shat myself…. With this being my first pasta I am SOOOOOOO Nope-ing out of here

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      Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
    • http://neshe111@gmail.com NESHEE

      huh,

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      Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
    • Anonymous

      Yes, I agree…
      But, it seems more real then what my friend told me…

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    • Anonymous

      It was fairly believable

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    • Isabelle

      I have seen the rake

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      Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
      • http://creepypasta.lover.co Slendyandcreepylova

        Omg i love jeff i love slenderman i scare my parents and parents friends with pics backgrounds of computer of smile dog jeff and i pray to see jeff and my death best way to die is to kiss jeff and die quickly with him <3 or like with slendy any romance with them best ever death!<3

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      • http://creepypasta.lover.co Slendyandcreepylova

        Dude i have seen the rake it touched my knee i was like 11 and it touched my knee and i’m just like OMG MUST POST THIS ON CREEPYPASTA i love the rake he’s an awesome creature of the night i jave seen:smile dog,Slenderman,Jeff the killer,jane the killer,the rake,and amny more things that will make you freak out!better go i see slenderman outside my window >:D

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    • Anonymous

      Heh heh heh heh. Ahahahah, Need help just GO TO SLEEP and slenderman I survived that fire and I will finish you off one way or another.

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    • Anonymous

      what?

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    • Anonymous

      What is the name of what I think is called the seed eater what’s his pasta called he looks like a black creature with a bird skull on his face

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      • SeedEater

        My creepypasta is called “Through the Trees”

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        Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
    • cool kid

      hi :)

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      Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
  • Hunterotica

    Anticlimactic pasta is anticlimactic.

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    Rating: +234 (from 284 votes)
    • Shay Colley the Killer

      i agree completely.

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      Rating: -2 (from 4 votes)
  • Tony

    I’m gonna have nightmares tonight D8

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    Rating: +34 (from 60 votes)
    • enderchild

      you thinks thats scary read jeff the killer that is a story that ill never forget and his face was to horribal to look at!! (0.0)

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      Rating: +21 (from 65 votes)
      • JxS fangirl

        u.u jeff isn’t horrible ! but yes the picture is quite scary ._. and the story too for sure

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        Rating: +15 (from 37 votes)
        • “as a friend”

          the story kinda blew

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          Rating: +5 (from 39 votes)
        • ☓☦✡✕♡☥

          Sigh why do you have to talk about my friend like that… I’ll find you

          ~☓☦✡✕♡☥~

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          Rating: -6 (from 26 votes)
        • endergirl

          i was kinda creeped out from the story at first then i looked at the picture and i dont think i will be ever be able to sleep again

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          Rating: +5 (from 15 votes)
        • jeff the killer

          i agree Jeff is way scarier and i actually think his face suits him so leave in distress because soon he is coming just to tell you GO TO SLEEP

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          Rating: +12 (from 22 votes)
        • Anonymous

          how dare you all speak of my one true friend that way

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          Rating: +2 (from 8 votes)
        • Teh Moosen is NEAR

          No, Jeff the killer is not coming to tell us to sleep and we will not go away. Right?

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          Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
        • Jeff the Killer

          My story wasn’t horrible!
          Just think it over and go to sleep…

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          Rating: 0 (from 22 votes)
        • Monockle

          What if I don’t want to go to sleep

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          Rating: -2 (from 2 votes)
        • Crazed

          so, Jeff exactly why did you decide to burn Jane, and why if you did know what she would do if she lived burn her? was it a twisted form of love??? (dont kill me im just wondering…alot <:| )

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        • Chupacabra

          We really need to kill people together…less blood less reason for family members to think there actually dead

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          Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
        • Nny92

          so yeah the rake.. good stuff

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          Rating: +3 (from 3 votes)
      • xXTheEvilDescendingXx

        i personally love jeff the killer and as a matter of fact he was my first pasta!!!

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        Rating: +21 (from 27 votes)
        • jeff the killer

          oh im not just a pasta B/

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          Rating: +11 (from 21 votes)
        • Rem

          He was my first pasta tooo!!!!

