Scary Paranormal Stories & Short Horror Microfiction

Creepypasta

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She lived in a small apartment with her husband and two dogs. Since the building was old and the walls were thin, every noise made in the entryway and living room could be heard from the bedroom.

Late one night, she decided to go to bed while her husband took the dogs outside for their last walk. After she went into the bedroom, she heard the jingle of the dogs’ leashes and the opening and closing of the front door.

As she started to doze off, she heard the front door open and close as her husband reentered the apartment. She saw a small streak of light as he opened the bedroom door and then quietly closed it behind him. He silently climbed into bed and got under the covers. She murmured, “I love you,” and fell asleep before he could reply.

A few moments later, she was awakened when she heard the front door open and close again. Then she heard the jingle of the dogs’ leashes and her husband’s hushed voice. By the time that she realized that her husband was not already in bed, she felt a cold hand caress her cheek.

Credit To: Jessica

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  • YOU CAN’T HANDLE THE USERNAME!

    I don’t get it. Was it someone else?

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    • C

      Yes, it was not her husband in bed with her. She thought it was at first because it sounded like him, but when she heard him enter a second time and actually heard his voice she realized it was something else in her bed.

      Classic pasta, always love ^_^

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  • THEN WHO WAS….nevermind…

    You asked for this…..THEN WHO WAS ON BED???

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    • Cynnical Person

      Perdobear’s illegitimate half brother, Poking Panda.

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      • Revanth

        Never underestimate Poking Panda, because he’s there, and always ready to poke you inappropriately.

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        Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
  • THEN WHO WAS….nevermind…

    I meant IN bed…oops

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    • TheReaderDownUnder

      Don’t worry, no one laughed the first time anyway.

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  • Santa

    It was I

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  • Jay

    Really good read :3
    I enjoyed this one alot. A whole new twist on an old story and she did really good. 10/10 ^_^
    Bravo!
    Keep writing ^_^

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  • Freaky Fred

    Not all that scary. I mean the husband’s home now, so he’s just gonna fuck that guy up. Good premise, but it could’ve been much scarier.

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    • Smith

      Because if you were in this situation, you totally wouldn’t shit a million bricks. Uh-huh…

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      Rating: +16 (from 18 votes)
  • Tardigrade

    Nice and snappy. Though, I think the last sentence could be reduced to just "She felt a cold hand caress her cheek". The readers can work out for themselves that it’s not her husband who got into bed with her.

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  • Mazepa

    Yeah this is also a little confusing for me, can someone elaborate?

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    • Mazepa

      On nvm I get it now hahaha

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  • The Blackness

    It kinda sounds like the Rake.

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  • Tadhg

    lol whoever that guy is, is gonna get messed up by the guys wife

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  • DetGuy

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j6flB0XvmTo

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    • https://www.facebook.com/betonunesneto Alberto N.

      I know this is something scary and I don’t really wanna watch it, but curiosity has got the best of me so thuumbs up for all to see!

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    • https://www.facebook.com/betonunesneto Alberto N.

      I HATE YOU DUDE, I HATE YOU

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      Rating: +6 (from 6 votes)
  • sarah

    it was good but it doesn’t feel finished

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  • Tsugirai

    Certainly creepy, but too predictable. Even if you didn’t get the ending from the title and the first few sentences, the fact that first she hears the dogs and then she doesn’t should clear up what’s coming. More surprise, pls.

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  • THE WENDIGO

    I bet the husband kills both of them…cheaters.

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  • Slenderman

    Well I gotta have me some fun, don’t I???????????

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  • Pepitaluna

    I think this was a pretty good read. Got me paranoid.T_T

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  • Anonymous

    Was it a ghost? Was it a man? Was it a zombie? Was it Slenderman? Nobody will ever know.

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    Rating: +4 (from 4 votes)
  • Person

    If the person in bed was a stranger then how come he brought dogs with him. :/ I’m thinking maybe he stalked them and he just wanted to get into the bed with her so he tricked her.

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    • Beemo xD

      He didnt bring dogs with him. -_- She just heard the door open and assumed it was her husband.

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  • oh.

    incubus.

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  • Stheno

    Pretty much what most scary stories contain.No offense,but even someone who has no talent for writing or whatsoever could write something like that.I was expecting something more original,but…eh well…

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  • http://- Julian

    Hey, is it a problem if i translated it to german ? And to make a Video about it ?

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  • Anonymous

    THEN WHO WAS BED?!!??

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  • Insanity

    My mind went straight to incubus .__. those sexy little fuckers are scary as hell Dx

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