The Dolls
As a child, I was always quiet, and my conversations with others would always end up awkward. Because of that, I always preferred to be alone growing up. Which probably explains my strange obsession with toys, being as old as I am. They never talk. They just stare. I have to say though, being alone in an apartment full of figurines can be creepy sometimes.
However, being with my girl for almost two years, she understands my obsession well, but with this much, she would probably be shocked when she first sees them.
That night, she was more than excited to see my house. as we approached the door, she could barely contain her excitement, so without further delay, I swing the front door open. “Make yourself at home.” I say to her, “it’s kind of messy, but its more comfortable than it l-” her face was in shock, then absolute terror as she started to scream.
I tried to calm her, but it just got worse. I was puzzled. is she afraid of my toys? “I understand its a bit strange, but is it that horrifying? I take a quick look in my house but theres nothing horrific. I had to calm her down, as the neighbors were starting to come out. With a quick impulse, I quickly drag her in my house as I try to ease her mind. Her screaming just got louder and louder. At this point, I had no choice but to put my hand over her mouth. She watched me in terror with tears rolling down her face. I turn around and they were all staring at me as well.
…
I’m alone again. I placed her doll on the top shelf above all the others I have dated. Her look made me feel depressed, so I made it face the wall until I was able to get over it.
Posted in Insanity & Madness, Murders & Deaths
September 10th, 2008 at 2:16 am
Kind of obvious, but still, not bad.
September 10th, 2008 at 3:17 am
Oh, this one I enjoyed!
Someone should make a movie.
September 10th, 2008 at 6:39 am
I liked the twist, actually. I may be oblivious, but I didn’t get it until she started screaming.
September 10th, 2008 at 8:50 am
Haha. Nice and creepy… Poor girl though.
September 10th, 2008 at 11:33 am
Cool’
I didn’t get it until the end, would make a good movie.
September 10th, 2008 at 1:18 pm
Did he turn her into a doll or something?
September 10th, 2008 at 2:15 pm
I think the dolls were dead bodies…
September 10th, 2008 at 2:35 pm
This reminds me of that Dead Silence movie…
September 10th, 2008 at 3:11 pm
I liked this one =D
It reminds me of that Godchild chapter where this little girl and her maid kill the people that visit them, then use parts of the victims’ bodies to make doll versions of them.
September 10th, 2008 at 3:34 pm
This one was great! Very unpredictable. At least for me.
September 10th, 2008 at 3:39 pm
;_;
September 10th, 2008 at 6:39 pm
@ FCF
what does fcf stand for and dead silence was freaken scary
September 10th, 2008 at 8:55 pm
How does he stop all those things from rotting??? Still kinda hot though. Reminds me of that one about the girlfriends eyes.
September 11th, 2008 at 12:26 am
I really enjoyed this one! The end was very creepy. I agree - it also reminded me a lot of Dead Silence, one of my absolute favorite horror movies.
September 11th, 2008 at 5:50 am
Then WHO WAS DOLL?
September 11th, 2008 at 12:40 pm
Kind of reminds me of the movie “May.” That was a good movie. Could probably be summarized into its own creepypasta. A long one, though.
September 11th, 2008 at 8:35 pm
030 i think i was in there for a while…
anyway, even if i was, i still thoroughly enjoyed this story! Its freakin shuweeeet
September 11th, 2008 at 10:52 pm
I like it! but I don’t get it!!
Did he like kill people and make them into dolls???
September 11th, 2008 at 10:57 pm
OMG THATS AWESOME!! THIS IS THE BEST ONE IVE READ!!!
September 12th, 2008 at 4:14 am
Being a doll collector myself, this one was interesting.
But…I remember an episode of Twilight Zone, or snother show of its ilk, just like this.
September 12th, 2008 at 6:35 pm
I like this pasta. It may have been a bit predictable, but I still liked.
September 12th, 2008 at 8:20 pm
Saw this one coming, taxidermy is great. Carl Tanzler lived with his human doll for 7 years.
September 12th, 2008 at 10:35 pm
IT REMINDS ME.
OF.
THE CELL.
September 12th, 2008 at 11:52 pm
i hate dolls, like i really really hate dolls.
i kinda figured out the twist though, he was always lonely and his ‘dolls’ kept him company? i was like, ‘mhmm, creep!’
this was a real serial killer i saw it on forensic files or something…really scared the shit out of me
@ 12…i know what fcf stands for, but i’m not sure if it’s up to me to say, she might tell you.
September 13th, 2008 at 10:48 pm
Nope…
September 16th, 2008 at 8:12 pm
i really don’t think she’s gonna tell me
September 19th, 2008 at 11:32 pm
brilliant although the gods bless those who explained the damned thing to me hahahaha
September 24th, 2008 at 3:58 am
I have to say, this one is pretty cool. Didn’t expect the ending.
September 25th, 2008 at 1:19 pm
yay,a new frend,he didnt kill her cuz she screamed,it was for lulz
September 25th, 2008 at 7:08 pm
Cool
September 28th, 2008 at 8:54 pm
nice twist!
October 14th, 2008 at 9:54 am
OH SHIT
DAMN.
That is scary.
November 4th, 2008 at 9:04 pm
Ugh, I can’t believe I didn’t see it coming until the end. This guy reminds me of Sasori from Naruto.
November 7th, 2008 at 1:51 pm
o dear.
i am thick
it is so damn obvious. i didnt notice about the fact that the dolls mite not be dolls until da end but i new he was a creep- i meen how mani men du u no hu keep dolls????
weirdo….
November 8th, 2008 at 2:49 pm
This reminds of an episode of the twilight zone…
November 16th, 2008 at 5:05 pm
@Ma Cherie: my thoughts EXACTLY.
@VitriolicV: Also, my thoughts EXACTLY.
@Jonathan: Another thing I thought, EXACTLY.
so it leads one to wonder how I thought of all three of these things at once while reading it.
Still, a good pasta nonetheless.
November 20th, 2008 at 9:44 pm
LOL WUT
wat a weirdo perv he makes dolls of people just to sex them, when he could have sexed them when they were alive; what a necrophiliac