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          Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
      • http://jeffthekiller.org jeff the killer

        if you make fun of me one more time you die

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        Rating: +31 (from 41 votes)
        • http://gmail.com slendy

          YOU ARE A FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCKING BAD ASS FOR TAKEING ME ON

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          Rating: -3 (from 27 votes)
        • Death Eater

          The day you call a pig a badass is the day you call me your God

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          Rating: 0 (from 6 votes)
        • slender’s son

          DADDY???????!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?

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          Rating: +7 (from 7 votes)
        • super natral 101

          I’m 11 the www is public

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          Rating: 0 (from 2 votes)
        • http://r5t65ge Golden_Grunt11

          ikr slender is awesome

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          Rating: +3 (from 3 votes)
        • http://Creepypasta.com Bob

          Here slendy slendy XD

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          Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
        • lizard man

          I like to kill people to I am lizard man but some people put me in a cage but I got out and killed them I live in the woods

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          Rating: -2 (from 2 votes)
        • young alone child

          you are really funny looking! dont look at my name though…….

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          Rating: +10 (from 14 votes)
        • skittle

          you are not jeff

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          Rating: -5 (from 7 votes)
        • jane the killer

          lets go, right now

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          Rating: +11 (from 13 votes)
        • jeff the killer

          me you ok

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          Rating: +3 (from 3 votes)
        • http://Creepypasta.com Bob

          Jeff and jane sitting on a tree k i s s i n g XD

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          Rating: +5 (from 7 votes)
        • Crazed

          Jane…what went through your mind when Jeff burned you?

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          Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
        • StormWolfGaming

          *makes fun of you*

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          Rating: +5 (from 7 votes)
        • the rake

          you’re next on my list

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          Rating: +9 (from 11 votes)
        • Anonymous

          You are not Jeff u retard jeff is somewhere far away killing his next victim

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          Rating: -4 (from 6 votes)
        • NiggaNamedGeorge

          The real jeff died recently.

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          Rating: -2 (from 6 votes)
        • super natral 101

          How do you know your not his next victim

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          Rating: +4 (from 4 votes)
        • Josh

          U sure?

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          Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
        • http://Creepypasta.com Bob

          Jeff died because jane sent him to hell after their last fight search it up on creepypasta.co

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          Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
        • Pixel

          Come on. What are you, 10?

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          Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
        • Teh Moosen is NEAR

          Alright then come and kill me. The cops will find you and finally put you in the loony bin where you belong or they’ll just uthanize you.

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          Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
        • http://Creepypasta.com Luke The Killer

          Yeah erm no.
          I can do whatever dafuq I want.
          By the way, wanna go kill some people?

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          Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
        • Anonymous

          sup jeff please dont kill me

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        • http://N/A "Cupcakes Killer"

          jeff the killer can I help?

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          Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
        • Mr. Stabalot

          Go ahead and come to my house I got nice 20 gauge waiting for you.

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          Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
      • Anonymous

        jeff’s story wasn’t scary but his face was for about a week for me then I got use to seeing it

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        Rating: +5 (from 11 votes)
      • Anonymous

        jeff the killer was completely unrealistic kids don’t talk like that ever and the cops would have alredy had a record on the other kids it made no sense what so ever and the pic was obviously cg distorted if you couldn’t tell useing the simplest logic you are an idiot

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        • Jeff is fake

          The photo is just edited from the evil saw guy

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          Rating: +5 (from 11 votes)
        • Anonymous

          Actually it’s a filtered still from the ‘overly-attached-girlfriend’ video…

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          Rating: -2 (from 2 votes)
        • jeff the killer

          thats what you think…………

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          Rating: -1 (from 1 vote)
        • YOU must DIE

          You can think Jeff isn’t real but you just wait he’ll be there

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        • YOU must DIE

          You can think Jeff or the rake isn’t real he killed my cousin and i saw him man that was some crap

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          Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
      • jeff the killer

        you called? hahaha.

