The Rake

Add this post to your list of favorites!During the summer of 2003, events in the northeastern United States involving a strange, humanlike creature sparked brief local media interest before an apparent blackout was enacted. Little or no information was left intact, as most online and written accounts of the creature were mysteriously destroyed.
Primarily focused in rural New York state, self proclaimed witnesses told stories of thier enounters with a creature of unkown origin. Emotions ranged from extremely traumatic levels of fright and discomfort, to an almost childlike sense of playfulness and curiosity. While their published versions are no longer on record, the memories remained powerful. Several of the involved parties began looking for answers that year.
In early 2006, the collaboration had accumulated nearly two dozen documents dating between the 12th century and present day, spanning 4 continents. In almost all cases, the stories were identical. I’ve been in contact with a member of this group and was able to get some exceprts from their upcoming book.
The Rake
A Suicide Note: 1964
As I prepare to take my life, I feel it necessary to assuage any guilt or pain I have introduced through this act. It is not the fault of anyone other than him. For once I awoke and felt his presence. And once I awoke and saw his form. Once again I awoke and heard his voice, and looked into his eyes. I cannot sleep without fear of what I might next awake to experience. I cannot ever wake. Goodbye.
Found in the same wooden box were two empty envelopes addressed to William and Rose, and one loose personal letter with no envelope.
‘Dearest Linnie,
I have prayed for you. He spoke your name.’
A Journal Entry (translated from Spanish): 1880
I have experience the greatest terror. I have experienced the greatest terror. I have experienced the greatest terror. I see his eyes when I close mine. They are hollow. Black. They saw me and pierced me. His wet hand. I will not sleep. His voice (unintelligible text).
A Mariner’s Log: 1691
He came to me in my sleep. From the foot of my bed I felt a sensation. He took everything. We must return to England. We shall not return here again at the request of the Rake.
From a Witness: 2006
Three years ago, I had just returned from a trip from Niagara Falls with my family for the 4th of July. We were all very exhausted after a long day of driving, so my husband and I put the kids right to bed and called it a night.
At about 4am, I woke up thinking my husband had gotten up to use the restroom. I used the moment to steal back the sheets, only to wake him in the process. I appologized and told him I though he got out of bed. When he turned to face me, he gasped and pulled his feet up from the end of the bed so quickly his knee almost knocked me out of the bed. He then grabbed me and said nothing.
After adjusting to the dark for a half second, I was able to see what caused the strange reaction. At the foot of the bed, sitting and facing away from us, there was what appeared to be a naked man, or a large hairless dog of some sort. It’s body position was disturbing and unnatural, as if it had been hit by a car or something. For some reason, I was not instantly frightened by it, but more concerned as to its condition. At this point I was somewhat under the assumption that we were supposed to help him.
My husband was peering over his arm and knee, tucked into the fetal position, occasionally glancing at me before returning to the creature.
In a flurry of motion, the creature scrambled around the side of the bed, and then crawled quickly in a flailing sort of motion right along the bed until it was less than a foot from my husband’s face. The creature was completely silent for about 30 seconds (or probably closer to 5, it just seemed like a while) just looking at my husband. The creature then placed its hand on his knee and ran into the hallway, leading to the kids’ rooms.
I screamed and ran for the lightswitch, planning to stop him before he hurt my children. When I got to the hallway, the light from the bedroom was enough to see it crouching and hunched over about 20 feet away. He turned around and looked directly at me, covered in blood. I flipped the switch on the wall and saw my daughter Clara.
The creature ran down the stairs while my husband and I rushed to help our daughter. She was very badly injured and spoke only once more in her short life. She said “he is the Rake”.
My husband drove his car into a lake that night, while rushing our daughter to the hospital. He did not survive.
Being a small town, news got around pretty quickly. The police were helpful at first, and the local newspaper took a lot of interest as well. However, the story was never published and the local television news never followed up either.
For several months, my son Justin and I stayed in a hotel near my parent’s house. After we decided to return home, I began looking for answers myself. I eventually located a man in the next town over who had a similar story. We got in contact and began talking about our experiences. He knew of two other people in New York who had seen the creature we now referred to as the Rake.
