The Cute Waitress
You just moved into your new apartment, in a very big city. After a year of this life, you have almost given up hope of making any friends; be it at work or any other means. You feel very lonely. After looking for a peaceful place to spend your time, you find a quiet diner on the outskirts of town. The waitress is very attractive. Also, she seems to be the only employee there, ever. You never see anyone else eat there either, ever. The place is perfect for you.
Making love to her becomes a routine. You go there every night for dinner, and then to see her.
You eventually make other friends, and eat at the diner less and less. After some time you stop going completely.
At a bar with your best friend, you tell him about the fun you had with the waitress at the diner. He says he absolutely must see her. You take him there one night, but the building is in a state of ruin. The front door barely opens. The grimy insides of the diner are disgusting, and, behind the counter, is moldy corpse, reeking of pus and rot.
When the police come to the scene, they interview both you and your friend. You are shocked to hear that the body is of a runaway girl from another province. The police tell you this is a homicide, and that she was also raped dozens of times, after she was killed. The police say they can get a match for DNA and eliminate you as a suspect. You are suddenly very worried.
Posted in Insanity & Madness, Murders & Deaths
August 24th, 2008 at 2:35 am
Necrophilia? XD
Nice!
August 24th, 2008 at 2:53 am
Nicely done. In b4 who was corpse?
August 24th, 2008 at 3:19 am
then WHO WAS WAITRESS?
August 24th, 2008 at 4:36 am
oh my gosh i really liked this one. it shows how loneliness can drive people too insanity. 10 outta 10!!
August 24th, 2008 at 4:42 am
Finally! An original creepypasta! I’ve been waiting for so long!
I really enjoyed this one. It was well-written, and the ending tied in perfectly. It certainly succeeded in giving me the chills.
August 24th, 2008 at 4:42 am
Correction: A new creepypasta.
August 24th, 2008 at 7:19 am
Funny ending.
August 24th, 2008 at 7:44 am
Hmm…it’d be more straightforwardly scary if the narrator was arrested. But in its current form, it leaves open many possibilities, and whether it’s due to astral travel, Jekyll and Hyde syndrome or some other displacement depends on your favourite style. Nice.
August 24th, 2008 at 8:00 am
It’d be better if more of a relationship with the waitress was established (for the reader and the protaganist). Has potential. Hooray.
August 24th, 2008 at 9:36 am
Dude.
Awesome. Has multiple interpretations, just needs to be fleshed out more and it’s good.
August 24th, 2008 at 10:48 am
yay nec-rape-philia!
August 24th, 2008 at 11:58 am
Awesome.
August 24th, 2008 at 12:14 pm
thats gotta suck
August 24th, 2008 at 12:15 pm
THEN WHO WAS WAITRESS
August 24th, 2008 at 12:18 pm
I was going to say something about “surprise sex” but… I don’t know, can you surprise the dead?
August 24th, 2008 at 12:23 pm
HA HA DISREGARD THAT I SUCK COCKS.
August 24th, 2008 at 12:24 pm
This fucking rocks. Shut up, OH SHI—. Your not funny.
August 24th, 2008 at 1:01 pm
I did it for the lulz.
August 24th, 2008 at 1:16 pm
HA HA necrophilia
August 24th, 2008 at 1:22 pm
Implied necrophilia.
Maybe.
Could be a whole lot of things, to be honest.
August 24th, 2008 at 1:59 pm
No wonder the sex was so wooden.
August 24th, 2008 at 2:24 pm
Ermmm im phone i come from worchester and im a gallery owner
August 24th, 2008 at 2:25 pm
wtf? he was having sex with a corpse the entire time? thats screwed up…
August 24th, 2008 at 2:45 pm
Laughs were not out loud, and bricks were not shat. It was good though.
August 24th, 2008 at 3:28 pm
Dude’s gonna get raped. In prison.
August 24th, 2008 at 3:41 pm
Sex with a corpse is rather…. piggish =/
August 24th, 2008 at 3:50 pm
THEN WHO WAS MOULD
Also, Oh shi- , you’re obviously some kid who saw people using memes and thought saying them randomly would make you cool.
August 24th, 2008 at 4:14 pm
I found this story to be oddly hilarious.
I feel like a bad person now :/
August 24th, 2008 at 4:29 pm
Poor man has rotten corpse on his noogies.
August 24th, 2008 at 4:31 pm
Damn waitress said my name. That’s all there is to it.
August 24th, 2008 at 5:15 pm
i lol’d again
August 24th, 2008 at 5:17 pm
Ma Cherie — I did, too. Partially because the second person approach sort of sucks out the creepiness for me, and partially because the way it’s written makes it seem like a bizarre sort of joke to me.
