Tell Me You Love Me
In my town, there is an old wive’s tale of a boy who fell in love with a girl. He could never get up the nerve to ask her out, he’d follow her, waiting for an opportunity to approach her and ask her out.
One day, he found out she was moving town due to problems with her parents and most likely never coming back. He decided he’d wait on the outskirts of town and surprise her.
While he was waiting, his head filled with all the possibilities that this event could lead to. He begin to get excited, keeping his wrists together and drumming his fingers together.
He saw her car leaving the town and heading down the only road out which he was waiting beside, hiding in the bushes. As this was a rural road, there were large bushes either side of the road and only one lane for the cars to drive on.
As the car drew nearer, the excitement overtook him and he leaped onto the center of the road, shocking the girl and not leaving enough breaking distance for her to stop.
The car swerved and hit the boy, launching him through the air and landing hard on the rough terrain of the rural road. The girl jumped from the car and approached his twitching body.
As the girl bends down to examine his injuries, she hears a faint gasp from his body. He utters a single sentence,
“Love me?” He asks with a grin, as blood trickles from his deathly grin.
“What?” She replies in her confused state, after presuming he had died.
“Do you love me?” He questions a sickly monotone voice.
“Em…yeah sure.” She answers after a moments silence.
“You’re lying.” He yells louder than he should be able to, considering his current state.
The girl apologizes, and begins to back away in fear of his screaming, a look of terror spread across her face.
With great difficulty, he attempts to stand, he groans accompanied by the cracking of his bones. He falls to the ground and lets out a cry of pain.
The girl approaches him again in pity, lifting his arm over her shoulder and helping him get to his feet. She walks him to her car and lays him in the back seat and he loses consciousness.
She climbs into the driver seat and continues the way she was headed, as there is no hospital in her town and she wasn’t eager on spending the night with her parents.
The drive to the next town is along a dark and lonely side road, nothing but empty fields on either side of it. She hears him shifting about in the back seat. She speeds up, eager to get to the hospital, where she can drop him off and continue with the rest of her long journey.
“Are you alright?” She asks, not even sure if he is awake but eager to fill the silence with something.
Keeping his eyes closed, he questions her again.
“Love me.” He mutters, as if the words pain him more than his wounds.
She stays silent, pretending not to hear him and turns on the radio to fill the awkward void the question has created.
“Why don’t you love me?” He questions, continuing his interrogation.
She sneaks a glance in the rear view mirror, and immediately wishes she hadn’t. The boy was now sitting up in the back seat, staring maniacally at the back of her head, an unsettling lifelessness in his empty eyes.
“You should lay down, rest, your wounds could get worse.” She suggests, hoping he’d stop his incessant glare burning deep into the back of her head.
“Tell me you love me.” He demands, raising his voice slightly louder than before.
“Lie down, we’ll be at the hospital soon, I think I see street lights ahead.” She replies, again avoiding his question.
“Why won’t you say you love me?” He screams piercingly, causing the girl to jump in her seat.
“Stop this!” She yells in response, trying to break through his screams of insanity.
“Love me!” He screams one last time, wrapping his hands around her face.
She yells out in agony as he claws at her upper face, gouging out her right eye. She screams continuously, the car swerving on the road as he grips her around the neck.
Her focus is torn from her driving, now being driven by her primal instinct to survive. The car swerves out of control and crashes into a telegraph pole.
The following morning, the car was discovered by local police officers and the woman’s body was examined by forensic experts who concluded that the woman didn’t die from the crash, but from strangulation as proven by the severe bruising around her neck in the clear form of someone’s hands. This is the part that confused the experts, as there was only one body discovered in the wreckage. Whoever else would have been in the car with her should have died from the crash itself.
The boy hasn’t been sited since that night,some say he has returned to the town and has fallen in love again.
Credit To: Tober ‘n Wick
Tell Me You Love Me,


this reminds me of myself this kinda happend to me today but without the gory stuff
You got stuck in a car with a grievously injured boy asking you to love him?
That happens to me on a daily basis.
At first I kinda believed that this story would end with a cute, romantic ending (I forgot that this is f***ing CreepyPasta.com), so I kept reading it, and then the end just made me sad…
So you didn’t like it??
Me too
it was a good story nevertheless, but I was kinda bummed out at the end.
Nooooooo
how cute!!
very sweet of him to hold on like that, i fear strangleing my love XD
Sounds like overly attached girlfriend.
*boyfriend
And he was insane, because obviously the girl barely knew him, and he wasn’t even her boyfriend. Fuck.
OMG THAT WAS FREAKY. Nice pasta dude, had that creepy effect and made me jump from my seat. It was a little simple though, and could have used more detail. The story kinda made no sense, why would he kill her? I give it 8/10
Because she didn’t love him :I
An overall tasty pasta, very well wirtten, with some spelling mistakes, but you’re on the right track as far as story telling goes. Keep up the good work, hope to see more from you !
If the girl died and the boy was never seen again how can anyone know the details of this story?
Its a story bro.
I found this adorable… And I don’t know why. •_•
I thought this was REALLY BAD. The whole obsession thing has been done, and this was done without any decent details. Why does he jump in front of the car? Why does he strangle the chick? Is there something about him that makes him immune from dying in the car crash? Sense is not made.
No, I’d like to send this pasta back.
No1 cares.
Hi,
I am one of the creators of this story, me and my friend did it!
I actually edited this story a bit after we wrote it and posted it to another writing site which I am on!
To read the newer version, and more of my work, here are some links:
The edited, improved version of this story:
http://www.wattpad.com/6647872-short-stories
My profile with all my other stories:
http://www.wattpad.com/user/MadeInWicklow
Dis won didnent evn hit da spot mane it woz two fony bombaclot
I thought this was brilliant, actually. I did see some spelling errors, along with some punctuation errors, but nothing too bad. I liked the obsessiveness of the guy in the story; it really adds a creep factor. Good job!
I really loved this story (‘:
I’m sorry of the girl that didn’t told him that she loved him
*shudders* good thing no one likes me..
sounds like my ex