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This is not a story of some roadside ghost that causes accidents, a creepy episode of a famous TV show, The disappearance of an entire town, or anything of the sort. This is the story of me, a seemingly normal citizen that leads a seemingly normal life.

I live in a small town located in central Ohio. I just graduated from a class of about 120 people. Some of my hobbies include: Going to the movies, playing video games, reading, playing soccer, playing music with friends, and going to local shows to see bands play. In the fall I will be moving away for college, just like many of the people I graduated with.

What sets me apart from the rest of society is a very primal desire. The desire to kill another human being. Whenever I see another person, I feel the urge to murder them. I often sit with my friends and think of the various ways I could kill them. After having sex with my girlfriend, I think about strangling her as she sleeps. I have no logical reason for feeling this urge, no traumatic past event that’s altered my thinking. I just want to kill. Maybe I will act upon these impulses some day. push someone off a balcony or stab a man on my walk home from class.

So after reading this and continuing on with your normal life,spending time with your normal friends, and sleeping in the same house with your normal family, ask yourself what it is to be ‘normal’. Think about all of the people you casually walk by everyday. Maybe they’re not as normal as you think. Maybe they want to kill you for no specific reason. Maybe it’s me.

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Homicidal Tendencies, 5.5 out of 10 based on 219 ratings
  • shizzy

    This slightly sounds like Dexter. The ending didn’t go with the rest of the short story either.

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  • Shogunfish

    Not creepy, it’s as simple as that.

    The idea that I should fear a random stranger thinking about killing me for no reason is kind of dumb

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    Rating: +7 (from 11 votes)
  • Fray

    Plain. It really just tells about another human with unoriginal thoughts just like the rest of the world with homicidal tendencies. I’d really like to see something other than the norm.

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    Rating: +6 (from 8 votes)
  • Lolwat?

    Generic, boring and it has no creepy factor.

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    Rating: +3 (from 9 votes)
  • http://www.creepypasta.com/hope/ Dirjel

    Other than that one goofy sentence fragment in the opening paragraph, this was pretty good. It was a nice, subtle take on the “and now the monster is going to get you!” ending.

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  • frycook48

    This is one of the worst i have ever read…

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    Rating: -1 (from 7 votes)
  • Nobodyblues

    Plot aside, the first thing I saw wrong with this story is that it got way off topic when you started listing what your hobbies were.
    That made me want to stop reading right then and there.
    List the things that are important to the story rather than the irrelevant things.
    But as everyone else has said..
    Plain. Boring. Nothing new.
    But at least this one had correct grammar and punctuation.

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    Rating: +7 (from 11 votes)
  • Meh

    The author obviously tried too hard to sound like some big bad villain. It’s cheesy.

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    Rating: +4 (from 6 votes)
  • Shelbycomestokill

    This is cheesy and very off-topic.
    It’s bland.

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    Rating: +3 (from 3 votes)
  • L.E.

    Definitely was pretty bland, even if it is my first pasta. I’ll be sure to put more work into it in the future.

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  • http://donloondbo.blog.com Dbo

    Yeah I know that feeling, been there my whole life then I did 5 yrs locked up to feed the need

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  • Uchiha, Arnya

    criminology student disapproves. had the potential to be a lot more psychologically creepy, but it fell short :/

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    Rating: +3 (from 3 votes)
  • dylan

    meh i have the same thoughts i feal like just cutting people up sometimes when i look at them for no reson at all but than a few seconds later i feal like i have to throwup its kinda weird but it happens alot

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  • Anonymous

    same here

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  • ___

    same here

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  • Anonymous

    omg same here

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  • ẠbracadaveЯ

    I have all the characteristics of a human being: blood, flesh, skin, hair; but not a single, clear, identifiable emotion, except for greed and disgust. Something horrible is happening inside of me and I don’t know why. My nightly bloodlust has overflown into my days. I feel lethal, on the verge of frenzy. I think my mask of sanity is about to slip.

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    Rating: +5 (from 9 votes)
  • isolatedDreamer

    What if I wrote something under the tag “Homicidal Tendencies”?

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  • The Lone Wanderer

    Good idea, but vague. There are definitely people with illnesses that make them want to kill, so it is realistic (for me realism makes things scarier since it could "actually happen"). But this was just sort of a description of this dude’s urges. Try expanding on his feelings; maybe he struggles with the moral dilemma, thinks he’s a monster, etc.

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    Rating: +3 (from 3 votes)
  • Extra Tooth

    The tooth growing in the back of your mouth –

    This is quite unoriginal. I found it to be predictable, and very bland…

    4/10

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  • Father Litmatch

    Pasta has been rehashed so many times its boring, sorry bout that

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