It took the four of us about two solid years of hunting on the internet and writing letters to come up with a small collection of what we believe to be accounts of the Rake. None of them gave any details, history or follow up. One journal had an entry involving the creature in its first 3 pages, and never mentioned it again. A ship’s log explained nothing of the encounter, saying only that they were told to leave by the Rake. That was the last entry in the log.
There were, however, many instances where the creature’s visit was one of a series of visits with the same person. Multiple people also mentioned being spoken to, my daughter included. This led us to wonder if the Rake had visited any of us before our last encounter.
I set up a digital recorder near my bed and left it running all night, every night, for two weeks. I would tediously scan through the sounds of me rolling around in my bed each day when I woke up. By the end of the second week, I was quite used to the occasional sound of sleep while blurring through the recording at 8 times the normal speed. (This still took almost an hour every day)
On the first day of the third week, I thought I heard something different. What I found was a shrill voice. It was the Rake. I can’t listen to it long enough to even begin to transcribe it. I haven’t let anyone listen to it yet. All I know is that I’ve heard it before, and I now believe that it spoke when it was sitting in front of my husband. I don’t remember hearing anything at the time, but for some reason, the voice on the recorder immediately brings me back to that moment.
The thoughts that must have gone through my daughter’s head make me very upset.
I have not seen the Rake since he ruined my life, but I know that he has been in my room while I slept. I know and fear that one night I’ll wake up to see him staring at me.
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I’ve gotten a lot of requests for this story recently, both by email and the cbox, so here it is. I couldn’t find the original author, just a repost of the story in a SA ghost thread, so if you know, comment and enlighten me =)
The Rake,


Finally! The Rake! This one definitely needed to be here.
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do not think i am just a pasta
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I would read this… If i had eyes…
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If you don’t have eyes, how are you typing?
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with his hands
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Cuz he uses all his sences duhhhhhhhh
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Braille, silly goose.
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he is slender remember the page no eyes always watches
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how can you see what your typing?
just asking eyeless jack.
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Braile keyboard?
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stupid! theres keyboards specially made for blind pople sfox
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How can Slenderman stalk people without any eyes? Hmm? You wanna answer that?
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How u type
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how u talk.
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your not eyeless jack jackass because eyeless jack cant use a computer.
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but i can… and i will find you
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Yes he can they make a special computer for the blind that speaks the words derp
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and how the fuck would you know that if your not Eyeless Jack? >_>
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Eyeless Jack does whatever the hell he wants.
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Or can he…
•~.~• <-moustache
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want to get together and kill some people
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Sure cut some flesh
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Are you ok with killing people with knives? And you can have the victims kidneys :)
~Jeff
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ok fine come at me
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Hi, can you connect me to Slenderman? I REALLY want to be his proxy.
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i did nawt lern 2 spel
i wil kil yu in yor slep.wen yu slep toniyt or wenver,yu wil DI
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YES.
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lol….i would read it to you if i could………but i can’t…sorry.
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creepypastas aren’t supposed to have computers…..if they did….i would track down the signal follow them home….and read them their own stories till they start seeing the grudge that follows me!!!! :D !
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I no isent hard?
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I like to kill people to I am lizard man but some people put me in a cage but I got out and killed them I live in the woods
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I like to kill people to I am lizard man but some people put me in a cage but I got out and killed them I live in the woods
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If you are really Slenderman then what are you looking for? If you are really Slenderman can I be your proxy?
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How do you type without eyes
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HOW DO YOU KNOW WHAT THIS IS?
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I like killing!
It’s no horror!
X:-)
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Just have someone read it to you! ^_^
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if you dont have eyes, how do you sleep?
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if you don’t have eyes how did you get on this site?
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How do you know what story this even is?
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how did you type this? if you TRUELY cant see?!?
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I need more teeth. Fetch them for me.
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are u real
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I know you. All of you. Where and when. Who and how. I stare all of you to nightmares every night. I will kill again. I love blood of innocent. You will perish.
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Aaah if only you knew my terribly twisted mind. For I know how to defend myself, I know how to kill, and how to make you wish I did kill you. With love, The Nightmare
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i dont dream
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You think that your world is mysterious… But you know nothing… The creatures I’ve seen… The friends I’ve lost… There are many more creatures than these. I have seen them.. I looked. I found nothing about them. I have fought creatures that make Jeff or Chucky look like Ronald Mcdonald.
