• Annoer

    Holy hell. So weirded out I may not even leave the house today. Fantastic story! Wonder where the inspiration came from. :]

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    • Ally

      My bet is on personal experience…

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  • http://myspace.com/darkwolf4ever Father Crow

    Oh shi-

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  • Anonymous

    But who was Coke Zero?

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  • Shanchuk

    I just picture a really old creepy…kind of like my neighbor. Not sketchy at all…

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    • sophie

      i picture an oldish man with a very clean suit and a kind grey blue eyes.

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  • Shanchuk

    Umm…I meant ” really old creepy guy”
    Proof reading isn’t my deal, I guess.

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  • Someone

    … the person who lives above me is luckily very very loud. Otherwise, I’d be shitting brix ._. …
    Nice pasta, 9/10

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    • Samara

      Lucky. The person who lives above isn’t loud at all.. ._.

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      • POWER LEVELS!!!

        lolz i live in the highist floor of my appartment

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        • yep

          Exactly.

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  • http://www.friendster.com/qliphoth Mat

    …and then?

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  • I am a Shark

    RAEP.

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    Rating: +22 (from 30 votes)
  • huh?

    i dont get it.

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  • Anon E Mouse

    I love this one!

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    Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
  • TMM

    Ohhhhhh fuuuuuuuuck

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    Rating: +4 (from 8 votes)
  • Moar

    Well…wat. I dont know if I like it. Its…okay, I guess.

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  • Hhaaa;

    lmao.
    Quiet is always Good.(:

    rest assured, no one will hear a thing; you won’t even hit the floor.

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  • Keindrae

    @_@

    Never again will I venture on the third floor of my apartment complex.

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    Rating: +5 (from 5 votes)
  • Ohwow

    7/10

    Very well written, but at the end i got that feeling as if i just missed the punch line of a great joke.

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    Rating: +15 (from 17 votes)
  • http://hack.cl GraveOne

    Holy Sh*t!!!!!!!!! I love it I have a second fav story now XD

    who is the author of this excellent pasta?

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  • Teira-chan

    Haha, I read this one on the forum last night. :D Creepy in a sort of realistic, paranoia-causing way~

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  • Azriel

    Nothing scary, but definitely a creepy story. Good job, there should be more stories like this on the site.

    I predict… comment 20.

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  • http://www.mybloghasadd.blogspot.com Addish

    Wow, nice and creepy, just the way I like my pasta.

    I wouldn’t dine with someone that damn quiet anyway, it’s always the quiet ones!

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  • anonymous

    BUT WHO WAS KINDLY OLD MAN???

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  • hgsfhs

    THEN WHO WAS ROHYPNOL!?

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  • Sawstel

    Congrats to sadClown for getting her story posted up here!

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  • Revus

    THEN WHO WAS ROWDY TEENS?

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  • Anon23

    Rape? or Murder?

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  • Anon

    BUT WHO WAS MAN!?

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