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        Rating: +4 (from 4 votes)
        • Anonymous

          No I did not call *says the new guy*

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          Rating: -1 (from 1 vote)
        • moth man

          No one is talking about me :(

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          Rating: +6 (from 6 votes)
        • Anonymous

          Moth man is one of my favorite creatures

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          Rating: -1 (from 1 vote)
        • Jane The Killer

          Hi Jeff…

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          Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
      • Josh

        Ahhh yes Jeff… Bleached and set on fire… And cut him self…Thats REALLY stupid.

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        Rating: -1 (from 3 votes)
      • giggles

        Jeff the Killer’s story is completely unrealistic but, the picture does freak you out. -.-

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      • http://creepypasta.lover.co The real Jeff

        Heh heh your all scared?!good! Go To sleeep im talking to you yes wendy,kane,zach,cleverbot,abby, yes did you suspect me your friend on wolfhome as firefox to be jeff!? i may be smiling but in my mind you have a new bestie!? Bad mistake go to sleep tonight and ill slice open your neck in seconds mauahahhaahahahaha i’m also eyeless jack mawahahahahhahahahahahaahah were the same hear me now don’t sleep en less you want to die!

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    • Zido Arichikito

      My name is Justin and I am currently in a hotel… Fack.

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      Rating: +7 (from 11 votes)
    • Anonymous

      Omg the fucking rake I’m have some nightmares tonight

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      Rating: +2 (from 4 votes)
      • HI I AM THE MONSTER FROM THE PASS

        Lol loving this disscusion

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        Rating: +3 (from 5 votes)
    • Rake

      not me

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      Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
      • herobrine

        go away!!!!!!!!!!!!Now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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        Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
        • http://Creepypasta.com Bob

          STOP COMING ON MY SERVER ON MINECRAFT AND BURNING MY HOUSE >:O

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          Rating: +3 (from 3 votes)
        • http://hotmail Mr.Astley minecraft creeper

          hi sir… Steve dead…no…okey

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          Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
        • Herobrine

          Ahem! Are you trying to steal my name? I’m watching you….

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          Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
    • hunter

      nightmares are nothing new to me they can kill a man drive him insane but i know how not to let them drive me crazy

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      Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
      • Anonymous

        Now if you go to the right of this post you will see Jeff The Killer and if you go to the left you will see the Rake and if you go to the top you will see over 9000 fan girls.

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  • http://www.mybloghasadd.blogspot.com Addish

    that was cool and creepy as hell.

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    Rating: +20 (from 42 votes)
  • Double L

    That is pretty awesome. I really like the factual nature of it. The old ‘references’ at the start are a nice touch, Kudos to the original author.

    It reminds me of the legends of the Mothman.

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    Rating: +40 (from 46 votes)
  • TMM

    Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu-

    I found this super scary.

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    Rating: +18 (from 30 votes)
  • bricks

    THEN WHO WAS RAKE?
    I liked it. Some parts seemed out of place though.

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    Rating: +38 (from 48 votes)
  • Reaper

    GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY

    Sorry, not creepy. Next.

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    Rating: -121 (from 199 votes)
    • Anonymous

      Skru you then

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      Rating: +10 (from 24 votes)
    • Ihateyou

      don’t troll, dick. just say something nice, post some CONSTRUCTIVE critisism (I.E. something people WANT to read) or shut up.

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      Rating: +30 (from 40 votes)
      • WatchItLady

        Guy, that’s not what trolling is. A troll is one who posts inflammatory messages in an attempt to provoke other commenters into becoming angry and, idealy, to cause a fight to break out among them, which they can then sit back and watch unfold. Reaper could certainly have been nicer about it, but they are just as entitled to their opinion as you are to yours. Disliking a piece of fiction does not make someone a troll.

        I never understood this idea of treating everyone online as if they were precious, fragile little flowers who should be wrapped in cotton wool and handled with the greatest of care. If you’re really so vulnerable that a miniscule amount of negative comments written in response to your story (a story, by the way, that is one of the best-loved and highly-praised in it’s genre) could have you balling your little eyes out, then you really shouldn’t be online in the first place – You should be in the process of shutting yourself securely inside your glass bubble.