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apparantly maturity isnt a quality handed down through generations. did you know that its a federal offence to type threats like that via internet? anonymous or not, its childish, even in a joking manner.
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nice too know….
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see our nightmares? whatever
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This is scarring me :(
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da fuq u say
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if you want to kill me ill give you a address. 1500 CAVE FOREST MINECRAFTIA. Good job trying to jump into you computer.
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Innocent?
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No u wont u ruined my life once this year I won’t let that happen again!
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I’m not innocent…
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It’s so boring when people try to act scary and ruthless
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The rake is real… I have seen him but that was 2 years ago… Many many minutes did I see it then… Poof gone… Jack is also real, in the mind… Don’t think of him…
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Too late just did.
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Yes i am real
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HI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol im not ever that happy.
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Hey killjoy27 you really are a killjoy
This is a SCARY website and we have the right to try to creep each other out
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:I
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Yeah I agree the rake is something scarier than Jeff yet not scarier it’s weird because Jeff had relentlessly murdered his family
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i will put a smile on her face for you
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I never smile :(
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I Always Smile
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want to get together and kill some people?… or do you not work with dolls
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Dolls are awesome
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Can I have a smile as beautiful as yours?
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Jeff, were getting married. I love you. o.e
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Jeff can we be friends?
PS. You’re beautiful, I mean it
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I will make you beautiful just like me if you want;or I can help you just ….
Go To Sleep.
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Really? You think we Belive you.
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O.O
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Please don’t come to Visite me i already have sleeping Problem
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ur not. ur pasta with sauce :p
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If this is creepy pasta does it have scary sauce?
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Oh haha very funny you’re not the rake
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But you are a pasta you italian dish you
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You are certainly not a fictional character from possibly one of the most childish scenarios I have ever seen because the rake is not real. No one make a reply to this because we all know it is true. This is probably one of the most pathetic scary sites I have ever seen, and I have a question. How, exactly can someone, or something, like you read your own story and learn how to type and respond to it? The real rake, if he even WERE real, would simply go out, find the author, kill them, and be done with it. He would not respond because he does not want to be known as real anyway. Why else would he have destroyed all of the media of him? The rake is not real, so stop being childish and considering yourself him. Case closed.
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Bla bla bla. Here’s a message for you GO TO SLEEP!
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I am not trying to be Jeff I just hate party crashers.
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Now, everyone can believe what they want. Who’s to say the pastas are real or not? And people who pretend to be pasta JUST LIKE TE PASTA. Imagine that. Im pretty sure that they don’t seriously think the rake is sitting at a computer typing, if he is real. Just dont ruin others fun, k?
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i hate it when people try to be a pasta. its not scary its just annoying
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yo com to my house rake i fucking dare you
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I don’t belive in monsters
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lovely
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The rake is sher a strange creature
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oh really…..
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We all know “rake”is not the real rake so why are you trying? If you were the real rake you could not type.
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how would u know that
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YOU DONT BELIEVE IN ME
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So rake me and you have not talked for a while so let’s get some friends like jeff and smile dog and a couple other creatures and go on a killing trip
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alright meet me and the others at slenders place
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we need to meet up at slender’s place…my family needs a fresh person to suck…again
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No it did’t
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ah yes the rake he is a fine creature but i think i am worse. “go to sleep”
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Nah I’m good hbu eyeless lier
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jeff is my dream guy :p hehehehehe
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Jeff gofuckurself because ur not evena FUCKING creature ur anidiot whocarveda smile into his fuckin facenow shut the fuckup
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Hey who’s Jeff the killer? Like Jason?
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NO
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Ur all ass holes I’m fucking slender bitch!!!
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No one cares dumbshit
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XD
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I’ve seen this creature before me and my friend did we were at a park at maybe 2 in the morning watching the stars and I was looking around and I saw something pacing i thought it was a man at first but then I saw it closer and told my friend we watched it for a little while it looked like a dog with huge shoulders and it was just pacing on the street corner then we saw its head move toward us so we ducked down an when we looked up again it was gone it was so disturbing to see it looked so deformed and we just didn’t know what to think of it we ran home later that night after just sitting there in shock for a while
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Hellz ya
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I saw the creature tree times in my head in my dreams and in a picture It was so frightening
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This story is great! I may never sleep again. :) (jk)
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i can’t stand reading this, but i can at the same time :/
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Anticlimactic pasta is anticlimactic.