August 24th, 2008 at 5:32 pm
I liked this one. I havent seen it before, and it was well written.
Thumbs up.
August 24th, 2008 at 6:46 pm
i fricken loved this!!! LOL SURPRISE!!!!
Candlejack, don’t you have souls that need to be stolen???? >-> srsly dude, go away and leave me alo
August 24th, 2008 at 7:41 pm
Its so nice of C.J. to click the submit button when he takes the souls.
August 24th, 2008 at 8:21 pm
if he can’t make any friends, how come he’s got a best friend to take to this awful diner?
August 24th, 2008 at 8:39 pm
@Fea-
Because it says that he makes new friends and eventually stops going there for a while.
Very creepy, to say the least.
August 24th, 2008 at 9:02 pm
>>Sigma
Irony much?
August 24th, 2008 at 9:29 pm
wait candlejack if u killed her then were u the 1 that raped her first?
August 24th, 2008 at 10:55 pm
@W
Well, yeah, that too xD
Mind you, I’m not saying that I think that it’s terrible or anything, and I mean no offense to the OP (way, way, way better than anything I could do). I’m just saying that instead of “shitting bricks” at the ending, I laughed a little bit.
I’m very sorry, it’s hard to explain, other than just saying that I have a strange sense of humor.
August 25th, 2008 at 12:32 am
Somebody’s probably gonna fap to this story.
August 25th, 2008 at 1:23 am
“Somebody’s probably gonna fap to this story.”
Shhh >_>
August 25th, 2008 at 1:37 am
If you feel worried, imagine how your friend feels
August 25th, 2008 at 12:20 pm
lmao…dude
gross!
a shizophrenic necrophiliac…my hero much? :p
August 25th, 2008 at 7:21 pm
aww hell no i never did it!
August 26th, 2008 at 4:49 am
GAWDAMN
That was horrible (in a good way).
August 26th, 2008 at 6:22 am
Very good. Creepy, but gross.
August 26th, 2008 at 6:37 am
It wasnt him she got a hair in chuck norris’s milkshake
August 26th, 2008 at 8:20 pm
Oh…god…
This is why I love the internet…So messed up….
August 27th, 2008 at 11:18 am
Yep, I did it. She had it coming. One roundhouse kick to the face to be precise.
August 27th, 2008 at 9:14 pm
sry2say it’s not legally rape if you fuck a corpse, it’s sexual malfeasance. it’s like, a misdemeanor.
August 28th, 2008 at 1:17 pm
did he not see that she was cold in bed 0.o
August 29th, 2008 at 4:42 am
@MooMoon
He got a heater for her thighs.
August 29th, 2008 at 6:37 am
Oh now that I get it after a few minutes..:P
I like very good
August 30th, 2008 at 9:16 am
It’s a good story, but not very well written.
August 31st, 2008 at 12:32 am
Bri/x/ shat.
Gaaah, I love these Insanity and Madness ones.
September 1st, 2008 at 8:14 am
i think she was raped before she was killed, while the protagonist was eating at the Dinner he was feeding and raping her, then when he stopped coming she starved
September 1st, 2008 at 4:15 pm
I am very courteous to people, so I press the Submit Comment button every time
September 6th, 2008 at 8:45 pm
Whoa s** with a corpe i mean WHOA
definetly weird but cool!! you are one good writer. but I love your stories.Exspeialy this one.
September 6th, 2008 at 8:46 pm
whoops spelt corpse wrong sorry but this is kind of embarassing.:)
September 9th, 2008 at 1:08 am
God I love the descriptions in these…
Reeking of pus and rot
September 11th, 2008 at 10:41 pm
Uh oh!! He is in twuble now!!!
TEEHEE!! XD
But I love it though!!
??? LOL ZOMB!!!!!!!
September 18th, 2008 at 9:31 pm
eeeeeeeeeew thats gross
September 25th, 2008 at 4:44 am
Yeah, ending the story two sentences sooner would definitely have made it more dramatic/less humourous. But seriously, that’s what made the ending so good. XD
October 5th, 2008 at 8:44 pm
WHO WAS NECROPHILIAC?
November 2nd, 2008 at 3:02 am
MORE LIKE
WHO WAS FOOD?
November 7th, 2008 at 2:25 pm
ok. this. story.is. pretty.damn.gross
November 20th, 2008 at 10:42 pm
“and, behind the counter, is moldy corpse, reeking of pus and rot.”
found the typo. you mean is A moldy corpse. unless she was named moldy corpse. also does that mean u just talked to her corpse then raeped her? creepy