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Pillow



Estimated reading time — 2 minutes

There once was a magical kingdom of sleep
Where children drifted to after counting their sheep
And it was ruled by blankets and pillows and beds
Who would send happy thoughts to little children’s heads.
But in this land of joy and bliss
There was on pillow who ran amiss
He had been fluffed and stuffed terribly wrong
And it is due to this pillow that we have this sad song.
For one day this cranky pillow got incredibly mad
And decided he wanted to do something extremely bad
So he devised a devilish scheme, an evil plan
And he went to the house of poor Gabby Furman
So he sat upon her bed and awaited his prey
Until she appeared, and onto her bed she did lay
And as she drifted into a soft snooze
He figured he had nothing else he could lose
So instead of coaxing the naïve blonde child
He let himself go crazy and his mouth went wild
He opened his jaws and took a fearsome bite
And he clamped his teeth upon her head quite tight
And she awoke with a gruesome, terrible scream
As she realized this nightmare was no mere dream
And she shook and fought and tried to escape
But the sinister pillow had already sealed her fate
An end was finally made to this bloody fight
As he finished her off with one final bite
And as the girl’s head fell freely to the ground
The screams came to a halt, there wasn’t a sound
The pillow walked away, laughing in spite
For the death of the girl had given him much delight
So he continues to haunt the houses of young teens
As he is a grouchy creature, and nothing but mean
So beware, everyone, of this deceptive foe
For this is the true story, of the murder pillow.

Credit To – Brendan Cooper

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50 thoughts on “Pillow”

  1. I had the exact same thing happen to me. My pillow pet was looking really crushed that night, but I laid on it and went to sleep. When I woke up, it was still night time and it started flying around with red glowing eyes and huge sharp teeth. It was laughing and was heading towards me. I blinked for just a second and it slid under my arms and I was sweating like crazy. After that, I still use it today, but I still am worried about what it will do. I researched this and found this story with similar descriptions. Does this mean that what I experienced was a warning? Has anyone else had this experience?

  2. Aside from a few minor word transitions that IMO I would have used, this has to be one of the best I’ve read. I don’t know if you were looking for a comedic angle, but I laughed, much harder than truly necessary.

  3. Don’t need pillows to sleep.. not at all.. just going to lie down on a flat matress, and go to sleep… frightened…

  4. Very good! Haven’t seen to many poems but this is certainly a good one. The topic is quite humorous but it makes an attempt to be funny. 7/10

  5. Damn, this hits close to home. A chair tried to eat me the other day. I escaped, but it got my thumb and my left foot.

  6. Not really creepy, but the very concept is amusing as hell, and executed well. I normally loathe poetry pasta, but this works.

  7. THEN WHO WAS....nevermind...

    So we have homicidal dolls, slendermen, people, PILLOWS….WOW! I’ve heard n seen some strange things. But a murderous pillow…..truly takes the cake.

  8. I like it, the rhyme scheme didn’t feel forced at all. Story was okay, I’d have liked to see a little into the background of why this pillow got cranky and/or misshapen with like two line.

    And I didn’t really follow how the girl’s head got bitten off. I mean, actually rereading I see it bit her head without actually taking a chunk off, but it’s kind of weird for it to bite her head off and not actually consume it.

    Anyhow, still a good “song.”

  9. EVERYONE RUN FROM THE HOMICIDAL PILLOWS!!!! just kidding… i would probably make friends with it. This pasta is awesome.

  10. Bravo! Poetry Creepypastas are pretty hard to pull off effectively, but this little ballad was well-done. It was kind of cute too, in a morbid kind of way.

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