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In The Shower



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Have you ever been taking a shower while alone in the house and felt like something was moving around behind the curtain? Or watching you? Did you look up? Did you catch the very vaguest hint of eyebrows or a tuft of matted, greasy hair above the curtain rod? That’s not a good idea. It doesn’t really like it if you see it. It likes it the most when you’ve got shampoo on your hair, and your eyes are shut tight so your eyes don’t sting. Or even better, when there’s soap and bubbles all over your soft, pink face. It likes that the best, because your eyes are clenched so tight, and even if you did want to open them, like, if you heard a soft scratching against the plastic shower curtain, or a rasping of claws on bathroom tile, or the gentle splatter of drool or cum or… god knows what… well, you wouldn’t open your eyes because it’d burn. Right? Right. Don’t open your eyes. Because if you ever see its face, catch its eyes… Well. It’ll notice.

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161 thoughts on “In The Shower”

  1. Man, I posted this on 4chan five years ago. Thought of it today and googled “Creepy pasta shower” and this came up. Read the first and last pages of comments. Totally agree that I shouldn’t have used the word “cum” and that the ending grab was weak.

    Still flattered that people still read it now and then! Showers are creepy, come on!

  2. Why pink face and why is it soft. You might be showering the first time after fighting Ganon. And im freaking slenderman white.

  3. This pasta was a 5/10. But the comments make it win! And just to clarify here: Severus Snape is sneaking into my house to beat off, drool, piss, shit, and cum on my bathroom floor while he watches me shower? Great, just what I needed! Another one in the family

  4. OMFG… The comments were the BEST!!!! None of these creepy-pasta have scared me so far but I adored this pasta because I was freakin laughing the whole time because of the comments!!!!! Thanks everyone!

  5. poisoned echoes

    So, the guy has claws, and is jacking it?
    Thanfully, my bathroom is carpeted and has attack wasps in it ._.

  6. True story–had an experience like this once. In the shower..eye closed..felt a hand rubbing me…thought it was my boyfriend…opened my eyes…he was not there…got out of shower…he was no where in the house.

  7. All these comments had me LOLing for over 15 minutes. Now my stomach muscles hurt and my cheeks are soaked with tears of obsessive laughter, thanks guys.

    Oh, and one other thing. I’m terribly concerned for the man who is pissing, cumming, drooling, and shitting all over my bathroom floor. He should get help, the whole ‘watching-me-shower’ thing is getting kinda old.

  8. Rainshine the Grammar Hyena

    This story was only slightly scary, but that’s fine with me, because that’s the kind of stories I like anyway. (Yeah, I’m a HUGE wimp when it comes to scary stuff; I don’t even watch scary movies with my dad, even if he asks me to.) Anyway, I like the ‘pastas that have “Dafuq? OMG freak! *runs to hide in closet*” mixed in with “LOL what just happened?” in them. My favourite thing about this ‘pasta is that you know… you KNOW… that everyone has been thinking it their whole lives. Some people may claim not to have ever felt like they were being watched in the shower, but they only say that because they think it makes them cool. In reality, it just makes them seem like douches.
    When I shower, I am always afraid to close my eyes, because it is dark in my shower, and the light flickers out sometimes, and there is a huge gaping hole in the shower floor where the drain cover should be, because it got broken a long time ago, and so I always feel like something is going to crawl out of that hole between my feet if I close my eyes long enough for it to notice that I’m not looking. It’s also kind of creepy that there’s a window right next to my shower, even though there is a curtain over the window…
    Anyway, where was I going with that? Oh yeah! Nice pasta, man. OuO

  9. LET ME WATCH YOU SHOWER (\(OWO)/)

    …okay what if the person in the showers doesn’t have one of those shower curtains but instead a sliding glass door style? do i just…camouflage myself…or just stand there drooling while she/he showers then run the heck away when they notice?

  10. GOD DAMN IT! I can’t get one god damn break man! I ACCIDENTALLY walked in on my sister in the shower and ACCIDENTALLY slipped and my dick fell out and I ACCIDENTALLY climbed up to look in the shower and ACCIDENTALLY put my dick in my hand and ACCIDENTALLY came and shit on the floor and THIS IS WHAT I GET!?

