Darkness, though not complete darkness, surrounds you. A full moon shines through the treetops and slightly illuminates the fog surrounding you. The flashlight you were holding has flickered out. You look around frantically, fear swarming your insides. Surely someone would have noticed you missing from the campsite. All the bravery that had convinced you to try and see what you had caught a glimpse of earlier has vanished and you are all alone. Your imagination starts to wander as your heart rate rises. You hear a twig snap somewhere near you, and all the stories that had been told around the campfire rush to your mind all at once. Especially the one your brother had told… What was the name of that creature? … He has no face. Another twig snaps in the distance. No eyes, no mouth, no nose. You madly search your surroundings, but it is impossible to see anything in this fog. He supposedly lives in these woods, but that is only a story, right?
Your thoughts escape you when you see the outline of a figure, but this is no man. This person is quite obviously a female. She is wearing a black dress that seems to hug her, yet flow around her all at once. You see her eyes glistening in the moonlight. Gorgeous shining eyes. You are unable to look away. Why had you been so scared? Comfort fills you as you walk towards her. There is something off about her, but you can’t quite put your finger on it. There is calmness filling your body like a drug. When you are within feet of her, you notice what it was that was peculiar about her. Those beautiful eyes are a dark, midnight, soulless black, yet you still are captivated by them, unable to look away. Fear starts to burn again in the pit of your stomach, but it is instantly put out, like a fire doused by water. You try fighting this calmness, but your will power escapes you as you drown in this amenity. Why would you ever want to leave this gaze?
What you do not notice is her mouth.. or lack thereof, rather. You are so far gone that you do not even realize that she is completely bald. Her entire body except for her inky black eyes is a smooth, alabaster white. You have stopped walking, yet you still seem to be moving towards her, or floating better yet. Towards her, towards her eyes, until all at once everything is black, just as black as those eyes that had lured you. Then there is nothingness. In an instant, you cease to exist.
“Who is this woman of the night?”, one might query.
She is everything, yet she is nothing. She has no soul, yet she owns millions. She is comfort, yet she is fear. She was created by a creature of death, so that he could have something to love. So again, she is death, yet life, and hate, yet love.
She is Slenderwoman.
Credit To: Lyn
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I love it is spectacular and very ominus??☺?
As Nute Gunray* would say:
This is getting out of hand! Now there are TWO of them.
(*registered trademark of Lucasfilm Limited)
I really loved this story, it really drew my in. Almost like I could almost feel the terror and the lure of The Slender Woman’s eyes. I really like what you did; with how the Slender woman came about. It’s a powerful story and it could really go far, if you wrote more on this, it could definitely become a novel. It’s really good, you should keep writing :)
The thing I don’t get is why dose she have eyes.it kinda bad to say she got eyes…js
The story kinda off to me,but its ok..
Seriously you do realize that Jane is a good girl and only tries to kill Jeff
This one was pretty interesting. Its nice to see more then just the generic, boring slenderman stories that you find all over the place. Just wish it could have been a bit longer
It…… was ok… i guess. but please don’t fuk with slendy by making a girl version you just fuked his name hes still bad ass though…
Well, that was… interesting I must say. Although it’s not the same as “Slenderman”, I do suppose it belongs here as well.
-10/10
encore encore!
… Rage Quit.
But she has eyes!
WTF?? Slenderman has no eyes so why should Slenderwoman? That makes no sense to me..
SLENDERWOMAN VS SLENDERMAN CMON MAKE A JEFF VS JANE PARODY WITH SLENDERWOMAN AND SLENDERMAN!!!!!
So she is slenderwoman right?
That mean her creator must’ve been
SLENDER
kinda freaky!!
Omg this is AWESOME! I wish it was a little more developed ya know???
AGH!
Why did you have to reveal out daughter like that?
It was supposed to be a surprise…
There’s a slender WOMAN now? Aww shit.. this is worse than i thought!
possibly a dark soul to help slenderman
When I read the last paragraph I thought it was gonna say “shes the ginger”
hmmm the reason why slendy hates you is because your not immortal like me I know him myself and since you can die this happens
You can’t give any form of slenderman eyes
Shuuuutt up crazy monkey!