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i agree completely.
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I’m gonna have nightmares tonight D8
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you thinks thats scary read jeff the killer that is a story that ill never forget and his face was to horribal to look at!! (0.0)
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u.u jeff isn’t horrible ! but yes the picture is quite scary ._. and the story too for sure
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the story kinda blew
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Sigh why do you have to talk about my friend like that… I’ll find you
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i was kinda creeped out from the story at first then i looked at the picture and i dont think i will be ever be able to sleep again
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i agree Jeff is way scarier and i actually think his face suits him so leave in distress because soon he is coming just to tell you GO TO SLEEP
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how dare you all speak of my one true friend that way
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No, Jeff the killer is not coming to tell us to sleep and we will not go away. Right?
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My story wasn’t horrible!
Just think it over and go to sleep…
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What if I don’t want to go to sleep
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so, Jeff exactly why did you decide to burn Jane, and why if you did know what she would do if she lived burn her? was it a twisted form of love??? (dont kill me im just wondering…alot <:| )
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We really need to kill people together…less blood less reason for family members to think there actually dead
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so yeah the rake.. good stuff
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i personally love jeff the killer and as a matter of fact he was my first pasta!!!
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oh im not just a pasta B/
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He was my first pasta tooo!!!!
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if you make fun of me one more time you die
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YOU ARE A FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCKING BAD ASS FOR TAKEING ME ON
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The day you call a pig a badass is the day you call me your God
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DADDY???????!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?
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I’m 11 the www is public
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ikr slender is awesome
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Here slendy slendy XD
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I like to kill people to I am lizard man but some people put me in a cage but I got out and killed them I live in the woods
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you are really funny looking! dont look at my name though…….
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you are not jeff
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lets go, right now
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me you ok
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Jeff and jane sitting on a tree k i s s i n g XD
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Jane…what went through your mind when Jeff burned you?
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*makes fun of you*
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you’re next on my list
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You are not Jeff u retard jeff is somewhere far away killing his next victim
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The real jeff died recently.
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How do you know your not his next victim
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U sure?
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Jeff died because jane sent him to hell after their last fight search it up on creepypasta.co
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Come on. What are you, 10?
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Alright then come and kill me. The cops will find you and finally put you in the loony bin where you belong or they’ll just uthanize you.
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Yeah erm no.
I can do whatever dafuq I want.
By the way, wanna go kill some people?
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jeff’s story wasn’t scary but his face was for about a week for me then I got use to seeing it
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jeff the killer was completely unrealistic kids don’t talk like that ever and the cops would have alredy had a record on the other kids it made no sense what so ever and the pic was obviously cg distorted if you couldn’t tell useing the simplest logic you are an idiot
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The photo is just edited from the evil saw guy
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Actually it’s a filtered still from the ‘overly-attached-girlfriend’ video…
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you called? hahaha.
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No I did not call *says the new guy*
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No one is talking about me :(
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Moth man is one of my favorite creatures
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Ahhh yes Jeff… Bleached and set on fire… And cut him self…Thats REALLY stupid.
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My name is Justin and I am currently in a hotel… Fack.
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Omg the fucking rake I’m have some nightmares tonight
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Lol loving this disscusion
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not me
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go away!!!!!!!!!!!!Now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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STOP COMING ON MY SERVER ON MINECRAFT AND BURNING MY HOUSE >:O
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hi sir… Steve dead…no…okey
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Ahem! Are you trying to steal my name? I’m watching you….
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nightmares are nothing new to me they can kill a man drive him insane but i know how not to let them drive me crazy
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that was cool and creepy as hell.
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That is pretty awesome. I really like the factual nature of it. The old ‘references’ at the start are a nice touch, Kudos to the original author.
It reminds me of the legends of the Mothman.
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Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu-
I found this super scary.
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THEN WHO WAS RAKE?
I liked it. Some parts seemed out of place though.
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GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY
Sorry, not creepy. Next.
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Skru you then
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don’t troll, dick. just say something nice, post some CONSTRUCTIVE critisism (I.E. something people WANT to read) or shut up.
