In The Shower
Have you ever been taking a shower while alone in the house and felt like something was moving around behind the curtain? Or watching you? Did you look up? Did you catch the very vaguest hint of eyebrows or a tuft of matted, greasy hair above the curtain rod? That’s not a good idea. It doesn’t really like it if you see it. It likes it the most when you’ve got shampoo on your hair, and your eyes are shut tight so your eyes don’t sting. Or even better, when there’s soap and bubbles all over your soft, pink face. It likes that the best, because your eyes are clenched so tight, and even if you did want to open them, like, if you heard a soft scratching against the plastic shower curtain, or a rasping of claws on bathroom tile, or the gentle splatter of drool or cum or… god knows what… well, you wouldn’t open your eyes because it’d burn. Right? Right. Don’t open your eyes. Because if you ever see its face, catch its eyes… Well. It’ll notice.
So you’ve met my uncle, then
THEN WHO WAS CUM?
…Okay, that was damn *creepy* to the bones. O_O
So a neckbeard is fapping to me?
In all seriousness, the first time I read this awhile ago I was afraid to go in the shower.
great. I’ve always wanted a greasy-haired, clawed monster masturbating and drooling all over my bathroom while I’m taking a shower. what an asshole.
That was good, but the end wasn’t a good grab. It has to be more thrilling.
This story has subtle racist undertones…
This story scared the shit of off me. Though people will probably not find it scary, I do. This story is scary to me because I have always had a fear of being watched in the shower. Well done.
ehh kinda creepy.
It’s the ones that deal with the things we do on a day to day basis (such as showering) tthat seem to be the scariest to me.
why would there be cum? blood would’ve made more sense
First! BUT WHO WAS SHAMPOO?
“Don’t look at the guy behind the curtains, because he would notice”. The End.
Sigh.
I was just thinking about this story this morning and wondering where to find it. Thanks.
…REALLY?
That does it. After these past three pastas, I’m convinced that there’s no hope left for creepypasta. I’m out.
Okay, is it just me or have people been been reposting old stories?
o_O
You fail for assuming all showers have curtains.
Still, this story is pretty fucked up.
Did someone really not understand why cum made sense?
Pay no attention to the man behind the curtain.
And if he notices, he’ll eat the soap?
Lord McBain: Your comment left me loling xDDD Oh goodness… :’D
This has me not wanting to take a shower anymore : ( Maybe I’ll just take baths from now on D:
Stupid daily needs stories…always mess up my routine…
Is it a bad idea to join when all of a sudden, a lot of shitpasta is popping up?
Queer. That is all.
just people posting old ones that most of us probably never noticed weren’t on here. these aren’t new guys, they are some of the original pastas
i have a feeling this creature is either a stalker, a pervert, or both!!
……………Is this like old pasta?
Because I think I’ve read this on main site before..
……..Maybe.
the part about the eyebrows and the hair freaked me out the most.
“It likes it the most when you’ve got shampoo on your hair, and your eyes are shut tight so your eyes don’t sting.”
did that seem awkward to anyone else?
but yeah. i have this really, really creepy picture in my head right now. i like this one a lot.
Yeah, this story was pretty lame. Its the old “If you see it, then it sees you” story, just rehashed and put into your bathroom. And besides, my shower has clear glass, soooo what then?
My shower has a sliding door though..
Hang on, youre in a shower. How do you hear a “gentle splatter” over the running water?
Here’s an equally good story on the same line of thinking:
When you are sexing someone in your bed, be careful. There’s a monster under your bed who likes to listen and whack off. Don’t look down there though, because then he’ll notice you, not that he hasn’t noticed you already. Actully, yeah, he’s already noticed you, but not you noticing him. So don’t notice him noticing you noticing you or something bad might happen. Maybe nothing will happen. Maybe he’ll just finish up and leave. Who am I to say?
The End.
DURRHURR DONT TRY TO CATCH THE CREEPY GUY FAPPING TO YOU OR YOULL DIE
But seriously, this was alright. Its been done before and the ending was lame.
It’s true that the pasta as of late have been old and of debatable quality, but I think people are missing the point here: Phone is going with old stories because there aren’t new submissions/the new submissions are worse. If you’re so terribly disgusted by the quality of the pastas as of late, it might help to contribute something.
