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Once You Know…



Estimated reading time — 3 minutes

I recommend that you stop reading this now. Don’t say you weren’t warned.

When I was younger, I would always get scared watching horror films and reading horror stories, just like everyone else. But, as I’m sure lots of other people will tell you, the real horror sets in after seeing the movie or reading the story. You just experienced a story with some monster, demon, or other force, probably one that kills people. The rest of the day, you are on your guard, especially at night. Every creak you hear, every flickering shadow, every slight sound in the darkness frightens you. When you are in bed at night, you hide under the covers and hope that you can just make it until morning, that the light of the sun will destroy any evil forces trying to harm you. When I was kid, I would always try to stop my fear by thinking about one thing: why would the monster attack me now? After I had seen a film or read a story, finding a monster’s weakness or at least how to identify and escape from it, I would have an advantage over the thing. If it had ever wanted to get me, it would certainly have come before I heard about it.

Many years ago, in my small town and other surrounding areas, several kids went missing. There was no evidence, not a single trace of anything that could tell where they had been taken to, or who/what had taken them. However, one warm summer evening, a teenager (about my age) was admitted to the local hospital by his parents. They said he hadn’t slept for days. The doctor recommended sedation, but the boy resisted violently. He said that it hunts you while you sleep, that it would get him. His parents and doctors questioned him about what “it” was. He refused to explain, warning that if he told the story, they would be next. After quite some time, the boy, exhausted, gave in and told them the same thing he had been told.

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For an unknown amount of time, years, perhaps decades, a monster has existed in this world. No one knows the original source of this thing, but it has been taking people ever since it first came into existence. It has attributes similar to some other monster stories. For example, it haunts your dreams. You dream that you are having a normal day, your normal routine, and then you see it. Off in the distance, somewhere, and it just stares at you. Yellow eyes, and a figure that you can’t quite make out. The next time you dream, you are in an unfamiliar place, and it is very close to you now, and it begins to chase you. It is a large beast, with a menacing growl and those unmistakable yellow eyes. You try to escape, but it just keeps getting closer and closer, then you wake up. There are no accounts of the third dream, because that is when it gets you. You disappear; you’re gone. There’s nothing more to it. Well, there is one more thing, the most important detail. It only starts to haunt your dreams once you have heard of it. Once you have read this story. There is no escape as soon as you finish this sentence. The next time you dream, you will see it, off in the distance.

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The boy soon disappeared, as did his parents and his doctor. I just recently heard this story from a friend of mine, a friend who is now gone. Soon I will be gone too. My old strategy of “why now, when I know what’s coming?” will no longer work. It attacks when you know. One more dream, and I will be gone.
Before long, you’ll be gone too.

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Credit To: KB

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40 thoughts on “Once You Know…”

  1. This monster is in serious need of a marketing course.
    First dream, you barely notice it, so you have nothing to say to anyone.
    Second dream, you see it.
    Third dream, you’re gone.
    This gives you more or less 14-16 hours to spread the word, provided you’re not someone who takes the odd nap mid-day. It’s surprising that he isn’t already dead of starvation long ago (supposing it eats people, since why it would ever take them is really unclear).
    Freddy Krueger would be laughing at it to no end.

  2. “I recommend that you stop reading this now.”

    *Shrug* Okay.

    1/10 for the shortest, and most boring, story I have ever read.

  3. Scumbag KB

    Starts a story with “I recommend that you stop reading this now.”

    Posts it on a site where over 20,000 people come on everyday.

  4. Ghosts, ghosts everywhere :o

    Im sorry, but this just feels like a mix of chain mail and ‘A Nightmare on Elm Street’ :L
    Not very good.

  5. I hate stories that do the d*** move by trying to target the reader. It’s not scary, because everyone knows it’s complete rubbish. This is, in essence, a slightly adapted version of all of those internet horror chain letters, which makes it more irritating than frightening.

    It’s not badly written though, which is a shame, since the concept isn’t bad either, it makes it seem like a waste of a passable story. If only it kept the concept within its own universe instead of trying to break the fourth wall.

  6. The problem with stories like this, that have a set timeline, is that any scare they give you can’t last. Even if I’m terrified tonight, I’ll wake up tomorrow without having a single dream even remotely like this and think, “Huh, well, damn.” A really good pasta should be able to freak you out for a really long time by having an indefinite time frame. Or at least, that’s my opinion on this whole thing.

    1. theres this really good dreams/madness one where an elderly guy contacts God thru some science thing. that still freaks me out but i keep rereading it!

  7. SERIOUSLY?! Are you writing for five-year olds? If you are, your story might give a few nightmares… Otherwise, if you’re going to write a story, be passionate about it and come up with something creative. This type of story has been mutilated beyond the point of repetition. On a lighter note, your writing flows very well. Keep working on it.

  8. I found this odd since before I even read this story or heard about it I had a dream with a monster that was described exactly like the one in the story..
    Is he striking me early?

  9. I am so incredibly sick of these types of stories. For one, starting out with the whole warning thing is just ridiculous, it no longer builds intrigue, it’s just boring and so incredibly over done. Second, the whole ‘I heard about it and am doomed, now I’m telling you and you are too’ thing has also been done one two many times. Not to mention, it’s just rude. As far as we know, as the readers, having you tell the story does nothing to get you out of the crosshairs of the monster; basically, what is the purpose for you telling the story besides condemning someone else? Third, going for the you see it in your dreams so you don’t go to sleep, is VERY reminiscent of Freddy Kruger. I just found this to be very unoriginal.
    HOWEVER, I did like how you started out with connecting fear to your younger self, I think it’s something that everyone can relate to. I also found it to be pretty well written. I think if it had had more elements that were not so overused, or as heavily referenced to Freddy Kruger, I would have really enjoyed it.

    1. yeah but i just sleep with the fact tht ppl write these. and then on fb ppl post how “oh my names jenny and i died on june 15 1999 and if u dont repost this ill come and get you” blah blah blah. but whoever made this s**t up has to live with the fact they gave an overabundance of children nightmares.

      good story tho! sorry i gave it a 1 pumpkin im just not a fan of these type of stories. xoxo

    2. What? didnt you hear? in my dreams i have a sniper, you see. i no-scoped that bitch, so no need to worry anymore. :D

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