• teecha

    10/10, one vote – don’t you think it’s a bit too obvious?

    Also, I believe you’re not a native speaker. Otherwise, you might need to spend some more time reading and studying your language.

    Not creepy and poorly executed, 3/10.

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  • Eye

    I am so not looking in any mirror anytime soon…

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    • the Dark One

      why HUMAN it was only a STORY sweet nightmares:)

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  • Anon

    A proof-read would have done this story wonders…

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  • The Reader

    This was just….crap.

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  • Craver

    Terribly written. A lot of grammar mistakes and then the whole the was very choppy. Age old concept as well.

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    Rating: -3 (from 13 votes)
    • Bella

      So.. you talk about it having grammar mistakes when you, yourself, yourself, made one. Don’t criticize others unless you’re perfect yourself(;

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      • JJKaye13

        The comments are meant to critique pastas. It’s not up to you what is said.

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  • Katkee

    Shouldn’t have read it. Excellent job – that’s the problem. ;) I’m glad it wasn’t night, at least, because there’s a mirror right across from where I’m sitting. Great pasta, but I won’t be able to sleep tonight. O.O

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  • Nighthawk

    BUT WHO WAS MIRROR?

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  • Alice

    So the concept of the story was very nice, and the development of it was well done. However, there were quite a few grammatical mistakes, and also a few things that could have been fixed to make the story flow more smoothly. First off, “I lived in a constant fear, and noone could help me, neither police, nor a psychoanalist. ” *no one. Also, instead of neither, it would be not. and *psychologist. Second thing, “taked” is not a word, however, “taken” is. Just reading that story makes my skin crawl more than Nightmare on Elm street does. Other than that, it was an okay story, though with a little revision would make it SO much better. 5/10 :)

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    • Alice

      *word, not story. But seriously, Nightmare on Elm street is so freaking creepy. Best horror movie EVER. xD

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  • Anonymous

    Wow, that was terrifying, and I have the lights out and everything, I am never going to look myself in the eyes in a mirror again! Very good pasta, very tasty.

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  • Fizzle Out

    If a Pyschoanalist couldn’t help, maybe an Analrapist could?

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    • http://www.creepypasta.com derpbutt

      I blue myself when I read this comment.

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  • Anonymous

    It doesen’t matter if its light or not but if I look into the mirror and make faces and “relax” my eyes I get fucking scared and have to stop doing it. I can see myself do those silly faces but soon it seems that the face is changing too much. Hard to explain. Scary shit. I hate mirrors.

    Also the story was good.

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  • Someone

    Hmm it was alright, but not too original. It was very similar to one of the books in the Goosebumps series that I had read years ago.

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  • Anonymous

    Pretty decent story. Nice ending. 7/10

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  • http://www.fanfiction.net Cat

    Fairly good story, though quite a few grammatical mistakes. Overused idea as well. Other than that, this was an OK pasta. I would rate it about 6/10.

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  • Endoplasmic Reticulum

    Wait, if her daughter was pulled into the mirror, and whoever gets pulled in becomes the mirror monster, wouldn’t that mean her daughter took over her body instead of the monster?

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    • http://deliriletterari.blogspot.com CMT

      Exactly what I was thinking

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  • leV-Lee

    The the “you’ll” at the last sentence with a “someone will”, and you’ll have a better story.

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  • Funky Winkerbean

    So, uh, you still have access to the internet on the other side of the mirror. Cant you contact someone with that to get help? Some of the grammar and writing was a bit awkward, which kinda took me out of the story. Not a bad effort, though

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  • TheJOKER

    For the love of English….WHO WAS GRAMMAR?!?!?

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  • AnonReader

    That was great, maybe some minor grammatical mistakes but overall very well done and creepy (:

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  • Ryan

    I liked it,it had a good story line and ending,and I liked how this creepypasta used their family in the story,and not just them…

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  • Ryan

    8/10

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