• Vylet

    This is honestly very predictable.. I understood the whole story line after the title and the first two paragraphs.

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    • Hello

      Well i think this was a very yummy pasta.

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  • http://www.creepypasta.com/hope/ Dirjel

    I saw where this was going really early on, and I can tell you there is no way in hell I’d lay down under her sink.

    Also would have disarmed the lady and stabbed the kid to death, personally.

    7/10, though. Predictable, but still well done.

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    • WIMSBYJ

      Pretty much, that’s the way it seems… “predictable”.

      8/10 for story
      5/10 for predictability
      10/10 for weirdness

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  • blah

    I liked it predictable or not I thought it was very well done

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  • BlueBeans

    Good story!

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  • Pandora

    Aha yeah, I didn’t realize how ridiculously obvious it was until after I sent it and re read it. Definitely going to properly edit from now on. Hopefully my future stories are better. Thanks for the compliments and critiques guys!

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  • darkorchid

    These stories can be really predictable, but as a mom they honestly scare the living fuck out of me. But I like how you get that the mom would go through with it for so long. A mother would do almost anything for her baby. Kudos 10/10 would read again.

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  • YOU CAN’T HANDLE THE USERNAME!

    THEN WHO WAS WEIRD CANNIBAL KID?

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    • CreepyHydra645

      Weren’t you reading? It was her son.

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      • Fuchsia The Creepy Wolf

        It was a “THEN WHO WAS PHONE?!” Joke

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  • Len Lye

    I have to be honest that last section sort of ruined it for me.

    Obviously it was predictable but you at least did a decent job of setting up the atmosphere of a REALLY fucked up house but the whole dinner conversation at the end was both artificial and bland.

    Next time just don’t end it with the “aftermath facts”, cause that’s ruined so many pastas

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    • Jhe

      You have no power here muahahahahahaha!

      *ahem*

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  • zeak728

    pretty good but way to predictable

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  • The forbidden one

    I usually dont stop to think while I’m reading so I didn’t see it coming.I did get suspicious when she pulled the “item” out of the drawer.my only thought is that the kids a fricken cannibal!!!

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  • Konakona

    One word, “NO”. Lol decent pasta. I expectable, but good.

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  • TVATR

    I saw the kid was a moster disguising it’s voice as a child’s.

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  • TVATR

    *Thought* and *Monster*, sorry for that. ^

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  • http://creepypasta Pierce Simmons

    jesus was that kid the fucking anti christ or something

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  • Sparta

    I loved it begining to end! 10/10

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  • http://blogofrages.blogspot.com madafaka

    This is probably the most fucked up story I’ve read here.How come no one can overpower the kid? No one said he had superhuman abilities

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    • Derp

      Go read jeff the killer.

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  • http://blogofrages.blogspot.com madafaka

    PS: saw it coming since ‘missing two fingers’

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    • CreepyHydra645

      So did I especially when the boy asked if he could have ‘it’, I just put the conectuions together.
      But anyway, good pasta Pandora, quite entertaining, but I’m definately not getting a job involving house calls now…

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    • olivia

      i actually thought the drain was clogged with her fingers, maybe she stuck her hand down the drain and the disposal blades chopped her fingers off. wasn’t expecting the cannibalism!

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  • Allie Lemieux

    i agree with madafaka

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  • Reilly Martin

    I’m definitely not going to work in peoples houses. Ever. Nor am I having kids. .-.

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  • http://www.facebook.com/FromTheCreepypasta From the Creepypasta

    Wow! That was intense! I figured he was going to be in danger…but I didn’t expect the kid to be a cannibal. How odd..Regardless, it was a very good story. Very well written. Good job!

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  • Parrot

    Then who was boy?! Anyway…
    I knew what would happen after the boy started talking.. very predictable

    But still, a very good pasta

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  • Jiminy Cricket

    Plumber, lonely mom, had to tell to be quiet since a kid was sleeping, conversation of marriage. Predictable build up for a porn flick. Loved it.

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  • http://denizbirant.blogspot.com Davana

    It was kind of predictable and the ending ruined the whole story. And the boy yelling ‘I’M F*CKING HUNGRY YOU B*TCH’ was just terrible.
    But apart from that, it was still an interesting story and it freaked me out :3

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    • NovaMaria

      IM HUNGRY YOU FUCKING BITCH was the best part

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  • Kaith

    creepy. just like sum boys are . jk

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  • Shhhh,Dont Tell

    Ahh this event occured YEARS ago but thank you pandora for writing my story
    P.S. im not the plumber or my “mom” but im still out there i am be warned

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