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My Girlfriend’s Eyes



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It was her eyes that first attracted me to her. I didn’t believe in love, but the
first time I gazed into her beautiful green eyes I knew she was the one.

I loved seeing myself reflected in those eyes, looking deep into her soul and
knowing I was a part of it. It’s kinda stupid, but I even wrote poetry about them. I
don’t remember much, but I told her “There’s so much life within your eyes, and so
much love”.

Oh God, I loved the way the light danced within them. I just couldn’t imagine not
being able to stare dreamily into them.

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Now if I could just find a box that was half as beautiful as her eyes, I could stop
carrying them round in my pocket.

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78 thoughts on “My Girlfriend’s Eyes”

  1. The title caught my attention, but essentially gave away the entire story. Very predictable, too short, cliché, and underdone.
    It would’ve been more interesting to me if you had shown how he removed her eyes/the murder scene, maybe more on her character. Because I feel nothing. Not scared, and I have no feelings towards the characters. It was honestly boring.
    Also, I think you should’ve had him keep them in a jar of formaldehyde. As others are saying, eyes do decompose rather quickly, and formaldehyde would keep them preserved. Much more believable than carrying them around in his pocket. I mean, decomposing aside, wouldn’t they get lint stuck to them? Couldn’t he squish them? Drop them? Or am I not meant to question these things? Sorry if I sound harsh, but I feel you could’ve done a lot more with this.

  2. I thought this was gonna be a lovey-dovey story and thought,” why is tho on creepy pasta?” then read the ending and said,” oh that’s why”

  3. I loved my ex girlfriend/fiancé, she beautiful eyes. For the pain she put me through, I would rip them out and hold onto them for a bit. I could still gaze into those beautiful eyes and at the same time, cause her immeasurable pain as she did to me.

  4. As soon as I read the title and the first few lines, I knew what was going to happen. Still, it was creepy and in some way morbid.

  5. eyeless girlfriend

    HELLO? I ain’t dead just blind, he got me lyke Uma thurman got Darryl Hannah in Kill bill. to bad he was great in the sack cuz then Id kill him….what a man

  6. > Ummmm… If he loved her so much why’d he kill her?
    > That’s kind of retarted.

    He didn’t love her, he loved her eyes. So he kept them.

    That’s how crazy minds work.

  7. *snorts* HA! I read the ending to my boyfriend and he was like “…… what?”
    Same reaction I had >_< Kinda funny.

  8. Hmmm… When I used to deliver catalogues, I sometimes had a chat with one of the guys on my route who once said to me at the end of one conversation “Eyes are the window to the soul, and yours speak volumes”.
    I think I’m a little worried.

  9. oww whatever i liked this, so what if they descompose like that guy cares in that precise moment, is like his mind is kinda psyched out, he has what he loves the most of her girl. And i dont think is retarded… more like obsessive.
    Like it…
    By the way my bf allways says the same thing of my eyes… i think ill buy a gun or something =]

  10. FarthestFromSane

    It was a great idea, but may I suggest you rewrite it with it ending as, “Now if I could just find a box that was half as beautiful as her eyes, I could stop
    keeping them in jar of alcohol”

    …perhaps not, but I enjoy your writing nonetheless, PHONE.

  11. I had a hunch this was one of those eye gouge and keep stories just by the title :( The ending could be a little stronger but creepy overall.

  12. What’s weird is, *I* have green eyes, and a male friend of mine is almost always talking about them and how they “reflect my soul.”

    Oh shit D:

    1. He wasn’t necessarily In love with her he was in love with her eyes. Well obsessed is probably a better word.

  13. Not really even that funny, quite stupid if i do say so my self.
    Not even a suprise i knew from the beginning that he would have the eyes with him, No climax.

  14. It’s a fun creepypasta.

    However, like other commenters, may I assume that maybe he somehow treated them with formaldehyde or some other cadaver-preserving chemical?

    p.s.I ought to try something like that. Maybe I’ll put fake/glass eyes in my pocket just to scare the sh*t out of them with a story similar to this.

  15. Cute, kind of funny, but not scary. It is a neat concept, but eyes decompose extremely quickly and are very messy when they do.

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