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  1. Greg
    August 14, 2012 • 1:10 AM

    That was the best creepypasta I’ve ever read…

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    Rating: +11 (from 23 votes)
    • George
      April 17, 2013 • 11:51 PM

      No.

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  2. Watcher
    August 14, 2012 • 2:20 AM

    That was epic O.e

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    Rating: +7 (from 11 votes)
  3. lolcatsmanseven
    August 14, 2012 • 2:58 AM

    Pretty freaky

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  4. KSU FTW
    August 14, 2012 • 3:04 AM

    I cant believe you just left me in that bed bro. The mexicans took my kidney!

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    Rating: +65 (from 71 votes)
  5. pastabones
    August 14, 2012 • 7:28 AM

    well written and interesting, but not the type of thing that usually scares me. good work though

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    Rating: +9 (from 11 votes)
  6. Edo-kun
    August 14, 2012 • 10:00 AM

    Pasta is made of marijuana.
    MOAR PLZ <3

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    Rating: +3 (from 11 votes)
  7. Anonymous
    August 14, 2012 • 11:19 AM

    No real holes to the plot that I saw.
    But, da fuck? Way to call the police. He also could’ve just gone to the other school, UGA, and as a commuter.

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    Rating: +11 (from 15 votes)
  8. Anonymous
    August 14, 2012 • 11:27 AM

    I actually attended Kennesaw State University for a good two years, and I’ve never heard of anything like this…
    Granted last semester was my last semester there after transfer, but it just doesn’t sound that plausible…it’s a small campus, but I’ve had no creepy experiences there.

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  9. Pastamancer
    August 14, 2012 • 12:20 PM

    You and the author of phycosis should team up

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    Rating: +8 (from 12 votes)
  10. BlueBeans
    August 14, 2012 • 1:27 PM

    I liked this one. I was actually worried about what would be in that room labeled A…..caused I knew eventually he/she would go in there. 10/10

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    Rating: +4 (from 8 votes)
  11. Pradicus
    August 14, 2012 • 5:29 PM

    I agree with pastabones. It was very well written, had great flow, good description and not overdone. You finished out your thoughts with well ended and strung together sentences. There were a few snags that caught me but we, as readers, all have our own things that stand out to us. The thing I enjoyed most was that it was written with such ease that it felt honest, making it believable. That’s how you lead a reader. Good job and definitely keep writing.

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    Rating: +6 (from 12 votes)
  12. pastapots
    August 14, 2012 • 6:51 PM

    omg, please dont tell me this is real? this actually scared me xD really good writing tho :D

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  13. Slenderho
    August 14, 2012 • 7:27 PM

    Finally, a good pasta. I’ts been a while. Thanks.

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    Rating: +5 (from 9 votes)
  14. Desilee
    August 14, 2012 • 10:09 PM

    I, too, agree with pastabones.

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  15. Nubcake
    August 15, 2012 • 3:26 PM

    Well, there goes MY sleep for the next few days… excellent job!

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    Rating: +2 (from 6 votes)
  16. yas
    August 16, 2012 • 6:27 AM

    What happened with your shoes and poncho? Just left them?

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    Rating: +7 (from 9 votes)
  17. Cards
    August 18, 2012 • 12:29 AM

    Wtf did you expect from a school in one of Georgia’s largest Civil War haunted areas? There’s a metric shit-ton of haunts around KSU.

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    Rating: +5 (from 9 votes)
  18. pliedes
    August 19, 2012 • 4:53 AM

    How anyone can compare this author as being anywhere near the calibur of ‘Psychosis’ author such that they should team up and collaborate, is just… insulting. This story is full of overused cliches – tv’s with minds of their own, turning on even when unplugged, rotting meat with maggots in the kitchen, the smell of which brings the author close to, but not successfully, vomiting, and the being in the bed whose eyes and mouth are sewn shut are just too used up. If you’re going to use cliches, use one and work from there.
    Team up with ‘Psychosis’ author – what’s wrong with u?

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  19. Dirjel
    August 21, 2012 • 12:42 PM

    This was well above average in all regards. Not great, but I still believe congratulations are in order.

    Well done, sir.

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  20. blackhunter
    August 21, 2012 • 2:31 PM

    so that’s what woke me up!! dude!! i was sleeping and you just came inside my room and take away my sheets?!?!?! what’s wrong with you?!?!?!?!?!

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  21. blackhunter
    August 21, 2012 • 2:33 PM

    and that’s what happened to the TV.. i was wondering why was it unplugged :S

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  22. Sora-chan
    August 22, 2012 • 9:04 PM

    Extremely well written. As a KSU student, I enjoy seeing a good piece of fiction about campus. You are well on your way towards a professional level. Congratulations on getting your work published!

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  23. LostintheDarkWoods
    August 24, 2012 • 7:07 PM

    Hi there! I loved your pasta, especially as a resident of Georgia. I was wondering if I could record myself reading aloud your content and post it on youtube. It’s miraculous! I was so fascinated that I was driven to personally repeat it to various members of my family, resulting in ardent cheers. I’d make sure to credit you; I’m sure youtube would love to hear this masterpiece!

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  24. your face
    August 28, 2012 • 6:05 PM

    I live in Kennesaw xD That’s all i saw, now to read.

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  25. Nem
    August 29, 2012 • 4:30 AM

    I felt like a was reading a steven king story.. sucked me right in.

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