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One day at a shopping mall in the afternoon, a woman was coming out of the mall from a shopping spree. She was in a happy mood. She had gotten to her car and loaded her stuff that she had bought into her trunk. When she was done loading, she shut the door of her trunk and she saw an old lady standing by the passenger side of her car.

The old woman said “Would you be a darling and give me a lift home? I don’t have a car and I was walking all day.” The woman said “I’d be happy to.” So she unlocked the door for the old woman.
As she started to make her way around the car to the driver’s side, she started to feel uncomfortable. So when she got in the car, she looked in her purse and said “Darn, I can’t find my credit card. I’m going inside to see if anybody found it.” The old woman said “I’ll wait for you here.”

The woman left to go look for help. Then she found a security guard and told him the situation. They went back to the woman’s car and the passenger door was wide open. On the seat of the car was a shopping bag that the old woman had been carrying. Inside of the bag was the old woman’s dress and a gray haired wig, along with a huge butcher’s knife, a video camera, and a roll of duct tape.

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The Old Lady, 6.5 out of 10 based on 936 ratings
  • Cobalt Lion

    Overdone, and predictable. I can’t even think of anything else to say about this.

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  • SILLEH BANDS!

    And that is where Ashton Kutcher went.

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  • NotDanny

    daamn people so quick to express their hate for an urban legend. shut up. enjoy it.

    also, it was Candlejack. he

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  • Emi

    Positively ancient, and uncreepy, urban legend.

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  • Charlotte Mander

    For taking this from Snopes, you definitely lose points.

    The writing style was also really bland. Short choppy sentences really aren’t the way to be descriptive.

    If you were going to borrow a Snopes story, couldn’t you have at least embellished it a little?

    –Char Mander

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  • aslkdjfl;akjdf;

    FUCKING IDIOT THIS STORY ALREADY BEEN TOLD ABOUT 423895239592369026 TIMES.

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  • ben dover

    lol k

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  • D99

    Wow…very scary

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  • Anonymous

    Wow, that sucked ass. 0/10, scare harder.

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  • Shang

    So….the tranvestite dude was gonna tape her up, set up the video camera, tape him killing her, and what, post it on youtube? XDDD
    this pasta be BURNT
    3/10
    even though this does gives us a moral:
    Don’t give rides too creepy old ladies..

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  • doo

    I love realistic stories many times more than the paranormal ones, but this is poorly written and boring. On the bright side, it didn’t waste as much time as it could have. Hm.

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  • ;

    I had to read it a couple times, but i think i got it. A killer (Butchers knife, duct tape, camera), who dressed up as the old lady (wig & dress), and was going to kill the woman who went on the shopping spree,

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  • sjjcsad

    @J: For that matter why would he leave the bag behind at all? It’s completely retarded, not creepy, and already been done a million times.

    Failure incarnate.

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  • Anonymous

    So yeah, the killer decides “OH SHI- MY COVER’S BLOWN” or something and decides to UNDRESS RIGHT FUCKING THERE so he can run away, leaving his things behind as perfect evidence. It’s exactly what a good psycho would do to run away without raising any suspicion, huh?

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  • lkjhgf

    THIS SUCKS

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  • RUUR

    This is pretty dumb and reminds me of a newer worse version of Little Red Riding Hood.

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  • Some Girl You’ll Never Know

    Heres another story for your taste buds.

    Is anyone there?

    I woke up, again. When i look at the clock by my bed, it says its 4:45 AM. Why do i keep waking up? I need to get to sleep. Later, i decide i just can’t and i get up to get something to drink. When i get to the fridge, i stop and freeze. I feel it, eyes on me. I don’t even have time to turn around before the feeling is gone. I don’t even question it, i ask.

    “Is anyone there?” no answer.

    I decide to ditch the drink and retreat back to my bed. Oh well. Its only moments later when i hear my bedroom door open. There’s a figure standing there, i look up at it and stare, the question leaking out of me.

    “Who are you, and why are you here?!” At the exact moment i ask, the figure asks with me. I get up and stand in front of it, as i do, it mimics me, like a mirror. I reach behind myself and turn on my light. I scream as i do, and so does the figure.

    Its me.

    Other me has a hammer in one hand, Me2 raises her arm and smashes my head and to my surprise, it doesn’t hurt – it feels good. I want to beg me to keep going, bit i can’t. I know I’m dead. But if i am, why can i still think and hear?

    “That’ll show you you pesky robot clone!” Other me shouts out. “Trying to steal my life!”

    Robot clone?

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  • anon

    This has actually happened in my town before! It freaked me the fuck out when I read it in the paper!

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  • Trucnheon

    older than your great-granddaddy’s kneecaps.

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  • Mell

    OMGZZ I WILL NVR DRIV IN MUH CAR AGIN!!!

    lol jk, this was bad.

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  • Minxxy

    But.. It wasn’t scary :[

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  • Noka

    Despite being really common, this pasta could have been good if it wasn’t written with the skill of an elementary school student.

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  • Alex

    I like it, but I really can’t imagine why he or she left the wig and the dress in the bag! I mean, you know, undressing takes a little bit of time. I could understand if the fake granny left the bag with all the other stuff and maybe a different wig there. Or hell, maybe even without a wig. Would be creepy enough.

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  • bagshotrow

    So the serial killer decided he just had to get naked right then, huh?

    Hell, it’d be creepier if there was no wig and dress. An old lady going around killing people is more original and more convincing.

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  • someone unknown

    NEVER TRUST OLD LADEHS.
    _____________________________________

    No but seriously, this sucks.

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