  11. I just wanna know why there’s some creepy greasy haired guy shitting, pissing, cumming and drooling on my floor while I shower, sounds like either an old person or an invalid ;S

  12. Well, fuck. Just when I thought I was getting away with this shit somebody writes a goddamn CreepyPasta about it! And the cum only happened ONE time!
    God, you accidentally secrete bodily fluids one time and suddenly you\\\’re \\\’creepy fapper in the bathroom\\\’ Jesus Christ.

  13. Okay so….Robert Pattinson is in my bathroom, fapping his nasty jizz all over my bathroom?
    Perhaps he should join me, and wash up a bit. Eh?

  14. That would’ve been more scary if I had a pink face. I’m hispanic, therefore I’m brown. I don’t get a ‘pink face’.

  15. Awww >_> The shower I use doesnt have curtains, but I seem to be always especially paranoid while taking a shower. Well done. x]

  16. Dude, this is eerily close to one of my fears, but not quite.

    Ever since watching videos of the Chzo Mythos series I’ve been absolutely fucking terrified of the Tall Man, and whenever I’m in the shower, or on my computer at night OR HELL IN MY BED AT NIGHT I feel like I’m being stalked by him :c

    So this slightly freaked me out. But unfortunately Tall Man has no beard, just a fencing mask, so I giggled at this. cx
    7/10

  17. Okay…this scared the crap out of me! D: I always have this like…feeling that i am being watched in the shower so this didn’t really help. ;^; Great story.

  18. That fuckin monster

    Good, I hope you all take this story’s advice and don’t look at me while i’m watching you take a shower.

  19. So basically there’s a neckbeard who doesn’t cut his nails fapping to me every time I shower?

    Nice.

  20. thats the worst this things gonna do to me cum on my floor and watch me shower? well u know what i want it to watch because im fucking sexy to the max!

  21. Glad to know it only likes when soap bubbles are on pink faces, cause mine is darker than this website.

  22. Well…

    Pervert = ungood
    Monster = plusungood
    Perverted monster = doubleplusungood

    I know…that sounds very 1984-like, but it is just the way i was thinking while reading this pastaXD

  23. My skin is dead-people-white, so I guess it wouldn’t be very interested in me. Author needs to be more vague and drag shit out longer. It seems like it’d be a good idea to scare someone into not taking showers for awhile, but this was poorly executed.

  24. These have to be THE funniest comments I’ve ever read on a pasta. Job well done, creepypasta.com users.

    As far as the pasta itself goes, I was actually slightly perturbed until it got to “cum,” and then I just started loling. A lot.

  25. this is fucking creepy! When I was little I used to think there was a monster in the shower, so every time I walked in the bathroom I’d open the curtain really fast to catch it, but, now that I’m older I know better…but there are times when I actually walk in the shower and can swear something is in there..I open the curtain and there’s nothing.

  26. lullz,
    this would creep me out if I took showers,
    I only take baths (H)
    This sort of sounds like the Guardian angel creepypasta.

  27. I read the story and thought ” Wow, could be a lot better.” But something compelled me to take a look at the comments. Poopooface…. You fuckin’ killed me. I lol’d so hard that I almost cried, this story is full of win.

  28. sorry, not finished SO I’ll say my last part now, the thing that scared me was the fact that I have always felt as though I am being watched from the shadows in my bathroom, but Maybe that was partly helped by the fact that I watched whats it called? The guy Kills his mother in the bathroom…. I can’t remember but I’m sure those who read this comment will know what I am talking about. No, now I am imune to anything scary like horror movies and these stroies, so, all of those that want to, Bring it on! You can’t scare me! :P

  29. See, it has th classic 2 year-old rule, “If I can’t see you, then you can’t see me!” The thing is, there are many loop-holes, like the fact that I have never closed my eyes well shampooing, or the fact that since it is BEHIND the curtain, you open the curtain and put a towel on the ground, and shower with the curtain out of the way! The only thing that reallllyy scared me was the fact that

  30. CRAPCRAPCRAPCRAPCRAP!!!!!! WHAT IF YOU STEP IN THE CUM AS YOU LEAVE THE SHOWER?!?!?!?! YOU’D HAVE TO TAKE ANOTHER ONE, MEANING YOU JUST WASTED TEN MINUTES! THAT BASTARD!!!!!!!!!