Man, when I was in the shower this morning I was thinking about this, wondering “ok, how the hell would I be able to hear anything dripping over the sound of my shower?”
Then I realized it would have to be a large, icky drop of whatever it was for me to notice it.
Needless to say, I got a bit of a chill.
Lord McBain, you win.
Oh if you think this is bad, just think of what I’ll do in your sleep.
When it mentioned the greasy hair, my first thought was “Severus Snape”.
haha I agree about the racist undertones. So glad this doesn’t apply to me. My face isn’t pink, it’s brown.
lol Mistervercetti is such a raging pussy he “quits” a website (that all he ever had to do was read at his liesure) in a huff because of three entries he didn’t like. WAHHHHHHHHH.
Haha and the the comments really make this story worth wile
I’m dropping don’t look
The most homosexual pasta I have ever seen. OOOH NOO A MONSTER THAT GOES AROUND MASTURBATING IN PEOPLE’S BATHROOMS!!!! Was that really the most devious thing that you could think of?
Totes reminds me of a Japanese urban legend that states “Every time you close your eyes in the shower a ghost is watching you”.
cum..?that was type wierd for me..it was okay,not particularly scary..
Funny how a single word makes the story even more stupid than it already would have been.
My shower doesn’t have curtains
they’re sliding doors
and they’re glass so you can see out them
Pretty gross and bad and not creepy. A monster fapping to me isn’t scary…. a monster waiting to eat me when I get out of the bathroom is.
“if you heard a soft scratching against the plastic shower curtain, or a rasping of claws on bathroom tile, or the gentle splatter of drool or cum or… god knows what…”
I don’t care about drool or cum, but is he also shitting on my floor?
the only thing different from this and the million other dont look pastas is cum.
So it’s creepypasta that my stalkers like to watch me shower? They’re creepy, but masturbating to my nudity isn’t particularly odd. I’m one hot slice of pie.
Not creepy, or interesting. Just plain silly.
ew why would there be cum?
and i dont have a shower curtain. i have a glass. so… yeah i can see. haha
Damn… I was just trying to rub one out, you didnt need to post it on creepypasta. -_-
CRAPCRAPCRAPCRAPCRAP!!!!!! WHAT IF YOU STEP IN THE CUM AS YOU LEAVE THE SHOWER?!?!?!?! YOU’D HAVE TO TAKE ANOTHER ONE, MEANING YOU JUST WASTED TEN MINUTES! THAT BASTARD!!!!!!!!!
Haha, isn’t creepy when you already have freaks like that around you all the time.
FUCK! SHIT I’m horny! I’m getting in the shower RIGHT NOW!
Seen this same basic concept reiterated in creepypasta SO. MANY. TIMES.
Ending v. off, but I like that edge of voyeurism. This one actually scares me a bit.
Ohgosh, a perv creepster.
aahhhh i love this one cause no ones ever home when i take showers its kinda thought twisting
I LOLd so hard at the comments.
They made the story WIN.
0_0 This makes me afraid to take a shower -A-
RAEP
yeah I have to say that “cum” was WAY out of place in this story.
That motherfucker had better clean up his mess.
I take showers now
ffs ; ;
/clever I mean’t baths
Disappointing. Not one pasta makes me shiver, it’s been 5 months. Cmon.
BUT WHO WAS CUM?
but who was shower curtain?
It’s a Hunter.
See, it has th classic 2 year-old rule, “If I can’t see you, then you can’t see me!” The thing is, there are many loop-holes, like the fact that I have never closed my eyes well shampooing, or the fact that since it is BEHIND the curtain, you open the curtain and put a towel on the ground, and shower with the curtain out of the way! The only thing that reallllyy scared me was the fact that
sorry, not finished SO I’ll say my last part now, the thing that scared me was the fact that I have always felt as though I am being watched from the shadows in my bathroom, but Maybe that was partly helped by the fact that I watched whats it called? The guy Kills his mother in the bathroom…. I can’t remember but I’m sure those who read this comment will know what I am talking about. No, now I am imune to anything scary like horror movies and these stroies, so, all of those that want to, Bring it on! You can’t scare me!
