• Chainerman

    Wonderful!

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    Rating: +64 (from 70 votes)
    • Anonymous

      Best pasta I’ve read.

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      Rating: +23 (from 37 votes)
    • Anonymous

      Num num num need more

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      Rating: +11 (from 19 votes)
    • Some Fat Guy

      Waiter! WAITER!!

      What do you put in this amazing sauce?!?

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      Rating: +38 (from 44 votes)
      • ScrubbymanUSA

        I like your user name and I whant it

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        Rating: +5 (from 11 votes)
      • Herobrine

        MORE! MMMOOORRREEE!!! WE NEED MMMMMMOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEE!!!

        -Herobrine

        Always watching…

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        Rating: -14 (from 16 votes)
    • ScrubbymanUSA

      Yay scrue gout story’s yay I the worst speller ever yay

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      Rating: -2 (from 14 votes)
  • Thedude

    Was good really goof

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    Rating: +40 (from 54 votes)
    • NNY

      indeed, it was really goof lol

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      Rating: +49 (from 55 votes)
      • J-Tarr

        You’ve done goofed.

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        Rating: +48 (from 50 votes)
  • Thedude

    Oops I mean good really good

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    Rating: +79 (from 87 votes)
  • Nobody

    Dang, this is some good pasta

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    Rating: +35 (from 41 votes)
    • Waddupwaddup

      Yumyumyum, delicioso indeed!

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      Rating: +7 (from 17 votes)
      • Anonymous

        *goof

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        Rating: +7 (from 9 votes)
  • C van A

    Really good.

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    Rating: +12 (from 16 votes)
  • norin

    Nicely done!

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    Rating: +12 (from 18 votes)
  • luke

    very good, i quite liked it.

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    Rating: +8 (from 16 votes)
  • http://www.mybloghasadd.blogspot.com Addish

    Different, I like it. Interesting concept. I’ve always wished for this power too funnily enough. Now not so much. :p

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    Rating: +36 (from 38 votes)
    • Anonymous

      If you do LSD, your power could be true, but please don’t. I don’t reccommend anyone using drugs. Unless prescribed by an official doctor.

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      Rating: +24 (from 38 votes)
      • Doctor

        You can trust me, take LSD.

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        Rating: +105 (from 113 votes)
        • Doctor number 2

          Dont trust him I know what to do I’m a Doctor

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          Rating: +43 (from 55 votes)
        • Doctor number 3

          Don’t trust doctor number 2, LSD is the way to go

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          Rating: +54 (from 56 votes)
        • Doctor Number 4

          LSD is great. It made me imagine three other doctors.

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          Rating: +79 (from 87 votes)
        • Doctor number 5

          LSD is amazing i now have 4 split personalities

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          Rating: +17 (from 17 votes)
        • Deputy-_-S_E_X_Y

          4 out of 5 doctors agree that I should take LSD.

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          Rating: +16 (from 18 votes)
      • http://www.jordanwells12.blogspot.com Jordan

        acctually, it looks like you have 5 now

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        Rating: -6 (from 8 votes)
      • The Doctor

        Are you actually listening to those guys? No trust me, I’m THE Doctor. Don’t do drugs because wibbly wobbly timey whimey reasons. Also you may want to count the shadows..

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        Rating: +10 (from 14 votes)
        • Anonymous

          hahahahahahah i love you

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          Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
      • Glittergirl

        That just kept getting better. XP

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        Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
  • Katie Bug =D

    Dang, this was an amazing pasta! A few grammatical errors but, hey, what do I know? The layout is great. I adore the last line! Amazing. Absolutely amazing! =) A++++++

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    Rating: +32 (from 34 votes)
    • Anonymous

      I believe the grammatical errors were intentional as he was speaking from the old man’s point of view.

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      Rating: +17 (from 23 votes)
  • Undefined

    Yummy pasta is yummy. 7/10

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    Rating: +1 (from 17 votes)
    • Purple Frog

      Old meme is old.

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      Rating: 0 (from 18 votes)
      • ScrubbymanUSA

        Best user name ever

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        Rating: -1 (from 1 vote)
    • Nikita

      why only seven? what’s a ten to you?

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      Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
      • Evanescent Fox

        Have you read The Pastel Man? Or The Sandman? Or practically any works by vincent v. cava or michael whitehouse? That’s why.

