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  1. YOU CAN’T HANDLE THE USERNAME!
    November 22, 2012

    I don’t get it. Was it someone else?

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    • C
      November 22, 2012

      Yes, it was not her husband in bed with her. She thought it was at first because it sounded like him, but when she heard him enter a second time and actually heard his voice she realized it was something else in her bed.

      Classic pasta, always love ^_^

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  2. THEN WHO WAS….nevermind…
    November 22, 2012

    You asked for this…..THEN WHO WAS ON BED???

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    • Cynnical Person
      November 23, 2012

      Perdobear’s illegitimate half brother, Poking Panda.

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      • Revanth
        April 16, 2014

        Never underestimate Poking Panda, because he’s there, and always ready to poke you inappropriately.

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  3. THEN WHO WAS….nevermind…
    November 22, 2012

    I meant IN bed…oops

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    • TheReaderDownUnder
      August 22, 2014

      Don’t worry, no one laughed the first time anyway.

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  4. Santa
    November 22, 2012

    It was I

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  5. Jay
    November 22, 2012

    Really good read :3
    I enjoyed this one alot. A whole new twist on an old story and she did really good. 10/10 ^_^
    Bravo!
    Keep writing ^_^

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  6. Freaky Fred
    November 22, 2012

    Not all that scary. I mean the husband’s home now, so he’s just gonna fuck that guy up. Good premise, but it could’ve been much scarier.

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    • Smith
      December 2, 2012

      Because if you were in this situation, you totally wouldn’t shit a million bricks. Uh-huh…

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  7. Tardigrade
    November 22, 2012

    Nice and snappy. Though, I think the last sentence could be reduced to just "She felt a cold hand caress her cheek". The readers can work out for themselves that it’s not her husband who got into bed with her.

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  8. Mazepa
    November 23, 2012

    Yeah this is also a little confusing for me, can someone elaborate?

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    • Mazepa
      November 23, 2012

      On nvm I get it now hahaha

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  9. The Blackness
    November 23, 2012

    It kinda sounds like the Rake.

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  10. Tadhg
    November 23, 2012

    lol whoever that guy is, is gonna get messed up by the guys wife

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  11. DetGuy
    November 23, 2012

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    • Alberto N.
      November 25, 2012

      I know this is something scary and I don’t really wanna watch it, but curiosity has got the best of me so thuumbs up for all to see!

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    • Alberto N.
      November 25, 2012

      I HATE YOU DUDE, I HATE YOU

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  12. sarah
    November 23, 2012

    it was good but it doesn’t feel finished

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  13. Tsugirai
    November 24, 2012

    Certainly creepy, but too predictable. Even if you didn’t get the ending from the title and the first few sentences, the fact that first she hears the dogs and then she doesn’t should clear up what’s coming. More surprise, pls.

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  14. THE WENDIGO
    November 24, 2012

    I bet the husband kills both of them…cheaters.

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  15. Slenderman
    November 25, 2012

    Well I gotta have me some fun, don’t I???????????

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  16. Pepitaluna
    November 28, 2012

    I think this was a pretty good read. Got me paranoid.T_T

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  17. Anonymous
    November 29, 2012

    Was it a ghost? Was it a man? Was it a zombie? Was it Slenderman? Nobody will ever know.

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  18. Person
    December 14, 2012

    If the person in bed was a stranger then how come he brought dogs with him. :/ I’m thinking maybe he stalked them and he just wanted to get into the bed with her so he tricked her.

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    • Beemo xD
      March 1, 2013

      He didnt bring dogs with him. -_- She just heard the door open and assumed it was her husband.

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  19. oh.
    December 17, 2012

    incubus.

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  20. Stheno
    December 23, 2012

    Pretty much what most scary stories contain.No offense,but even someone who has no talent for writing or whatsoever could write something like that.I was expecting something more original,but…eh well…

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  21. Julian
    January 28, 2013

    Hey, is it a problem if i translated it to german ? And to make a Video about it ?

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  22. Anonymous
    February 5, 2013

    THEN WHO WAS BED?!!??

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  23. Insanity
    October 9, 2013

    My mind went straight to incubus .__. those sexy little fuckers are scary as hell Dx

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