I read the story and thought ” Wow, could be a lot better.” But something compelled me to take a look at the comments. Poopooface…. You fuckin’ killed me. I lol’d so hard that I almost cried, this story is full of win.
this turned me on
what the fuck…
lullz,
this would creep me out if I took showers,
I only take baths (H)
This sort of sounds like the Guardian angel creepypasta.
Why would there be cum? o_o
this is fucking creepy! When I was little I used to think there was a monster in the shower, so every time I walked in the bathroom I’d open the curtain really fast to catch it, but, now that I’m older I know better…but there are times when I actually walk in the shower and can swear something is in there..I open the curtain and there’s nothing.
“So you’ve met my uncle, then”
oh my god i laughed so much
Oh my god… you people are all champions ! Funniest comments Ive read in ages !
These have to be THE funniest comments I’ve ever read on a pasta. Job well done, creepypasta.com users.
As far as the pasta itself goes, I was actually slightly perturbed until it got to “cum,” and then I just started loling. A lot.
I take baths.
WHAT NOW, MOTHERFUCKER?
I don’t have a shower curtain. =D
well, i was ABOUT to go take a shower, thanks alot
So…I’m thinking Epic Beard Man might be behind this.
Also, I have a sliding glass door. You’re argument is invalid ;D
My skin is dead-people-white, so I guess it wouldn’t be very interested in me. Author needs to be more vague and drag shit out longer. It seems like it’d be a good idea to scare someone into not taking showers for awhile, but this was poorly executed.
I don’t have a shower.
Well…
Pervert = ungood
Monster = plusungood
Perverted monster = doubleplusungood
I know…that sounds very 1984-like, but it is just the way i was thinking while reading this pastaXD
ITS WEEGEE HES ALWAYS WATCHING I SAY
Glad to know it only likes when soap bubbles are on pink faces, cause mine is darker than this website.
I don’t think I’m ever going to take another shower ever again.
FFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU, I WAS JUST ABOUT TO TAKE A FUCKING SHOWER, U DOUCHE BAG!
…Severus Snape is in my bathroom???
thats the worst this things gonna do to me cum on my floor and watch me shower? well u know what i want it to watch because im fucking sexy to the max!
So basically there’s a neckbeard who doesn’t cut his nails fapping to me every time I shower?
Nice.
U GON GET RAEPED
So what happens when your shower curtain is clear?
Good, I hope you all take this story’s advice and don’t look at me while i’m watching you take a shower.
Damn, someone beat me to it, well, regardless:
THEN WHO WAS CUM?
soft pink face? the joke’s on you buddy, i’m black!
Okay…this scared the crap out of me! D: I always have this like…feeling that i am being watched in the shower so this didn’t really help. ;^; Great story.
Dude, this is eerily close to one of my fears, but not quite.
Ever since watching videos of the Chzo Mythos series I’ve been absolutely fucking terrified of the Tall Man, and whenever I’m in the shower, or on my computer at night OR HELL IN MY BED AT NIGHT I feel like I’m being stalked by him :c
So this slightly freaked me out. But unfortunately Tall Man has no beard, just a fencing mask, so I giggled at this. cx
7/10
Awww >_> The shower I use doesnt have curtains, but I seem to be always especially paranoid while taking a shower. Well done. x]
Good.
That would’ve been more scary if I had a pink face. I’m hispanic, therefore I’m brown. I don’t get a ‘pink face’.
Okay so….Robert Pattinson is in my bathroom, fapping his nasty jizz all over my bathroom?
Perhaps he should join me, and wash up a bit. Eh?
Yeah, because if you notice me I’ll get scared and run away.
I just wanna watch you bathe is all.
Well, fuck. Just when I thought I was getting away with this shit somebody writes a goddamn CreepyPasta about it! And the cum only happened ONE time!
God, you accidentally secrete bodily fluids one time and suddenly you\\\’re \\\’creepy fapper in the bathroom\\\’ Jesus Christ.
So, what I got from this: There’s a furry watching you in the shower.
The cum bit seriously made me laugh. This had potential and then it just got hilarious.