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        Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
        • That Camel Guy

          This pasta confused me, probably because I’m reading it at midnight, but this is the usual time I read pastas… The way it was set up and the descriptions were awful… 6/10

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          Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
  • LetItBe

    Sounds like Spongebob.

    3/10. :/

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    Rating: -34 (from 148 votes)
    • Montana

      It’s sad that I know what episode you’re talking about. Doodlebob was a bad doodle.

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      Rating: +57 (from 59 votes)
      • Alyssaaaa

        Holy hell. It all makes sense now….

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        Rating: +5 (from 5 votes)
        • Anonymous

          actually i thought of chalk zone

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          Rating: +7 (from 7 votes)
    • SilverSurfer166

      Hehe, that’s true, it is Doodle Bob.

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      Rating: +11 (from 13 votes)
      • angelofdead

        (takes off glasses) MOTHER OF GOD

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        Rating: +12 (from 12 votes)
        • xXJonodXx

          Holy shhhhhhhhh…… WTF OOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH. i didnt see that coming. GRLOB!!! DOJSDLJWO:JDKS:JDOWKDPJWI

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          Rating: +3 (from 3 votes)
  • Jack Empty

    Delicious pasta. I’d eat again, but I don’t understand, was Jacob still caught in said drawn realm, with his hand still in our world?

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    Rating: +20 (from 20 votes)
    • http://Kongregate.comasawesome643 awesome643

      He was in a different plane(world, or possibly dead) but somehow his hand stayed here and is being punished for all of the rest to eternity.

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      Rating: +6 (from 6 votes)
  • Awesome-O

    One of the best pastas I’ve ever read. Bravo.

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    Rating: +5 (from 7 votes)
  • Mr.C

    Very tasty pasta. I could use a second helping. Oh, and…

    WHO WAS DRAWING?

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    Rating: +17 (from 33 votes)
    • Jacob

      Me, obviously!

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      Rating: +32 (from 32 votes)
      • Andrew

        HOLY SHIT HE’S BACK!!!… Does that mean the Drawings…..?! OH FUCK!!!!!

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        Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
  • ty

    i reeeeally liked this one.

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    Rating: +5 (from 9 votes)
  • Anonymous

    Good pasta is good!

    The only thing that took away from it was that I couldn’t stop thinking of the Spongebob episode where that happens.

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    Rating: +40 (from 40 votes)
    • Anonymous

      In this though, the drawings were 2 demensional and could only go side to side, unlike in spongebob where they were 3 demensinal

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      Rating: +7 (from 7 votes)
      • Anonymous

        But if the drawings were two dimensional and could only move side to side on the walls, how could they have escaped into our world?

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        Rating: 0 (from 4 votes)
        • Anonymous

          The fake Jacob drew a door for them all to escape through.

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          Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
  • Lolwut

    Some grammatical errors, but overall pretty good. 9/10.

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    Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
  • EH?

    But who was ugly chick that commented above me? (Katie Maggots)

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    Rating: -21 (from 25 votes)
  • Holder of Loyalty

    *claps* Very good. I’d love to see it be a short film or something of the sort. The ending was perfect.

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    Rating: +11 (from 13 votes)
  • Queen Bee

    Then who was Jacob Black?!?!

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    Rating: -12 (from 18 votes)
    • Jane_The_Killer

      He is the lycanthrope in the twilight series…..

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      Rating: 0 (from 14 votes)
      • Ceridwen

        He actually isn’t technically a lycanthrope, he’s a shape-shifter.

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        Rating: -4 (from 6 votes)
  • naim

    Awesome!!!

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    Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
  • BeccaTheCyborg

    Damn, now that is excellent.

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    Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
  • Anonymous

    The purple crayon gone rouge? lol.

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    Rating: +19 (from 19 votes)
  • The Duke

    Excellent pasta! Reminds me of the story of that creature outside the farmer’s house, making a border around it with the bales of hay. Related?

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    Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
    • -.-

      Do you know that story’s name?

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      Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
    • H.P suckscraft

      The thing that stalks the fields???

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      Rating: +1 (from 3 votes)
  • ;-;

    Ooooh, nice one. Much better than the recent ones.

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    Rating: +5 (from 5 votes)
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