Scary Paranormal Stories & Short Horror Microfiction

Creepypasta

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Tuesday.
Tuesday afternoon.
Tick-tick-tick-tick…tick.
The clock stops.
I bang the alarm clock on my bedside table, trying to get
it to start up again.
No luck.
“It must’ve been the rain.” I think “That goddamn rain must’ve ruined it when I ran it from the car. I just get to this apartment and shit’s already breaking. Great.”

In the listing, this place looked like an amazing place to bum out while waiting for my first semester as a freshman to start. A quiet, little apartment on a quiet, little street, but still not that far from the university. It sure as hell beats the dormitories. It even has a cool view out the door on the bottom floor. Right down the street and out onto the city.

The bottom floor is set up like most places around here: one door, with buzzers for each apartment on the wall. When a room is buzzed, it says the apartment number, and then lets the visitor say what they need. Its all rustic and cool, but still modern. My apartment number is 6.

After admiring the view, and mentally reminding myself to take a picture of it later, I close the door and climb the three flights of stairs up to my apartment. Once inside, I look around, decide the boxes look organized enough, and retire to my bedroom. The room’s a little musty, but I turn my phone alarm on, plug it into the charger, and climb in bed. I’m quickly asleep. I don’t dream, at least I don’t think I don’t. I sit in darkness, night quickly flying by. But suddenly, the dark feels somehow too dark and very close. I wake up, sweat on my forehead. I’m up nearly five seconds when my phone alarm goes off.
It’s 8am.
Wednesday morning.

I bum around for the next few days, get my boxes unpacked, and look around the neighborhood a bit. It’s nothing special. A typical area for this part of the world. Suddenly, surprisingly, it’s Friday night. No plans, the entire neighborhood basically sketched out in my head by now. A realization comes to me, I have yet to take that picture. I pick up my camera, put a new memory card in it, the door closes. And another one opens, I’m at street level.

Click, click, click. The sun’s nearly down, it’s raining, and I don’t want my camera, of all things, to get wet. Satisfied with what saw in the viewfinder, the door closes again, and I’m at my apartment door.
I stick my key in the door, and my right shoulder goes cold. I open the door, and pull the shirt off of my
shoulder, trying to get the water off of my skin. But I notice it’s dry. “Odd,” I think. But shrug it off, and go to my computer. I plug my camera on, leave it to sync, and go to bed.
Lights off, eyes closed.

A noise wakes me up.
The alarm on my alarm clock is going off. Not my phone. I impulsively smack it, and it immediately goes dead. My room is dark, darker than it should be. I get up, and walk into the living room. Half-conscious, I notice my camera’s syncing is done. I walk over there, and start scrolling through the pictures.

The third one catches my eye. There’s a dark figure there, one not there in the others.
Abruptly, my apartment gets buzzed. Not once, not twice,
but three times. Over and over, groups of three.
The automated voice announces:
“Six six six… Six six six…. Six six six… Six six sixxxx…”

The room goes cold.

Credit To: Anthony

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  • Pacothebanana

    Your writing technique was different and good but the ending wasn’t great. Now that I think about it your plot line is resenblant of O-Henry in the good way.

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  • Beastoking

    Not bad, pretty damn creepy

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    Rating: +1 (from 11 votes)
  • Spengrantest

    6666666? What do you mean?

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  • BlueBeans

    I liked it.

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  • Dormin

    I feel this couldv’e been much longer, just as things started getting interesting the story just ended, not even a appetizer, 5/10 for me.

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    Rating: +10 (from 12 votes)
  • Konakona

    666 I’m guessing Saitan or a devil of some sort. Decent pasta 5/10

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  • Shogunfish

    The 666 thing was clever and shows that you actually put thought into this as you wrote it. The rest of the pasta was average.
    I suspect you came up with the 666 thing first and then wrote the pasta around it. With a little more work it could have been a really delicious pasta, as is though it’s still pretty good.

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  • Anonymous

    Had some really great potential, but ended up as slightly undercooked pasta. 5/10

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    • RedBloodedRedNeck

      Sooooo… Al Dente?

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  • LollipopGestapo

    The ending was abrupt, and a bit raw for me, but I enjoyed the writing. Also, about the dreaming,”I don’t think I don’t,” double negative, meaning you do think you dream. “I don’t dream- at least, I think I don’t.” Probably just something you overlooked, but a head’s up, all the same.

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  • teecha

    Double negative there, and could have been a lot longer – write, write, write, the potential’s there. I liked this one, and I’m sure I’ll love what’s to come. 6/10

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  • http://creepypasta.com Alicya

    THEN WHO WAS BUZZER?

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  • ClockworkLizard

    Overall, good pasta, but not great. I actually like the way it ended, but you can do so much more with it. I’d like to see an extended version.

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  • blah

    I have heard the whole 666 thing so many times in many pastas to me its over done and I wasn’t creeped out because when you put that you were syncing your camera and looking at pictures i had a feeling there was a ghost

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  • http://none Walrus King

    “i don’t think i don’t” Genius.

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  • Duane

    Why would Emperor Nero be buzzing his apartment?

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  • Anon

    Creepy. I like your writing style. It was a little confusing though. Good job 7/10

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  • RainbowGummy

    Ok. This is my first time guys. Wish me luck….

    THEN WHO WAS CREEPY FIGURE

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  • Anonymous

    The story overall seems sloppily pasted around the number 666. What it could use is more detail or just extend the story a bit more. It abruptly ended right when the horror started.
    Oh god! Help me! I’ve become a creepypasta critic!

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  • Anonymous

    Wow creepy

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  • Keiran Griffin

    What she means by the six six six is Satan it on you tubes

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  • Why do they run?

    As soon as he mentioned that his apt number was 6 I could see where this was going. Predictable!

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  • Feral

    666 is the Devils Number in the bible

    Spengrantest:
    6666666? What do you mean?

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