• Sigma

    It started off good, but then it was just another “LOL YOU WILL DIE” one.

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    • g̡̳͈̼͈͉̳͔̘̼͈͍͔̱ͩ̽ͫͬ͆̓̏̔ͤ͊̈́͐̄ͥ̈̐͛̚o̴̷͇̺̻̙̣̝̫̞̻͚̝̥̱̙̔̆͑́̊ͪ̂̅ͯ̂ͭͦ͒̂͛ͣ͟͟d̡̬̭̠͕̙̲̪̞̟̺͉͇̤̠͚͈̏ͯ̇̐̍ͧͣ͐ͮ̌ͦͩ̚͝͡͝ͅ ̷̥̤̙̫̠̣̲̭͚̝̈́ͧͬ͆̅́͟s̶̴̢̟̪

      i totally agree

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      • A

        your name, though.

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  • Naris

    OH SHI-

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  • Alex

    well. No more computer use at night

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    • bob

      yep LOL

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    • Atoshi

      Stories like this is why I use my brother’s 3DS to read this… No background, no lady =D

      Also, tell me why as soon as the story ended I heard a high-pitched shriek coming from outside my window that keeps repeating in my head…

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  • Heron

    Your lack of mercy astounds me. Though my actions are much more cruel, I at least allow a chance to avoid them for the worthy.

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  • Anonymous

    im sick of stories like this.

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  • NISIOISIN

    Who likes all the lights on at night!? I DO NOW!!!

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    • Anonymous

      Yeah. I actually sleep with the lights on :P

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  • some chick

    oh dude you have to send me that video it sounds sooo awsome

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    • slenderman

      did u even read it? it turned out to be a story like this one. Now I shall get U!!!
      -slender

      P.S keep cool and keep slender!

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    • slenderman

      Did you even listen? DID YOU LISTEN TO THE MORAL OF THE STORY AT ALL?

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  • http://metalganon.deviantart.com G.R. Ramírez

    Wow, the storyteller wants to kill us as revenge. Woohoo…

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    • slenderman

      Not as revenge, as duty!

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      • jimmy

        @slenderman hahaha you said duty

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  • ºRudolfºHöߺ

    Meh.
    It was good.
    Best one we’ve had in awhile.

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  • Anonymous

    lul but who was video

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  • Mog

    FUCKIN’ A
    WHO WAS LADY?

    man. xD This shit, as regular as it is, always seems to get me.

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  • It’s a Secert

    Meh.

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  • Russel Crowe

    LOOK AT ME IM ON A MOTHER FUCKING BOAT

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  • Allie

    D: I don’t like thissss~
    The story was good, but it was really scary xD Ehhh I’m scared of using the computer now D: Thanks alot >:

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    • slenderman

      heehee!

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  • Anon

    hah, stories like this don’t scar-WITNESS

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  • Anon

    Lately there seems to be too many pastas that because your reading it, you will suffer the same fate as the writer. Oldpasta is old.

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    • slenderman

      You need to start sending me these “recent creepypastas”

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    • Atoshi

      Old and moldy… gross

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  • Nyctophobia

    “Haunted houses are meaningless.” “Are” should be “were,” since it’s all in past tense. Nice story, I didn’t like how it felt like a myspace forward though.

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  • Cyarm

    *needs to move to another house due to this one now being filled with bricks from a creepypasta related shatting*

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  • pastalover

    this story has The Ring syndrome. It’s gotten cliche in creepypastas.

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  • THE GAME

    saw the ending comming from miles away

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    • slenderman

      no u didnt. totally UNPREDICTABLE

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      • slenderman

        EXACTLY!!! UNPREDICTABLE
        -slend is the man

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  • Daniel W

    THEN WHO WAS COMPUTER?

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  • Candleja?

    Yess, it started out well, but the ending was average. Not particularly scary. I did like the description, however. I was trying to eat and it definitely made me lose my appetite.

    Oh, and may I just say to WHO WAS PHONE? that I’m loving these many updates? Good job, luv. Keep it up!

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  • Miss Betterdone

    I agree with The Game. The ending was very predictable.

    Side note, though: I’ve noticed all of these people who are getting stalked by these creepy monsters like to pass on their fate. If this thing is so terrible, wouldn’t you NOT want to give it to someone else? If this were me, I wouldn’t tell anyone about it, thereby ending the curse with myself.

    I’MMA HEROOOOOOOO

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  • Dirjel

    Hm. This makes me want to play Silent Hill.

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  • Fae

    … You really need to read more, please don’t get offended (I’m not a good writer neither) but it urges you to open a book; as I said before don’t get ofended but this is the classic internet-sort tale you recibe in your emails almost daily (maybe a little more elaborated) but the level of horror you manege is… shallow; like gore films just that without the advantange of grotesque images and intense sound, but creativity it’s not an apriory talent the only thing you have to do do grow is to READ; if you like to write horror read horror start with short stories rather than novels, read whom ever bu READ.

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    • PastEcho

      I love how you can spell “grotesque” but not “manage”

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