The Doll
I gave her the doll on her birthday.
She loved it at first, told me it was so beautiful. That it’s hair was so soft and the dress was so pretty. She wouldn’t let it out of her sight for days. During the day she set it on the table, so she could see it while cleaning the house. During the night it sat next to the bed, looking at us sleep with big blue unmoving eyes.
But my wife’s love for the doll soon changed. Soon I noticed something was bothering here. I asked of course, but she wouldn’t tell me at first, said she was just being silly. But day after day she closed herself more and more for me. Until I couldn’t take it anymore. I pressed her, told her she would tell me what was going on right now or I would drag her to a doctor.
She finally broke and crying words came spilling out.
She then told me it was the doll. It scared her. She told me she had the feeling it was constantly watching her. Sometimes it even seemed like it moved.
This worried me and I went to take a look at the doll.
It sat motionless on the little table in the bedroom. The big blue eyes unchanged. I couldn’t help but sigh from relief a bit. Of course she’s not moving, she couldn’t have been.
I went to turn away, but then saw a tiny movement from the corner of my eye.
I turned back to the doll, picking it up from the table. I held my face close to the doll’s, staring into the eyes.
Something was moving.
I tried to concentrate, tried to look closer.
Yes, there it definately was, movement. But not from the eye itself, it was behind the eye.
Before I could register this the eye burst and out of it spilled at least ten wriggling maggots.
I dropped the doll in shock, backing away instinctively.
My wife yelled from the other room, asking me what was going on. I yelled back at her not to worry. I picked up the doll again, using a tissue to wipe away the maggots. Inside I saw more, pressing against the skin and the plastic outer layer.
So soon already. I had hoped she would have lasted longer.
I will have to get a new one for her, maybe keep it alive at first. That way it’ll last longer for sure.
While I throw away the old doll, I think about how my wife always says she loves the thick blonde curls of little Katie down the block.
Doesn’t she also have blue eyes?
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Credited to Boudica.
but WHO WAS KATE?
KATIE, rather.
ooh love it! i always love a doll pasta
this one is pretty good in my opinion!
Love it, this kind of pasta is always my favorite!
This was great. I loved it.
They forgot to make it creepy again.
That was very well written and executed.
I hate dolls….
{shudder}
So the doll was Katie? xD Eww…
I liked it though. When I read the title, I was like “Oh, great…another dumb doll story. Everyone’s going to be complaining now.”
But it turned out better than I expected ^_^ Great work.
Awesome.
I am very relieved. At first I thought it was going to be another one of those darn dried up evil doll stories.. You know, like Chucky. Thank you, I really enjoyed this one.
I saw this coming (don’t ask me how) but still good pasta.
horribly written.
or maybe it’s just me.
but i had to read the first few paragraphs over again to understand them.
nice twist! i thought it would be a stupidly long ‘oh the doll is evil’ story, and i’m glad it wasn’t!
Yes, Daddy’s Little Angel, Katie, has bright blue eyes.
Hmm, intriguing.
:]
Very creepy *shudder*
I like this one! It’s full of love and maggots :3
Oh my god.
NO….more…dolls…
I already hate those kind of dolls. Now I can’t stand them. Great…At least I like fire….
I’m with Midnightgirl and Comment Leaver on this one. Gotta love a good doll pasta. Those are the creepiest. Also, they remind me of a doll I once had named Julia…
It’s been done too many times.
Crap another fo thsoe boring doll stories, you always knwo how they end. Either the doll itself is evil or tryign to kill the owner, or the owner of the doll goes insane. I mea… OH SH-
That was much, much better than I expected. Still prefer The Lilies Are Bleeding, but it was extremely well executed.
This gives me the feeling of road rash.
+15
I can forgive the screw-ups in the first few paragraphs thanks to the ending. Very nice.
I love the twisted ending!
This is freaky considering that my name is Katie and I have curly hair. Thank god it’s not blonde.
Wow. This was terribly written, but had a good ending. I was surprised.
A doll story that I didn’t see coming! Hooooraaaaaayyy…
HE BETTER NOT MAKE KATIE A DOLL, SHE’S DADDY’S LITTLE ANGEL! xD
Haha. It’s a cool outcome, but the introduction of Katie feels too abrupt.
Oh well, the concept works.
It seems like dolls are the new clowns.
Excellent pasta is excellent.
This is one of many reasons why dolls freak me out. I wasn’t like this before I started reading creepypasta, I tell ya!
This was a better pasta than the last few. I was expecting another “OMG. DEMON DOLL EATEZ UR SOUL WHILE U SLEEP.” Having it be an acutal child was a nice change of pace.
Ooh, chills up the spine.
Eh….I feel like the ending was unexpected, but not very good. I kinda would have preferred the typical doll story.
Wasn’t creepy, but I honestly didn’t see the ending coming.
