The Dolls

September 9th, 2008 by WHO WAS PHONE?

As a child, I was always quiet, and my conversations with others would always end up awkward. Because of that, I always preferred to be alone growing up. Which probably explains my strange obsession with toys, being as old as I am. They never talk. They just stare. I have to say though, being alone in an apartment full of figurines can be creepy sometimes.

However, being with my girl for almost two years, she understands my obsession well, but with this much, she would probably be shocked when she first sees them.

That night, she was more than excited to see my house. as we approached the door, she could barely contain her excitement, so without further delay, I swing the front door open. “Make yourself at home.” I say to her, “it’s kind of messy, but its more comfortable than it l-” her face was in shock, then absolute terror as she started to scream.

I tried to calm her, but it just got worse. I was puzzled. is she afraid of my toys? “I understand its a bit strange, but is it that horrifying? I take a quick look in my house but theres nothing horrific. I had to calm her down, as the neighbors were starting to come out. With a quick impulse, I quickly drag her in my house as I try to ease her mind. Her screaming just got louder and louder. At this point, I had no choice but to put my hand over her mouth. She watched me in terror with tears rolling down her face. I turn around and they were all staring at me as well.

I’m alone again. I placed her doll on the top shelf above all the others I have dated. Her look made me feel depressed, so I made it face the wall until I was able to get over it.

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Posted in Insanity & Madness, Murders & Deaths


37 Responses

  1. YAHWEH

    Kind of obvious, but still, not bad.

  2. P4INKiller

    Oh, this one I enjoyed!
    Someone should make a movie.

  3. Z

    I liked the twist, actually. I may be oblivious, but I didn’t get it until she started screaming.

  4. Ben

    Haha. Nice and creepy… Poor girl though.

  5. Floab Flobby Funtime Freddy

    Cool’

    I didn’t get it until the end, would make a good movie.

  6. Sigma

    Did he turn her into a doll or something?

  7. Shuriken

    I think the dolls were dead bodies…

  8. FCF

    This reminds me of that Dead Silence movie…

  9. Ma Cherie

    I liked this one =D

    It reminds me of that Godchild chapter where this little girl and her maid kill the people that visit them, then use parts of the victims’ bodies to make doll versions of them.

  10. Sarah

    This one was great! Very unpredictable. At least for me.

  11. Comment Leaver

    ;_;

  12. shortys roc my sox

    @ FCF

    what does fcf stand for and dead silence was freaken scary

  13. Jin

    How does he stop all those things from rotting??? Still kinda hot though. Reminds me of that one about the girlfriends eyes.

  14. Kovitlac

    I really enjoyed this one! The end was very creepy. I agree - it also reminded me a lot of Dead Silence, one of my absolute favorite horror movies.

  15. anon

    Then WHO WAS DOLL?

  16. VitriolicV

    Kind of reminds me of the movie “May.” That was a good movie. Could probably be summarized into its own creepypasta. A long one, though.

  17. Kait's Corpse

    030 i think i was in there for a while…

    anyway, even if i was, i still thoroughly enjoyed this story! Its freakin shuweeeet

  18. Bekkiieee Baybe...

    I like it! but I don’t get it!!
    Did he like kill people and make them into dolls???

  19. Bekkiieee Baybe...

    OMG THATS AWESOME!! THIS IS THE BEST ONE IVE READ!!!

  20. The Violet Nurse

    Being a doll collector myself, this one was interesting.

    But…I remember an episode of Twilight Zone, or snother show of its ilk, just like this.

  21. BonerFruit

    I like this pasta. It may have been a bit predictable, but I still liked.

  22. Fund

    Saw this one coming, taxidermy is great. Carl Tanzler lived with his human doll for 7 years.

  23. Syrange

    IT REMINDS ME.
    OF.

    THE CELL.

  24. DJLoONa

    i hate dolls, like i really really hate dolls.
    i kinda figured out the twist though, he was always lonely and his ‘dolls’ kept him company? i was like, ‘mhmm, creep!’
    this was a real serial killer i saw it on forensic files or something…really scared the shit out of me

    @ 12…i know what fcf stands for, but i’m not sure if it’s up to me to say, she might tell you.

  25. Reptilian Liar

    Nope…

  26. shortys roc my sox

    i really don’t think she’s gonna tell me

  27. nyxe

    brilliant although the gods bless those who explained the damned thing to me hahahaha

  28. Pie

    I have to say, this one is pretty cool. Didn’t expect the ending.

  29. Dollz

    yay,a new frend,he didnt kill her cuz she screamed,it was for lulz

  30. Lys

    Cool

  31. asdf-man

    nice twist!

  32. zimba

    OH SHIT

    DAMN.

    That is scary.

  33. Jonathan

    Ugh, I can’t believe I didn’t see it coming until the end. This guy reminds me of Sasori from Naruto.

  34. Snazzy Cheez luvs scares

    o dear.
    i am thick
    it is so damn obvious. i didnt notice about the fact that the dolls mite not be dolls until da end but i new he was a creep- i meen how mani men du u no hu keep dolls????

    weirdo….

  35. Snowden

    This reminds of an episode of the twilight zone…

  36. Contrary Miss Mary

    @Ma Cherie: my thoughts EXACTLY.

    @VitriolicV: Also, my thoughts EXACTLY.

    @Jonathan: Another thing I thought, EXACTLY.

    so it leads one to wonder how I thought of all three of these things at once while reading it.

    Still, a good pasta nonetheless.

  37. BUT WHO WAS X?

    LOL WUT
    wat a weirdo perv he makes dolls of people just to sex them, when he could have sexed them when they were alive; what a necrophiliac

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