Advertisement
Please wait...

The Autopsy of Cole Ryder



Estimated reading time — 3 minutes

“Cole Ryder. Age 23. Death by multiple lacerations to chest, reaching as deep as his lungs. Poor bastard looks like someone cut him open multiple times with a damned sword. No visible signs of struggle, indicating that he was either drugged before hand, or was hit unexpected.” the coroner recorded, working together with the officers to try to piece together the final moments of Cole’s moderately short life.

Cole’s lifeless, blood-drained corpse lay flat on the autopsy table, with the ribbons of flesh hanging loosely – even before the coroner began his work. He was approximately 5’11” tall, short brown hair, average build, with no tattoos or piercings. The average kind of guy you could walk past every day on the street and never take a second glance at. To society, he was just like everyone else – an invisible person, with an unimportant life.

“How can people do this to each other?” the coroner questioned aloud while removing Cole’s ribcage. As he was about to make an incision to remove the lungs for closer examination something caught his eye. He placed a hand just under Cole’s shredded left lung, and produced a bloody, airtight plastic bag. Removing the bag and emptying its contents onto a nearby sterilized desk produced a USB stick, simply labeled: PLAY ME. Breaking from the procedure, the coroner ran out of the room to the two officers working on the case, handing them this strange new piece of evidence.

Advertisements

“Continue the autopsy, we’ll find out what this is about.” instructed one of the officers. They turned to leave, rushing to the nearby police station to check the contents of the USB. “We’ll be back shortly.”

The coroner re-sterilized and once again entered the room to continue working on Cole’s corpse. Picking up the scalpel, he continued where he had left off, about to remove the lungs.

At the police station, the two officers loaded up the USB and checked the files. There was one single audio file, entitled ‘Current Number’. Opening the file, they could hear a voice, though it sounded slightly different than a human voice. It sounded more raspy and cruel, almost animalistic; though still in English. “Eleven thousand, eight hundred and forty-two.” the voice kept repeating, as if trying to memorise the number.

“What the hell is this?” asked the first officer. The second simply shrugged and they closed the file down. Strangely, however, there was now a second audio file on the USB titled ‘Update’.

“By the time you return, the number will be eleven thousand, eight hundred and forty-three.” It was the same inhuman voice, scratching through the speakers.

Advertisements

“Have you ever seen anything like this before?” the second officer asked the first. The first shook his head violently and a chill air passed through the room. “I think, perhaps we should return to the coroners office.” suggested the second.

Advertisements

Upon re-entering the coroners office, the metallic sickly smell of blood wafted through the air and a strange laugh could be heard from the autopsy room. Drawing their handguns from their holsters, the two men kicked open the autopsy room door to a scene straight out of anyone’s worst nightmare. There was more blood than paint on the walls and the coroner was completely missing, except for the pair of eyes, slowly rolling across the floor. Cole Ryder still lay motionless on the autopsy table, chest cavity still open and face still lifeless, though he was now caked in the coroners blood. Walking slowly around the room, the two officers stopped either side of Cole’s body, surveying everything and drawing their guns, ready to unload upon the next thing that moved. Some sick fuck had obviously done this… and the officers did not care to be the next two victims.

A spine chilling animalistic laugh filled the room, reverberating off all the walls, making it impossible to tell where the sound came from originally. “More fresh meat!” the voice exclaimed, and both men were impaled by large, sword-like claws.

Advertisements

Cole sat up, withdrawing his bladed hands from the officers chests. Then using his razor phalanges with utmost precision, neatly cut out the sets of eyes from the now lifeless men. Changing the scalpel like protrusions from his fingers to blades like large hacksaws, he then tore at the bodies, ripping them to pieces and splattering even more crimson stains over the walls.

Picking up the pieces of flesh that were now scattered around the room, he started placing them into his own chest cavity and lungs, which while still exposed and cut open, seemed to take on a life of their own. Thrashing around like wild animals, they consumed the raw human meat. Once he was done completely consuming the bodies, he retrieved his ribcage and pushed his chest back together with the sickening crunch of bone on bone, deleted the recording of the autopsy from the audio recorder, picked it up and casually walked back out into the world, speaking over and over into the recorder “Eleven thousand, eight hundred and forty-five.”