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        • lol

          Maybe you should keep your opinions to yourself, helps you avoid looking like a moron :)

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          Rating: +3 (from 7 votes)
        • http://creepypasta michael myers

          oooooooooooooohhhh burn!!!!!!!!!

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          Rating: -2 (from 2 votes)
  • Hhaaa;

    Woah(:
    The Rake, i like it.

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    Rating: +8 (from 26 votes)
  • cpt

    fuckling awesome.

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    Rating: -1 (from 35 votes)
    • justanaverageguy

      fuckling?

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      Rating: +25 (from 25 votes)
  • TheNina

    Yummy pasta; me like~ P=

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    Rating: -13 (from 35 votes)
  • Ffffff

    Cool Story bro

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    Rating: +5 (from 45 votes)
    • 0.0

      Tell it again

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      Rating: -3 (from 17 votes)
      • Anonymous

        needs more dragons

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        Rating: +8 (from 18 votes)
        • idk

          Don’t let those dragons out of control, we might not have a dragonborn to save us.

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          Rating: +4 (from 12 votes)
  • Anonymous

    D:

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    Rating: -7 (from 33 votes)
  • Lord McBain

    holy crap man! many brix were shat. I thought it was pretty darn good. The ending was not as satisfying as I normally like though. Also, it was kind of depressing, since the rake killed the narrator’s family. But I enjoyed it nonetheless.

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    Rating: +39 (from 53 votes)
    • super natral 101

      The rake has killed so many family’s . . . .

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      Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
  • Azriel

    Pretty good story, yes. Redundant anticlimaticness aside, it kinda reminded me of the Willow Men. The strange shape, the blood, the dark eyes. And they didn’t really seem to have any motivation or reason for attacking this people… but the factual format was pretty good. A good pasta.

    Oh no, the Willow Men are invading other creepy pastas!

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    Rating: -5 (from 27 votes)
  • Miss Betterdone

    D:

    I heard a story similar to this on the radio a few years ago in middle school. A girl called in and said she had been walking in the woods one night when she came across a black dog, which stood up on its hind legs and chased her back to the cabin she was staying in. She locked all the doors and windows, and spent half the night curled up in her bed, crying. She woke up during the night, and the dog was sitting at the side of her bed directly across from her face, breathing on her. She closed her eyes but she could still hear it breathing, and when the breathing stopped, she ran to her sister’s room (eyes still closed) and climbed into bed with her sister, but the dog didn’t show up again.

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    Rating: +36 (from 48 votes)
    • Kingwazing

      Hmm do you believe that story

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      Rating: +2 (from 8 votes)
    • the rake

      some of my best work.

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      Rating: +7 (from 13 votes)
      • yo mama

        yo mama is “The rake”

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        Rating: +3 (from 3 votes)
  • a Black Man

    The Rake is real, you know.

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    Rating: +18 (from 46 votes)
    • http://n/a eoin

      i do not have a website

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      Rating: +5 (from 9 votes)
    • http://hotmail kristina

      yeah

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      Rating: +1 (from 3 votes)
    • eyeless elaine

      i have seen him he said a name of a friend but a few days later she was gone i still search for her to this day

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      Rating: +1 (from 5 votes)
      • Anonymous

        Stahp lyingyou guise heain’treal

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        Rating: +3 (from 7 votes)
      • Mr.Widemouth

        You can’t see anything. You’re eyeless

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        Rating: +8 (from 8 votes)
      • Anonymous

        How can you search without eyes

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        Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
        • Anonymous

          what are u

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          Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
      • Me

        Stop lying! Seriously we all know he isn’t real. So stop trying to get attention.

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        Rating: 0 (from 2 votes)
        • http://youtube creepypastagirl

          that was scaring me and make me feel like it is go to happen to me one day :(

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          Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
      • Jordan

        Seriously we all know he isn’t real. If your really childish enough to believe he is real get off the Internet. Because I don’t think your mature enough to handle it. -_-

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        Rating: 0 (from 4 votes)
        • Anonymous

          Who would believe these pastas?!