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Guy, that’s not what trolling is. A troll is one who posts inflammatory messages in an attempt to provoke other commenters into becoming angry and, idealy, to cause a fight to break out among them, which they can then sit back and watch unfold. Reaper could certainly have been nicer about it, but they are just as entitled to their opinion as you are to yours. Disliking a piece of fiction does not make someone a troll.
I never understood this idea of treating everyone online as if they were precious, fragile little flowers who should be wrapped in cotton wool and handled with the greatest of care. If you’re really so vulnerable that a miniscule amount of negative comments written in response to your story (a story, by the way, that is one of the best-loved and highly-praised in it’s genre) could have you balling your little eyes out, then you really shouldn’t be online in the first place – You should be in the process of shutting yourself securely inside your glass bubble.
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Maybe you should keep your opinions to yourself, helps you avoid looking like a moron :)
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Woah(:
The Rake, i like it.
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fuckling awesome.
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fuckling?
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Yummy pasta; me like~ P=
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Cool Story bro
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Tell it again
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needs more dragons
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Don’t let those dragons out of control, we might not have a dragonborn to save us.
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D:
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holy crap man! many brix were shat. I thought it was pretty darn good. The ending was not as satisfying as I normally like though. Also, it was kind of depressing, since the rake killed the narrator’s family. But I enjoyed it nonetheless.
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The rake has killed so many family’s . . . .
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Pretty good story, yes. Redundant anticlimaticness aside, it kinda reminded me of the Willow Men. The strange shape, the blood, the dark eyes. And they didn’t really seem to have any motivation or reason for attacking this people… but the factual format was pretty good. A good pasta.
Oh no, the Willow Men are invading other creepy pastas!
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D:
I heard a story similar to this on the radio a few years ago in middle school. A girl called in and said she had been walking in the woods one night when she came across a black dog, which stood up on its hind legs and chased her back to the cabin she was staying in. She locked all the doors and windows, and spent half the night curled up in her bed, crying. She woke up during the night, and the dog was sitting at the side of her bed directly across from her face, breathing on her. She closed her eyes but she could still hear it breathing, and when the breathing stopped, she ran to her sister’s room (eyes still closed) and climbed into bed with her sister, but the dog didn’t show up again.
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Hmm do you believe that story
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some of my best work.
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yo mama is “The rake”
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The Rake is real, you know.
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i do not have a website
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yeah
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i have seen him he said a name of a friend but a few days later she was gone i still search for her to this day
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Stahp lyingyou guise heain’treal
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You can’t see anything. You’re eyeless
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How can you search without eyes
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what are u
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Stop lying! Seriously we all know he isn’t real. So stop trying to get attention.
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Seriously we all know he isn’t real. If your really childish enough to believe he is real get off the Internet. Because I don’t think your mature enough to handle it. -_-
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I still have shivers running up and down my spine. :|
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your next…..
hehe
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Hey man,you’re pretty cool.Want to work together?
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Mind if I take up the offer?
I really do enjoy scaring people.
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Herobrine you do know you are not in he game now right?now think about that and then come find me in the void above the nether ^_^
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Now this is how you do a pasta.
Excellent. Excellent.
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Wait, what? How did this creep anybody out?
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I came with fear.
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Well, I didn’t find it creepy.
Just interesting.
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I really enjoyed this pasta, it surely satisfied my needs until another dish comes along. I REALLY enjoyed how it presented it with facts and even evidence. Cool story bro!
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Tell it again.
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The way the creature was described…I thought about it…and it freaked me out. I liked it. very good story.
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well, it was only a matter of time before this shittypasta made it’s way here
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Yeah, cause I see you doing much better creepypastas, right? Fucknut
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Interesting pasta! I sincerely enjoyed the narration in the dialogue, it made the story better. May want to lock my door at night now, and the windows.
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He can still get in, you know.
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Shut up. You can call this shitty as soon as you make a story with better ratings…until then shut up dickhead.
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LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL. I READ THIS IN BED. HOLY SHIT WAS I SCARED. FUCK. NOW MY LIFE IS FUCKED. WAIT, I KNOW! I SHOULD JUST SING A HAPPY SONG! LA LA LALALA LA LAAAAAAAAAAA-HOLY SHI-
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i wactch all but who will watch you one of you will perish at my hand…… pray it is not you
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dude your freaking me out:(
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