Female creatures are already scary enough. But no.. You know what, why not let’s make a another creature that instils impending paranoia?! Let’s make her female! ~__~
does that mean slenderman can have woohoo with slenderwomen
ong ha ha
lol
……. i am scared for life but does that mean slenderman can have — with slenderwomen lol
I can’t believe I’m saying this, but, Rule 34, right?
it was tearible
no bueno
…Comfort fills you as you walk towards her. There is something off about her, but you can’t quite put your finger on it. There is calmness filling your body like a drug…Fear starts to burn again in the pit of your stomach, but it is instantly put out, like a fire doused by water. You try fighting this calmness, but your will power escapes you as you drown in this amenity.’ –I really LIKE THIS part as a CONCEPT.
‘…Comfort fills you as you walk towards her. There is something off about her, but you can’t quite put your finger on it. There is calmness filling your body like a drug…Fear starts to burn again in the pit of your stomach, but it is instantly put out, like a fire doused by water. You try fighting this calmness, but your will power escapes you as you drown in this amenity.’ –I really this part as a concept.
Why does there ALWAYS have to be a female version of these creepypasta monsters? Sorry, but it takes away from the monster being unique. Jill the Killer, Slenderwoman- what’s next- “The Hoe?” (Female Rake.)
I know what it is. The writers of these pastas with female monster counterparts don’t have the brain capacity to invent their own monster, so they simply choose to take an existing one, and just change it’s gender.
Wow.
I literally laughed out loud at “the Hoe”
give me a break
Wwll I thought it was prety good giving the setting wass just the sam as the slender man how do we know that it was not Slendy ina dress?
Slendy doesn’t have eyes.
Well, feminist would love the idea of having Slenderwomen. But…no.
Not very creepy, but beautiful at least.
That’s a problem.
Also, really? Slenderwoman? Sorry, but um… no. It just doesn’t feel right at all. And eyes. No. If you’re gonna write anything where you have any sort of Slenderbeing at all, NO EYES. That’s the point. It has no face. That’s part of what makes it scary.
I’m pretty sure the original Victor Surge version(s) of Slender Man had some kind of face, but okay.
Holy crap! It’s Slendy-Wendy!
Still no…i guess morbidly obese man will have to work…someone should consider writing that!
dont care. still tap it.
Lol….noooo…..not catchy enough! Its got to be absolutely horrifying and disgusting. I’ll give ya some time to think about it ;)
Chubby-man?
Good point YOU CAN’T HANDLE THE USERNAME…I guess that WOULD be the case. Was hoping for something a lil drastic though :)
Mordbidly-obese-man?
My moms nemisis…that ass jeff my mom skinned him her white dress is
Red now…from that bastards blood…my brother I never met him jeff
Took custody of him I heard his name is john.john the killer.I will
Kill that fucking disgrace…grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.that sick fuck jeff raped
My mom I will kill them 2 disgraces!!!!!!
toch them an i will skin you alive!!!!
She isn’t my mom.My moms name is jane…..jane the killer.
I’m currently writing pasta bout you.
what’s it called?
Well its not YOUR story, its a totally different and ‘fresh’ take on slenderman, I MIGHT call it Slenderchildren…
…I might not submit it.
Or mention it.
Or reemember it.
Or speak of it ever again.
Now that is mean. What people are saying about her. Mama was beutiful. Before she left. Now im all alone with daddy. And people probably think Im a fake anyway. But its okay. As long as I know im not fake. And I have daddy with me. Im Slendermans daughter. I dont even see why everybody is so afraid of him…. or Mama. But I wont try to diminish others opinions. So…in closure, have a nice day.
Wow, that was pointless….
This was just weird…hey! What if Slenderman/woman gained weight??? THEN what would happen???!?
Not-so-slender man?
I’d like a slendertransperson, mystifying and confusing heteros with its ambiguous form.
An interesting take on slenderwoman. I did find the soothing and calming eyes to be a nice motherly touch which just seemed to go hand in hand with her. Dearly enjoyed this.
whats next ? slenderchild
Thats what I just said jackass…
No it would be Slender kaboji
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Wtf!!