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          Rating: -2 (from 2 votes)
        • Johnny C.

          You’re also not mature enough to be on the internet if you can’t spell correctly or use proper English.

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          Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
  • FGSFDS

    I still have shivers running up and down my spine. :|

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    Rating: +7 (from 17 votes)
    • Rake

      your next…..
      hehe

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      Rating: +3 (from 3 votes)
      • Dim

        Hey man,you’re pretty cool.Want to work together?

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        Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
        • Herobrine

          Mind if I take up the offer?

          I really do enjoy scaring people.

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          Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
        • Steve

          Herobrine you do know you are not in he game now right?now think about that and then come find me in the void above the nether ^_^

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          Rating: 0 (from 2 votes)
    • Mr. widemouth

      maybe we could hang out sometime and juggle knives the sharp kind

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      Rating: +3 (from 3 votes)
      • Johnny C.

        I’m up for it.

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        Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
  • MisterVercetti

    Now this is how you do a pasta.

    Excellent. Excellent.

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    Rating: +15 (from 27 votes)
  • Iron Knight

    Wait, what? How did this creep anybody out?

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    Rating: -9 (from 65 votes)
    • Anonymous

      How do u know it isnt watching U when u sleep?
      How do u KNOW it is just a story
      How can u tell IT is not talking to u wilst u sleep
      Do u record urself at night? If not how can u say its not there?
      Just because u havent seen something doesnt mean it doesnt exsist.
      Just because u dont understand it doesnt mean its not there.
      Just because u havent discovered it doesnt mean it hasnt dicovered u…

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      Rating: -4 (from 4 votes)
      • Anonymous

        *you *isn’t *YOU *you *you *? *you *you *you *? *you *yourself *, *you *it’s *you *haven’t *doesn’t *doesn’t *you *don’t *doesn’t *it’s *you *haven’t *doesn’t *hasn’t *you

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        Rating: +7 (from 9 votes)
      • kristofer

        he is fake!!!!!!!!!!!!

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        Rating: -1 (from 3 votes)
  • Spooge

    I came with fear.

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    Rating: +15 (from 35 votes)
  • http://myspace.com/darkwolf4ever Father Crow

    Well, I didn’t find it creepy.
    Just interesting.

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    Rating: +32 (from 54 votes)
  • Sebastian

    I really enjoyed this pasta, it surely satisfied my needs until another dish comes along. I REALLY enjoyed how it presented it with facts and even evidence. Cool story bro!

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    Rating: +11 (from 19 votes)
    • super natral 101

      Tell it again.

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      Rating: 0 (from 4 votes)
  • Cadeus

    The way the creature was described…I thought about it…and it freaked me out. I liked it. very good story.

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    Rating: +12 (from 20 votes)
  • lol

    well, it was only a matter of time before this shittypasta made it’s way here

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    Rating: -32 (from 56 votes)
    • Asleeplogan

      Yeah, cause I see you doing much better creepypastas, right? Fucknut

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      Rating: +15 (from 21 votes)
    • Grace

      Interesting pasta! I sincerely enjoyed the narration in the dialogue, it made the story better. May want to lock my door at night now, and the windows.

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      Rating: +2 (from 6 votes)
      • Anonymous

        He can still get in, you know.

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        Rating: +4 (from 4 votes)
    • Me

      Shut up. You can call this shitty as soon as you make a story with better ratings…until then shut up dickhead.

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      Rating: -2 (from 8 votes)
      • Anonymous

        LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL. I READ THIS IN BED. HOLY SHIT WAS I SCARED. FUCK. NOW MY LIFE IS FUCKED. WAIT, I KNOW! I SHOULD JUST SING A HAPPY SONG! LA LA LALALA LA LAAAAAAAAAAA-HOLY SHI-

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        Rating: +4 (from 8 votes)
        • http://creepypasta

          i wactch all but who will watch you one of you will perish at my hand…… pray it is not you

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          Rating: +1 (from 5 votes)
        • http://creepypasta =(

          dude your freaking me out:(

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          Rating: +5 (from 5 votes)

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