Upon the cloudy night he did come,
The Slender-Man hunts for his prey.
Alone, a walker roams the forest he does,
and within seconds, gone they are away.
The detectives they hunt for clues of the events
of what did partake that night.
Though nothing could be found at the scene of the crime,
there had been nothing left in clear sight.
So lo’, a thinker believes he knows
what did happen that fateful night.
He explains “It was the Slender-Man!
and to kill it, on him you must shine a light!”
So a brave soul he was, he went for a walk,
in the same forest before the set of the sun.
And what he saw there in the grueling shadows
made him turn around and run.
For deep in the dark, the Slender-Man feeds
on the poor people that his takes.
Blood and gore drops to the ground
as the muscles and bones they break.
The man runs from end to end,
though unfortunately, it seems he is lost.
He will be the next meal of Slender-Man
as he crumbles down in exhaust.
He awakes the next morning to the sound of birds
as it seems he has survived till now.
But Slender-Man, he never sleeps
and nobody knows quite how.
Away walks the man, in search of an exit,
though none he finds that day.
For Slender-Man had other plans for him,
so dost’, he took him away.
Do not fret the Slender-Man
as he hunts for certain prey.
Though if you believe his existence is fake,
chances are you will not again see the light of day.
Credit To: Mike
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It’s a good story dude
It was ok also I’ve read ALOT of creepy pasta and I’m not that scored well i gots to go I’m eating Mac n cheese (its a type of pasta FYI)
Catchy little tune that. Love it. X)
I love this because it makes you picture dead people in your mind!
meh…all I could think of what Yoda narrorating this. not my favorite. Sorry.
The real story I believe is the slender-man was once a man that got turned into this creature by reading a book I think. But we hides in the woods and kills innocent people because he thinks they are all part of what we has become. He already killed everyone in the studio to se him change into the creature. He lives in the USA in this forest killing everyone because like I said he thinks we are all part of him changing
slender man is real he never sleeps dont belive still go in a forest you be left ashamed
this is a poem that stinks
by patrick star
I love creepypasta, slenderman, and anything that i could get my horror loving hands on….Including Pinkamina…Im a my little pony fan. I also love blood and gore.
Hello my name is Micah. If you can please tell me what you know of Pinkamena. There are many gaps in the stories of her even in the infamous story “cupcakes”.
Id even ask others on YouTube like “Mindless Gonzo” but just got more questions to ask out of it. So far I know nothing about what made her just “snap”. even origin story’s don’t help shed light. Please email me at [email protected] (put the topic as pinkie pie snap). Id realy appreciate it.
(True story what happen to me)..When I was staying at my grandmothers house when I was about 10 (I’m 15 now) I was laying in my bed over there (My brother across the hall) I herd him scream “Help.” (My brother was about 13 or so) I was scared so I closed my door and my grandmother checked on him, he was okay. A few minuets later I fell back to sleep. Only to wake up two hours later (It was about 3:00 a.m when I woke up) And there was this…This thing I’ll never forget! Was a tall figure…No face…Wearing a black suit..It was about 11-12 feet tall…It just stayed there for a few seconds and walked away. I looked up fast…My door was still closed no one was in there…Just me…Was it a dream? Was it real? Was it Slender man? If it was Slender man, Why didn’t he kill me? I have so many questions that will never be answered..:( But that morning when we were eating breakfast I asked my brother what happened why he screamed and he acted like he didn’t know what I was talking about….If this was Slender Man…Thank you for not taking my life…
I almost forgot YOU I’ll be there shortly
Oh, yeah i forgot about that night. i was sorta rushed and everything because i had some more killings to do. but dont worry i’ll be back
Sweetheart is your shift key malfunctioning?? Because that is really annyoing. Just saying.
IS HE REAL? BECAUSE HE HASNT GOTTEN ME YET(or never) I DONT KNOW IVE ONLY BEEN SEARCHING ABOUT IT FOR 2 DAYS. IM GETTING A LITTLE PARANOID. I DIDNT WANT TO SLEEP LAST NIGHT BECAUSE EVERY TIME I CLOSED MY EYES I WOULD HAVE THE IMAGE OF HIM IN MY HEAD. – . – I HATE YOU SLENDERMAN! AND YOU CANT GET ME NO MATTER WHAT YOU DO! cuz this is thriller thriller night and no one is going to save you from the BEAST about to strike… IM BORED I HAD TO TYPE THAT.
It’s more likely that M. Jackson’s ghost will get you instead of Ol’Slendy.
Simple Logic.