Credit To – Uforia

Please wait...

Copyright Statement: Unless explicitly stated, all stories published on Creepypasta.com are the property of (and under copyright to) their respective authors, and may not be narrated or performed under any circumstance.

33 thoughts on “The Autopsy of Cole Ryder”

  1. Meh, sorry, story isn’t creepy. Random killer monster with nothing in particular to differentiate it from any other random killer monster. Could be something but currently this story has no soul, no spark, its just another critter in a sea of critters.

  2. it was very good and personally i like it when people use words like spine-chilling, cause if u use words that are to ‘big’ it kind of takes u out of the story since alot of the readers would have to figure out what that word meant. but a little hint when creating future pasta’s pay attention to the little details like a coroner wouldnt remove the rib cage they leave the bones in thier they really only take out the organs and stuff like that. also he would beable to tell if a victim was drugged or unexpectdley hit but i guess if the body was more in ‘pieces’ it would be harder to tell. either way love the story.

    1. Thanks for the advice, will keep it in mind for the future. Also, I could have researched a little more about coroners, I admit that in hindsight. Its a mistake I’ll be trying not to repeat again in the future.

  3. Why does a shapeshifting monster need to pretend he’s dead in order to find victims? And what’s the deal with the USB key and the count? Seems purposeless.

  4. This story was like a weird horror-spin on that game “Prototype”. My only complaint was the random shape shifting. I guess it needed better detail. Overall, I loved it and would like to read more from you.

  5. I don’t know what’s with the low rating, I liked it and didn’t see the twist coming, which is unusual for me. The one weird thing was the metal claws, which didn’t really fit in with everything else, but I thought it was really good!

  6. Diego Parada-Lopez

    It’s a fucking T-1000 advanced prototype! I mean robot that can be liquid metal and change forms and make blades with hands.

    1. Haha, yes, I did watch too many terminator movies growing up… I didn’t mean for Cole to become a T-1000, but in the end it kinda looked that way, didnt it?

  7. I hardly ever comment on creepypastas, but dang it, when I saw the bad ratings after reading it I was like no way man. This was a sweet story. Seriously. Keep it up man. And since you said were you 15 when you wrote this, im sure you can deliver even better in the future.

    1. Thanks mate. Glad some people enjoyed it. I’ve got a few drafts together that still need a bit more work, and another completed one that I’m hoping to submit next time submissions open. :D

  8. The word usage in this one is clunky and awkward. No professional coroner would use poor grammar like “hit unexpected.” In junior high they taught you to “show, not tell” with your writing – we don’t need you to tell us that the laugh was “spine-chilling,” describe it and we’ll decide. The gore seems glossed over and tacked-on, almost like this was written by a teenage boy. Human eyes, when removed, will not “roll” unless pushed by something, they are wet and sticky and gelatinous. Not to mention, who the hell is Cole Ryder and why does he have metal fingers or whatever? This whole thing seemed choppy and senseless.

    1. Written by a teenage boy? Actually, pretty accurate. I wrote this when I was 15, and other than a few typos and grammar being fixed, the story is unchanged. Cole Ryder is the name of the ‘monster’ in this story. And as for the ‘metal fingers’, as the author, I imagined him as a shapeshifter, but tried to leave it up to reader interpretation.

    2. What’s wrong with male teenage authors? I’m 16, and I wrote a pasta, and it currently holds an 8.8/10 rating on this very site, based on 409 votes. It’s called “Sewers,” if you want to read it.

      Don’t stereotype. 90% of the time, someone is gonna come on and prove you wrong.

      1. This person clearly did not, and the majority of teenage boys I have known couldn’t write to save their lives. Deal.

        1. Your personal experience isn’t a valid evaluation of an entire demographic, you idiot. Most teenage boys can’t write because most teenagers can’t write. Deal.

      2. I know! It’s the same with teenage girls! I haven’t written a pasta on this site, but according to my ample fan base on Wattpad, mine was pretty good, with 236 votes.

Leave a Comment

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

Scroll to Top