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Darkness, though not complete darkness, surrounds you. A full moon shines through the treetops and slightly illuminates the fog  surrounding you. The flashlight you were holding has flickered out. You look around frantically, fear swarming your insides.  Surely someone would have noticed you missing from the campsite. All the bravery that had convinced you to try and see what you had caught a glimpse of earlier has vanished and you are all alone. Your imagination starts to wander as your heart rate rises. You hear a twig snap somewhere near you, and all the stories that had been told  around the campfire rush to your mind all at once. Especially the one your brother had told… What was the name of that creature? … He has no face. Another twig snaps in the distance. No eyes, no mouth, no nose. You madly search your surroundings, but it is impossible to see anything in this fog. He supposedly lives in these woods, but that is only a story, right?

Your thoughts escape you when you see the outline of a figure, but this is no man. This person is quite obviously a female. She is wearing a black dress that seems to hug her, yet flow around her all at once. You see her eyes glistening in the moonlight. Gorgeous shining eyes. You are unable to look away. Why had you been so scared? Comfort fills you as you walk towards her. There is something off about her, but you can’t quite put your finger on it. There is calmness filling your body like a drug. When you are within feet of her, you notice what it was that was peculiar about her. Those beautiful eyes are a dark, midnight, soulless black, yet you still are captivated by them, unable to look away. Fear starts to burn again in the pit of your stomach, but it is instantly put out, like a fire doused by water. You try fighting this calmness, but your will power escapes you as you drown in this amenity. Why would you ever want to leave this gaze?

What you do not notice is her mouth.. or lack thereof, rather. You are so far gone that you do not even realize that she is completely bald. Her entire body except for her inky black eyes is a smooth, alabaster white. You have stopped walking, yet you still seem to be moving towards her, or floating better yet. Towards her, towards her eyes, until all at once everything is black, just as black as those eyes that had lured you. Then there is  nothingness. In an instant, you cease to exist.

“Who is this woman of the night?”, one might query.
She is everything, yet she is nothing. She has no soul, yet she owns millions. She is comfort, yet she is fear. She was created by a creature of death, so that he could have something to love. So again, she is death, yet life, and hate, yet love.

She is Slenderwoman.

Credit To: Lyn

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  • http://facebook.com ayo pini

    Wonderful pasta i love the zesty twist at the end!!

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    • dalem

      thats really nice. i like alot. would make a good movie

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    • Slenderwoman

      I love it someone FINALLY writes about me, but im afraid i must kill you all.

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      • LJ

        HAHA very funny. T_T Your just like that weirdo on Facebook that says he’s Slendy.

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    • Slenderwoman

      I love it someone FINALLY writes about me, but im afraid i must kill you all. sorry

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      • wtf u wierd noob

        What u saying slender woman u expect us to belive u slender woman monsters cant use the internet. Fuk u

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      • http://www.creepypasta.com the real slenderman no joke

        Um…. slenderwoman in the legend you kill
        42 people in a decade.

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  • nicolas

    she is the batman

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    • Anonymous

      She is the Women Gothem dese….

      Truly one of the first things I had to think of.

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      • derp

        BAMAN

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  • Chaos

    What the hell are you doing… I guess it screwed all slender stories, just like when someone wrote "Jane the killer". Who’s the next? The Rake? Sorry, I guess it will be the Rika right? -.-

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    • Paul

      And it will be the Rika Ferude ಠ_ಠ

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      • Werewolf King

        Are you the reator of blockstory by any chance?

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    • jeff the killer

      dude Jeff the killer is still bad-ass even if you think Jane the killer sucked it was pretty bad-ass to me.

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      • jeffthfemkiller

        Hi babe!! ;D wait. . ? WAT?!? JEFF IS AWSOME BUT FUK JANE!!!! U BELONG W/ ME OR SLENDY!! DARE 2 SLEEP U UNHOLY ( censoring words) . I luv u. :3

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    • http://facebook.com Rosa sanchez

      K so this is a masterpiece and unless your against the soulmate principle then you must understand that every being has an equal even if there the same sex or different or if there not even remotely interested in each other it dosnt mean they cant have an other half so it does make sense if u dont like it then maybe u should talk to the owner of creepy pasta

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    • Anonymous

      Jane the killer isn’t the girl version of Jeff, she a girl who wants her revenge on Jeff and her skin used to be white but now is brown wearing a white mask!