Another one that’s a decent idea, but poorly executed. The length was fine for a pasta, but kind of hurt the story; if a bit more time had been spent on building the narrator’s insanity, and building on the nature of the doll(s), the whole thing probably would’ve been easier to digest.
Still, it’s okay.
Nice..
That bitch kid can take it.
ewww… anything with maggots is always gross
I can never enjoy the story when they are involved.
his wife didn’t notice the smell huh?
haha i thought it was an evil doll. But that was a good twist.
ok idea. Turned bad at the end, WAY too obvious.
Hey asshole, I don’t want to be a doll.
UNSATISFACTORY PRESERVATION TECHNIQUES.
Oh, and Allie; no.
ps - Who Was Phone - why are the “previous posts” not actually the previous posts?
I wasn’t expecting that ending at all. Nice twist. :]
Ehh.
Look, the whole doll-thing is just plain boring by now and–
wait… what?
It was…? Ooooooohhhhhhhhh………
Awesome! Did not see that coming! 5/5 for you, sir.
Not very well-written, though. Still 5/5.
Didn’t see that coming.
A bit choppy but I digress.
Dolls scare the hell out of me. 5/5
Daddy’s Little Angel.
Very good!!! 5 stars. It’s simple, but it worked. After all, a pasta doesn’t have to be some flowery shakespearean bullshit compo. It did not betray the ending, unlike so many others. Congratulations.
I like this one! Really short, but very powerful. And it creeps me out that MY name is Katie, and I have curly blonde hair and blue eyes. D:
….Am I the only one who remembers all the other creepy pastas on here where the twist is that the dolls are dead human children? The idea was done too many times, and the last one I read was written better. I would have thought it much better if I hadn’t already read the same twist fifteen times.
Ugh.. I agree Azriel. The dolls are always dead people.
@Azriel
I remember that one with the scarecrow.
It was nice tho.
this is a good one! also Maggots!! i like creepypasta’s with maggots
Ooooh, good twist.
Very predictable.. actually. I guessed what the ending would be before even getting there. XD
but. he acts like he doesn’t know.
author should fix that.
whoa o_o i didn’t see that one coming, very tasty pasta ^_^
still good, no matter how many times i read it.
BUT WHO WAS THE FIRST DOLL?!?
Damn, I wasn’t expecting that
Unoriginal premise, but competently written. As far as pasta goes this is strictly Olive Garden.
@61 I don’t think he was acting like he didn’t know that doll was kid/kid was doll, I think he was acting like he didn’t know that the ‘doll’ had decomposed so quickly.
I’d kill to have a good ‘demon doll’ story…
Good pasta though. *Waves waiter over* There’s a MAGGOT in my ‘pasta! >_>
that was crap.
This one was onlt good for people with doll phobias.
Other than that, an epic fail.
I thought this pasta was great. I really enjoyed it. I always enjoy pasta where the narrator is the bad guy and is very nonchalant and blissfully unaware of how creepy/evil they really are. But I thought it was stupid as shit that when his wife said she thought the doll was moving, he was worried so he checked the doll… he wasn’t worried that his wife was insane or something, lol.
I enjoyed this, I didn’t see the twist coming and thought it was just another generic “creepy-ass doll” story - I was pleasantly surprised.
Wow, that’s fucked up…Nice work.
Oh holy crap.
My mouth fell.
Wow, her husband’s a sick creep.
Fairly good pasta. At first I was expecting one of those pastas like Polly the Staring Dolly. But it wasn’t, and that’s good. Pretty well done, the writing and all. Not my favorite, but very tasty…
This is the best doll pasta I’ve read in a long time. Good job!
i think i would notice a doll that’s fucking decomposing.
So they Husband is a crazy fuck who kills little girls and makes them into dolls. The next doll will be the little girl Katie. Sick
I love the insane antics of fictional madmen.
Fear the Darkness
-Nex
Stunning. Written very well, and what a twist.
Perhaps the greatest doll story ever! I absolutly loved it :))))
Excellent! * applause*
My name is Talky Tina.
And I’m not sure I like you.
AHEM, NOW THAT THAT IS OVER.
I was expecting a ‘Walk-away-doll-speaks-turn-around-same-position’ thing. Seeing as there was none, I became very happy =)
10/10
How cute. A five year old got on this site and submitted a story.
lol 2 the comment above
Okay, my friend showed this to me and i didn’t get it for a while, then it dawned on me. I freaked out completely, and i couldn’t stop thinking about it. But i still don’t get a part of it, if his wife was creeped out my the maggots, why would he be oh so retarded and get (ahem, “make”) her a new one? Why not go to a doll store? I mean, there’s one in my town that makes the prettiest porcelain dolls ever - they’re world renowned. But i guess that’s the twist, the brain-teasing, gut-twisting, shutter-making, twisted ending.
————————–Yummy Pasta——————————
–Some——-Girl——-You’ll——-Never———-Know…—-
like some hoodoo thing where you turn ppl into lil dolls or something. very very apealing.