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The Dark Wraith



Estimated reading time — 2 minutes

Most of the information known about these spirits is unsurprisingly dubious at best, as the survivors have often been paranoid to the extent of insanity. From what I have seen, the commonalities of past victims include staying within the light, becoming terrified of any unexpected noise, and jumping at merely the flicker of a candle. The worst of which is their fear of shadows, even their own. If they are unavoidably forced into darkness, they will enter a state of hysteria.

However, I once met a man who had claimed to have survived one of these creatures and yet still be in a reasonable state of mind. While most fear for their lives, this man had a peculiar peace about him. He was old and worn; and despite his grim experiences, he had a sort of gentle kindness about him. Herein I have recounted the details that he has described to me:

At being a fair distance from these creatures, only slight anomalies occur. These are notably characteristics which correspond to the paranoia of the survivors: unnatural flickering of candles, and occasionally the slight movement of a shadow. He hesitated to proclaim any area “safe,” but he stated this was most likely the safest distance one could be from them.

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At about a mid-range distance from the creature, the anomalies become more significant and exaggerated. He made certain to point out that this spirit did not seem to desire to actually be noticed, but its murderous intent was all but obvious upon being within proximity to it. He stated that, if someone must come this close, then they should not advance without multiple sources of light. Naturally, torches should also be used instead of lanterns or candles, as the spirit was capable of extinguishing dim light within this vicinity. The easiest way to distinguish between this range and the prior is that the movements of shadows become more frequent and dramatic in nature. This man has also described the shadows as morphing into the silhouette of a woman, and generally only the shadows that were within the peripheral vision were prone to movement.

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And finally, the man described to me the signs of being within close proximity to the spirit. Shadows begin to dance wildly, often leaping from one to another, dispelling any previous subtlety. All light sources are under constant assault by slow-moving yet unnaturally cold air, which consequently exaggerates the movement of shadows. He said it was important to never stay still while at this range, as the shadows would quickly begin to engulf any immobile person.

The spirits’ method of killing was naturally unknown, but upon being completely immersed in darkness, victims are known to often emit screams prior to being cut off entirely, shortly followed thereafter by the “joyous” laughter of a woman which quickly warps into an inhuman voice. Yet if darkness does entirely encompass someone, the man said it was still not necessarily a guarantor of death. He called this spirit a “patient hunter,” and she would only kill when she had the perfect opportunity and had not recently attained any prey. He attributed the reason that he was able to survive to this fact, and at this time I noticed that he wore a pained expression; thus I thanked him for the sharing of his account and excused him.

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CREDIT: Anonymous

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11 thoughts on “The Dark Wraith”

  1. Wow… I’ve got the chills, and now I keep thinking I’m hearing things, it’s 2 AM and I’m the only one up the dark. I won’t be sleeping much tonight, hah. Besides that good pasta 9/10

  2. Good start, then it seems to become an encyclopedia entry, just an emotionless list of facts concerning the spirits in question. It is like the narrator wanted to remove any emotion that the survivor might have expressed, which is weird.

  3. Darkwraiths really are bitches, anyone who played Dark Souls would know.
    I liked the story and the description of these beings, though it did end rather abruptly.

  4. I really liked this, it is Lovecraftian, and the ending really gave me the “oh no..” feeling. I think as Derp thought, that someone close to him was taken and that’s why he survived his encounter with the dark wraith.

    Very good.

  5. Well that ended rather abruptly. I’m somewhat confused. Did the man have a type of ‘Little Shop of Horrors’ deal going on, where he’d feed the spirit and it’d leave him alone? Or am I missing something?

    1. My personal interpretation is that when he mentioned he only got away because the wraith had recently fed, it was implying that the victim was someone close to him and that he’d had to witness their death. Thus why the interviewer let him go, he felt bad making the guy talk more about a clearly traumatic experience involving someone he cared about.

      Of course, I could be wrong, but that’s what I got from it.

  6. You had something going there, in the semblance of a Lovecraftian mytho, and I was reminded of evil sprites and mischievous wood nymphs as I read your tale. But then it suddenly dropped off into oblivion.

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