The Doll

Add this post to your list of favorites!I gave her the doll on her birthday.
She loved it at first, told me it was so beautiful. That it’s hair was so soft and the dress was so pretty. She wouldn’t let it out of her sight for days. During the day she set it on the table, so she could see it while cleaning the house. During the night it sat next to the bed, looking at us sleep with big blue unmoving eyes.
But my wife’s love for the doll soon changed. Soon I noticed something was bothering here. I asked of course, but she wouldn’t tell me at first, said she was just being silly. But day after day she closed herself more and more for me. Until I couldn’t take it anymore. I pressed her, told her she would tell me what was going on right now or I would drag her to a doctor.
She finally broke and crying words came spilling out.
She then told me it was the doll. It scared her. She told me she had the feeling it was constantly watching her. Sometimes it even seemed like it moved.
This worried me and I went to take a look at the doll.
It sat motionless on the little table in the bedroom. The big blue eyes unchanged. I couldn’t help but sigh from relief a bit. Of course she’s not moving, she couldn’t have been.
I went to turn away, but then saw a tiny movement from the corner of my eye.
I turned back to the doll, picking it up from the table. I held my face close to the doll’s, staring into the eyes.
Something was moving.
I tried to concentrate, tried to look closer.
Yes, there it definately was, movement. But not from the eye itself, it was behind the eye.
Before I could register this the eye burst and out of it spilled at least ten wriggling maggots.
I dropped the doll in shock, backing away instinctively.
My wife yelled from the other room, asking me what was going on. I yelled back at her not to worry. I picked up the doll again, using a tissue to wipe away the maggots. Inside I saw more, pressing against the skin and the plastic outer layer.
So soon already. I had hoped she would have lasted longer.
I will have to get a new one for her, maybe keep it alive at first. That way it’ll last longer for sure.
While I throw away the old doll, I think about how my wife always says she loves the thick blonde curls of little Katie down the block.
Doesn’t she also have blue eyes?
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Credited to Boudica.


but WHO WAS KATE?
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A girl down the street readers are to assume the narrator is planning on making a new doll out of.
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Yes… and actually, the ‘doll’ was not a doll in the first place…It was made out of a real girl. Now the narrator is planning to make ‘Katie’ her wife’s new doll.
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You guys are so literal it’s great.
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KATIE, rather.
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ooh love it! i always love a doll pasta ;) this one is pretty good in my opinion!
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Love it, this kind of pasta is always my favorite!
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This was great. I loved it.
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They forgot to make it creepy again.
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That was very well written and executed.
I hate dolls….
{shudder}
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So the doll was Katie? xD Eww…
I liked it though. When I read the title, I was like “Oh, great…another dumb doll story. Everyone’s going to be complaining now.”
But it turned out better than I expected ^_^ Great work.
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Awesome.
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I am very relieved. At first I thought it was going to be another one of those darn dried up evil doll stories.. You know, like Chucky. Thank you, I really enjoyed this one.
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I saw this coming (don’t ask me how) but still good pasta.
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horribly written.
or maybe it’s just me.
but i had to read the first few paragraphs over again to understand them.
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nice twist! i thought it would be a stupidly long ‘oh the doll is evil’ story, and i’m glad it wasn’t!
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Yes, Daddy’s Little Angel, Katie, has bright blue eyes.
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Hmm, intriguing.
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Very creepy *shudder*
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I like this one! It’s full of love and maggots :3
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Oh my god.
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NO….more…dolls…
I already hate those kind of dolls. Now I can’t stand them. Great…At least I like fire….
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I’m with Midnightgirl and Comment Leaver on this one. Gotta love a good doll pasta. Those are the creepiest. Also, they remind me of a doll I once had named Julia…
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It’s been done too many times.
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Crap another fo thsoe boring doll stories, you always knwo how they end. Either the doll itself is evil or tryign to kill the owner, or the owner of the doll goes insane. I mea… OH SH-
That was much, much better than I expected. Still prefer The Lilies Are Bleeding, but it was extremely well executed.
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This gives me the feeling of road rash.
+15
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I can forgive the screw-ups in the first few paragraphs thanks to the ending. Very nice.
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I love the twisted ending!
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