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    • Me

      Dude, rule 63 man!

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  • DerpDeDerp

    This was good, however the title was kind of a giveaway to the monster :(

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  • Anonymous

    Not the least bit scary

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  • The Burning Man

    You have to be kidding me.

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    • http://www.creepypasta.com the real slenderman no joke

      BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRNNNNNNNNNNNNIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGG MMMMMMMAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNN!

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  • YOU CAN’T HANDLE THE USERNAME!

    -.- I thought this would of had potential.

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  • Mr. Unknown

    Slenderman then Slenderwoman?!?!?!?!?!??!?!? LOL
    ——————————————Mr. Unknown————————————————–

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  • Anonymous

    Well, Slender used to be something… Aaaand its gone.

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    • frycook48

      IT’S SLENDERMAN….. NOT SLENDER

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  • Anonymous

    BUT WHO WAS DRESS?

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    • derp

      Nononono the better question is But who was da flashlight?!?!

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    • Anonymous

      You no what!!??
      I dont get it how come slenda (nickname for slenderwoman) gets to have eyes and slendoy (nickname for slenderMAN) doesnt
      FUK DIS!!!!!
      Follow me on twitter! @johanny_Ventura

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  • Anon

    It was very cheesy and ruined the image of slenderman. Why give it eyes and call it slenderwoman? "She is everything and she is nothing" What, is she Buddhist? You could have made it somewhat distinctive, like saying her dress is actually a mass of her victim’s shadows or her face was actually reflecting your own eyes and smile.

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    • Snyarhedir

      Read one or two older Slender stories. Slenderman was described as everything and nothing before this one was posted. The stories are all listed in order from newest to oldest, so you have to start at the last page of any category or archive to read the first one ever posted on this site.

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  • slen

    This is..alright..I like your depiction of Slenderwoman, but this it not the least bit scary

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  • Top Hat Tiger

    Do not fear, little kid. Next tales will be Slenderdog and Joji the killer dog. Instant creepypasta sucess

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    • YOU CAN’T HANDLE THE USERNAME!

      Smilebitch, then smilelitter…

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  • reapersgirl

    well written

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  • http://Duhretarts Not telling

    I love this one most descripted but am I the only one who thinks Jeff the killer is creepy

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  • K4nnibal

    I don’t understand everyone’s obsession with Slenderman. But this is good I guess…

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  • StoneH

    This part was actually well written: "You hear a twig snap somewhere near you, and all the stories that had been told around the campfire rush to your mind all at once. Especially the one your brother had told… What was the name of that creature? … He has no face. Another twig snaps in the distance. No eyes, no mouth, no nose. You madly search your surroundings, but it is impossible to see anything in this fog." Otherwise it was shit. Especially the title, you shouldn’t have given the monster away at the very beginning.

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  • WAIT….. WHAT?

    it had good use of description. didnt like how it played off of slenderman.

    WAIT….. WHAT?

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  • http://Jameformica@yahoo.com One WIth Darkness

    Is she the child of Slenderman? Or is she his wife off his or something else’s creation? Or is she just another dark being off the night?

    My answer is I don’t fucking know.

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    • Snyarhedir

      It is strongly implied at the end that Slenderman created her so that he can have a mate.

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  • YOU CAN’T HANDLE THE USERNAME!

    Next, slenderchild…

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    • Slender killer 45

      maby your right

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  • Fizzle out

    They should all try and get together. Slends reunited (badum-tish)…

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    • YOU CAN’T HANDLE THE USERNAME!

      Stalking someone you used to stalk, SLends reunited…

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  • selena vanity

    whats next ? slenderchild

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    • YOU CAN’T HANDLE THE USERNAME!

      Thats what I just said jackass…

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    • Anonymous

      No it would be Slender kaboji
      /\
      |
      Wtf!!

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  • Silver_Rathalos

    An interesting take on slenderwoman. I did find the soothing and calming eyes to be a nice motherly touch which just seemed to go hand in hand with her. Dearly enjoyed this.

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  • Anonymous

    I’d like a slendertransperson, mystifying and confusing heteros with its ambiguous form.

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  • THEN WHO WAS….nevermind…

    This was just weird…hey! What if Slenderman/woman gained weight??? THEN what would happen???!?

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    • YOU CAN’T HANDLE THE USERNAME!

      Not-so-slender man?

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