The House Of Disappearances
There was this woman whose husband was acting very strange one day, very paranoid, she asked him why and this is what he told her:
“Twelve years ago to this day a whole bunch of my friends and I went to an old haunted house downtown to stay the night because we thought it would be fun. We were all settled on the bottom floor of the house and we were fine for the first few hours. We began to hear things that sounded like foot steps pacing on the floor above, and scratching on the walls.”
“We sent Jimmy, who was the oldest of us, up to have a look so he grabbed his flashlight and we watched him head up the steps. His foot steps seemed to stop towards the last few steps where he was no longer visible to us and slowly his light faded from view, we called after him but there was no reply.”
“Afterwards we sent Matt, the second oldest up to find him, he walked up the steps and the same thing happened. At this point we thought they were joking, and out third eldest, Jason went up to look shouting that he knew it was a trick and to give it up, at the last few steps where the other guys had vanished his shouting voice became distant before vanishing completely.”
“The rest of us got scared and went home to call the police who checked it out the next morning and found blood smeared up the sides of the stairwell. They searched the entire house and never found a soul. The house was eventually knocked down and not one body was found. Every year on this day one of us remaining from that house has disappeared going from oldest to youngest.”
Her husband was not seen again after that day. Police held an brief investigation, but nothing came of it.
Oh, that’s an old one. I read a version of it in one of Schwartz’s “Scary Stories to Tell in the Dark” books.
@Dani, same here.
I wonder what the father told his children.
Actually, I think I read this in, “Scary Stories to Tell in the Dark” as well. Man, i love those.
this one made me shudder
How many brothers were they?12 + 3…15…big family
Reminds me of a gruesome version of Are you afraid of the dark
After “the rest of us got scared” I was expecting a bel-air.
Nice pasta, except for the typo at the end. (”Police held an brief investigation”)
SO WHO WAS THIRTEENTH?
> big family
They’re not related.
poorly written i thought and OH NO
THEN WHO WAS WIFE?
Boring pasta is boring.
i liked this pasta!! maybe he wanted to leave his wife and had made it all up, and now he is living in mexico with his mistress and their love child….
“There was this woman”
-5
This was truly awful. I seriously thought this was going to be a joke pasta. Terribly written and boring as hell. “We went into a haunted house and started disappearing! OoooOOoooOOoohhhh!” You can even tell it’s going to suck by the first 4 words “There was this woman” Fail pasta is fail.
That was fairly badly written, and completely illogical. If you’re in a haunted house and hear noises, you get the fuck it. If you have to investigate, then you all go, not just one of you. And when people start disappearing you don’t keep fucking sending more up to go and have a look. Fucking morons were asking for it.