Don’t speak the name of “He Who Shall Not Be Named”! He will come back and haunt us with that unnatural nose job of his.
THIS IS KINDA WEIRED…I DONT REALLY BELIVE THAT HE IS REAL. BY THE WAY, DOES THE SLENDERMAN LIVE IN CALIFORNIA? BECAUSE IF HE IS GOING TO GET ME (im 12 years old) I KNOW THE PERFECT WEPON.
I am everywhere but nowhere…….tell what weapon would you battle me with little boy
he slendy don’t scare him to much before you get him. after all hes 12. plus we could take him to the lake, (you know the one) for a “MEAL” (wink-wink).
i love slender man. i want him to be real. :D i wanna feel the fear that he invokes in the hearts of true believers. i wanna dance with no pants on. holla
Don’t worry. He is in the woods at Lake Harden. He’s vary friendly if you genuinely offer to be his friend.
i like it poems don’t need to rhyme and it does describe how slenderman works thumbs up :D
I love me some Slendy, but this was painful. Being a poet, it almost hurt to see such a lovely medium be used like this.
I agree with Kalitena. It would be better to just write out a story, rather than use words out of context. Archaic words and prose are a challenge to master, and this could use some work.
Practice makes perfect, but Creepypasta isn’t a good place to practice. It’s like using the Olympics as a practice gym.
You could just give him twenty dollars…
Corn fish :@
To be frankly honest, this is really bad poetry.
“Upon” doesn’t work in the first line. None if its definitions apply to the way you used it. You should have said “In the” or “On a.”
The bottom two lines of the first stanza hardly make sense, particularly the “he does” at the end of the third. That isn’t at all necessary, and it’s clear from the beginning that you’re trying far too hard. It ends up sounding painfully pretentious.
Partake: a) join in b) be characterized by
Stanza 5, line two should be “he takes” not “his takes.”
“The man runs from end to end” is just bad writing. End to end of what?
You can’t shorten “exhaustion” as “exhaust.” It means something entirely different.
You switch tenses in the third and fourth lines of the second-to-last stanza.
Dost is second person singular. You can’t use it like that. Also, if you have to use archaic words, you’re trying too hard.
Poetry almost always has some sort of rhythm, even free verse, which this is not. Poetry with a rhyme scheme like the one in this piece definitely needs a rhythm. This one stuttered and stopped and started and fell all over the place. It’s incredibly distracting and unpleasant to deal with.
Hater. It’s a POEM!!! It WILL sound like Olde English! oh yeah… hater. Its a really good poem and you just dont like it. No need to hate.
I think what Kalitena is saying is that it’s grammatically and poetically incorrect. I am no poet, but what she says is true, albeit very harsh! So lighten up, K! You don’t have to be an expert to have fun writing. So don’t be such a snob, and if you can’t say something nice just don’t say it. Unless asked, ofcourse! I think it’s cool for people to experiment with writing, and putting their imaginations to good use. All the technical stuff can come later. I encourage everyone to try and work at the things they enjoy!
Slenderman hunts us all
And he is the one that sounds pretentious. It’s called artistic license, famous poets use it all the time.
Actually, a poem can have no words that rhyme at all. 2) A poem can be set in multiple points of view, as if multiple people are speaking. 3) Upon does work that way if you actually think. 4) Line 3 and 4 also make sense if you actually think.
In my opinion you need to retake Creative Wrighting. you obviously failed when you last took it at what ever school you went to. The worse part is that it is a vary easy class to pass but it is also difficult to fail. Just about every one passes it with little effort. The lowest grade I ever heard any one get was a B.
You are wayyy too harsh! I applaud the author for trying and using their imagination. So what if there are technical mistakes! All that can be learned. You might try using a little encouragement with your criticism!
I have a great idea for a story. Lure Jeff the killer into the woods where slenderman is. Then say candlejack. You got a great fight.
you didn’t disappear…….
You didn’t got whisked away.
You didn’t got whisked away? How is that possible? What are you? What sorcery did you used?
So what candlejack. Candlejack.candlejack
That sounds as if it would be one of the most terrible things ever.
Hm. Pretty nice. There were a few times when it seemed slightly off-beat, but overall this was pretty cool!
There really aren’t enough poems on here. I guess it might just be me, but something about them just freaks me out.
Great job~
Hey jonas it is nice
Hey Jonas it’s is a nice story
I really like the choice of style you chose for this piece.
Good poem style, although, I’m more scared of a ladybug flying towards me than Ol’Slendy anytime.
Same xD
hey those lady bugs are terrifying mother fuckers