  31. So it’s creepypasta that my stalkers like to watch me shower? They’re creepy, but masturbating to my nudity isn’t particularly odd. I’m one hot slice of pie.

    Not creepy, or interesting. Just plain silly.

  32. “if you heard a soft scratching against the plastic shower curtain, or a rasping of claws on bathroom tile, or the gentle splatter of drool or cum or… god knows what…”

    I don’t care about drool or cum, but is he also shitting on my floor?

  33. Pretty gross and bad and not creepy. A monster fapping to me isn’t scary…. a monster waiting to eat me when I get out of the bathroom is.

  34. Totes reminds me of a Japanese urban legend that states “Every time you close your eyes in the shower a ghost is watching you”.

  35. The most homosexual pasta I have ever seen. OOOH NOO A MONSTER THAT GOES AROUND MASTURBATING IN PEOPLE’S BATHROOMS!!!! Was that really the most devious thing that you could think of?

  36. lol Mistervercetti is such a raging pussy he “quits” a website (that all he ever had to do was read at his liesure) in a huff because of three entries he didn’t like. WAHHHHHHHHH.

  37. Man, when I was in the shower this morning I was thinking about this, wondering “ok, how the hell would I be able to hear anything dripping over the sound of my shower?”
    Then I realized it would have to be a large, icky drop of whatever it was for me to notice it.
    Needless to say, I got a bit of a chill.
    Lord McBain, you win.

  38. It’s true that the pasta as of late have been old and of debatable quality, but I think people are missing the point here: Phone is going with old stories because there aren’t new submissions/the new submissions are worse. If you’re so terribly disgusted by the quality of the pastas as of late, it might help to contribute something.

  39. DURRHURR DONT TRY TO CATCH THE CREEPY GUY FAPPING TO YOU OR YOULL DIE

    But seriously, this was alright. Its been done before and the ending was lame.

  40. Here’s an equally good story on the same line of thinking:

    When you are sexing someone in your bed, be careful. There’s a monster under your bed who likes to listen and whack off. Don’t look down there though, because then he’ll notice you, not that he hasn’t noticed you already. Actully, yeah, he’s already noticed you, but not you noticing him. So don’t notice him noticing you noticing you or something bad might happen. Maybe nothing will happen. Maybe he’ll just finish up and leave. Who am I to say?

    The End.

  41. Yeah, this story was pretty lame. Its the old “If you see it, then it sees you” story, just rehashed and put into your bathroom. And besides, my shower has clear glass, soooo what then?

  42. the part about the eyebrows and the hair freaked me out the most.

    “It likes it the most when you’ve got shampoo on your hair, and your eyes are shut tight so your eyes don’t sting.”
    did that seem awkward to anyone else?

    but yeah. i have this really, really creepy picture in my head right now. i like this one a lot.

  43. just people posting old ones that most of us probably never noticed weren’t on here. these aren’t new guys, they are some of the original pastas

  44. Lord McBain: Your comment left me loling xDDD Oh goodness… :’D

    This has me not wanting to take a shower anymore : ( Maybe I’ll just take baths from now on D:

    Stupid daily needs stories…always mess up my routine…

  45. …REALLY?

    That does it. After these past three pastas, I’m convinced that there’s no hope left for creepypasta. I’m out.

  46. It’s the ones that deal with the things we do on a day to day basis (such as showering) tthat seem to be the scariest to me.

  47. This story scared the shit of off me. Though people will probably not find it scary, I do. This story is scary to me because I have always had a fear of being watched in the shower. Well done.

  48. great. I’ve always wanted a greasy-haired, clawed monster masturbating and drooling all over my bathroom while I’m taking a shower. what an asshole.

  49. So a neckbeard is fapping to me?

    In all seriousness, the first time I read this awhile ago I was afraid to go in the shower.

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