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Goodnight



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She lived in a small apartment with her husband and two dogs. Since the building was old and the walls were thin, every noise made in the entryway and living room could be heard from the bedroom.

Late one night, she decided to go to bed while her husband took the dogs outside for their last walk. After she went into the bedroom, she heard the jingle of the dogs’ leashes and the opening and closing of the front door.

As she started to doze off, she heard the front door open and close as her husband reentered the apartment. She saw a small streak of light as he opened the bedroom door and then quietly closed it behind him. He silently climbed into bed and got under the covers. She murmured, “I love you,” and fell asleep before he could reply.

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A few moments later, she was awakened when she heard the front door open and close again. Then she heard the jingle of the dogs’ leashes and her husband’s hushed voice. By the time that she realized that her husband was not already in bed, she felt a cold hand caress her cheek.

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Credit To: Jessica

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35 thoughts on “Goodnight”

  1. Pretty much what most scary stories contain.No offense,but even someone who has no talent for writing or whatsoever could write something like that.I was expecting something more original,but…eh well…

  2. If the person in bed was a stranger then how come he brought dogs with him. :/ I’m thinking maybe he stalked them and he just wanted to get into the bed with her so he tricked her.

  3. Certainly creepy, but too predictable. Even if you didn’t get the ending from the title and the first few sentences, the fact that first she hears the dogs and then she doesn’t should clear up what’s coming. More surprise, pls.

  4. Nice and snappy. Though, I think the last sentence could be reduced to just "She felt a cold hand caress her cheek". The readers can work out for themselves that it’s not her husband who got into bed with her.

  5. Not all that scary. I mean the husband’s home now, so he’s just gonna fuck that guy up. Good premise, but it could’ve been much scarier.

  6. Really good read :3
    I enjoyed this one alot. A whole new twist on an old story and she did really good. 10/10 ^_^
    Bravo!
    Keep writing ^_^

    1. Yes, it was not her husband in bed with her. She thought it was at first because it sounded like him, but when she heard him enter a second time and actually heard his voice she realized it was something else in her bed.

      Classic pasta, always love ^_^

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