They should all try and get together. Slends reunited (badum-tish)…
Stalking someone you used to stalk, SLends reunited…
Next, slenderchild…
maby your right
Is she the child of Slenderman? Or is she his wife off his or something else’s creation? Or is she just another dark being off the night?
My answer is I don’t fucking know.
It is strongly implied at the end that Slenderman created her so that he can have a mate.
it had good use of description. didnt like how it played off of slenderman.
WAIT….. WHAT?
This part was actually well written: "You hear a twig snap somewhere near you, and all the stories that had been told around the campfire rush to your mind all at once. Especially the one your brother had told… What was the name of that creature? … He has no face. Another twig snaps in the distance. No eyes, no mouth, no nose. You madly search your surroundings, but it is impossible to see anything in this fog." Otherwise it was shit. Especially the title, you shouldn’t have given the monster away at the very beginning.
I don’t understand everyone’s obsession with Slenderman. But this is good I guess…
I love this one most descripted but am I the only one who thinks Jeff the killer is creepy
well written
Do not fear, little kid. Next tales will be Slenderdog and Joji the killer dog. Instant creepypasta sucess
Smilebitch, then smilelitter…
This is..alright..I like your depiction of Slenderwoman, but this it not the least bit scary
It was very cheesy and ruined the image of slenderman. Why give it eyes and call it slenderwoman? "She is everything and she is nothing" What, is she Buddhist? You could have made it somewhat distinctive, like saying her dress is actually a mass of her victim’s shadows or her face was actually reflecting your own eyes and smile.
Read one or two older Slender stories. Slenderman was described as everything and nothing before this one was posted. The stories are all listed in order from newest to oldest, so you have to start at the last page of any category or archive to read the first one ever posted on this site.
BUT WHO WAS DRESS?
Nononono the better question is But who was da flashlight?!?!
You no what!!??
I dont get it how come slenda (nickname for slenderwoman) gets to have eyes and slendoy (nickname for slenderMAN) doesnt
FUK DIS!!!!!
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Well, Slender used to be something… Aaaand its gone.
IT’S SLENDERMAN….. NOT SLENDER
Slenderman then Slenderwoman?!?!?!?!?!??!?!? LOL
——————————————Mr. Unknown————————————————–
-.- I thought this would of had potential.
You have to be kidding me.
BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRNNNNNNNNNNNNIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGG MMMMMMMAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNN!
Not the least bit scary
This was good, however the title was kind of a giveaway to the monster :(
What the hell are you doing… I guess it screwed all slender stories, just like when someone wrote "Jane the killer". Who’s the next? The Rake? Sorry, I guess it will be the Rika right? -.-
And it will be the Rika Ferude ಠ_ಠ
Are you the reator of blockstory by any chance?
dude Jeff the killer is still bad-ass even if you think Jane the killer sucked it was pretty bad-ass to me.
Hi babe!! ;D wait. . ? WAT?!? JEFF IS AWSOME BUT FUK JANE!!!! U BELONG W/ ME OR SLENDY!! DARE 2 SLEEP U UNHOLY ( censoring words) . I luv u. :3
K so this is a masterpiece and unless your against the soulmate principle then you must understand that every being has an equal even if there the same sex or different or if there not even remotely interested in each other it dosnt mean they cant have an other half so it does make sense if u dont like it then maybe u should talk to the owner of creepy pasta
Jane the killer isn’t the girl version of Jeff, she a girl who wants her revenge on Jeff and her skin used to be white but now is brown wearing a white mask!
Dude, rule 63 man!
she is the batman
She is the Women Gothem dese….
Truly one of the first things I had to think of.
BAMAN
Wonderful pasta i love the zesty twist at the end!!
thats really nice. i like alot. would make a good movie
I love it someone FINALLY writes about me, but im afraid i must kill you all.
HAHA very funny. T_T Your just like that weirdo on Facebook that says he’s Slendy.
I love it someone FINALLY writes about me, but im afraid i must kill you all. sorry
What u saying slender woman u expect us to belive u slender woman monsters cant use the internet. Fuk u
Um…. slenderwoman in the legend you kill
42 people in a decade.