Scary Paranormal Stories & Short Horror Microfiction

Creepypasta

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Bright white light dapples the faces of the young, pretty music circles and echoes around the ears, fingers feel the lush dew of early morning grass, the crunch and tang of an apple excites the tongue and the nose is filled with the sweet aroma of that indefinable smell that haunts happiness. I feel my feet trail through the few spring flowers, and watch quietly as you parade in front of me.

You’re always there; the blight on my paradise. It’s like a window – a glass door into another world that’s locked and barred from the other side. You dim my light; you turn my apples into ashes as they lie in my hands. One look from you, unknowing, rots the young and beautiful, aging them into hideous spectres; creatures to haunt my waking hours. I never sleep; I cannot while you live.

Every nightmare you have, every bad thought you ever considered – every lustful glance, sinful desire, strange debauchery… All of your impurity seeps into my perfect world. It burns my plants; it destroys my sweet children. It burns my skin. Now I cannot even shut my eyes. The last whore you looked at burned away my delicate eyelids.

But don’t worry. My transformation from perfection to rot had an added bonus. Every day I scrape at the window, at the glass door. Those strange sounds you hear whenever you’re alone? The fear that creeps into your heart after dark? The creaks and the thumps you convince yourself are the pipes and the heating? My fingernails – they screech and scratch at the window, at the glass door. Each day, I get closer.

I’m down to my last few layers. Soon I’ll be full of joy again. Can you hear me laughing yet?

I can’t wait to meet you.


Credited to bez00mny.

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  • Comment Leaver

    Oooooooooh! I love love love loveeee the concept! A bit confusing at first and the opening was a tad oddly written, but loved it none the less.

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    • Hello

      Wait, was the guy his wicked spirit or somthing?

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  • http://mrsleep.wordpress.com/ Mr. Sleep

    I know you.

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    • Creepy Penises

      Wuz mah name den?

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  • Spunk

    It was decent. It didn’t have quite the level of creepiness I expected, but it was good enough. 3.5 out of 5.

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  • Krissy-Hime

    This has now become one of my favorites.
    Topping “who was phone”. <3
    Reminded me of a few things I’d rather not consider, but still good nonetheless.

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  • Anonymous

    Yeah?! You think this world’s any better? You think I even knew I was doing this to you? Listen, whatever you are, I’ve got more things to worry about than you! At least you’ve had your taste of perfection, being. I never have. So bring it. All I see is a whining creature that thinks it’s too good to feel pain!

    THEN WHO WAS PATHETIC MIRROR-PERSON?!

    The concept and story would have been creepier to me if it didn’t make me form a personal opinion. But aside from my little tirade, it’s pretty good. I like it.

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  • rinoakes

    would be creepy…if i understood it

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    • The Broken Tales

      He meant he is coming to get you.

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  • yghjdty

    well shit.

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  • Someone

    brix were shat.
    awesome pasta, 5/5!

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  • HackerOnHacker

    It was pretty cool, but not exactly creepy.

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  • boo

    The last line wasnt really needed.it just took away from the story because it was expected

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  • clever_name

    Yes. Well-written pasta is a win.

    Also I need to go check what that knocking sound was at my door while I was reading, I’m sure it was just the wind…

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  • Oh Rin

    nice pasta
    5/5

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  • katie

    that was pretty good.
    it makes me afraid to look at hot guys, it really does.

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  • Temporary Wounds

    OH FUCK IT! I’m sitting on a fucking chair FUCKING TOUCHING THE MOTHERFUCKING DOOR! Damn it, the lights are also off!! Aargh!
    :(

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  • WhoWasPhoney?

    NOMNOMNOMNOMONOMNOMONOMONOM!!!!
    Delicious pasta. Too bad i ate it all.

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  • Anon E Mouse

    The first three paragraphs sound like something a guy would get from a psycho-ex girlfriend or something.
    I liked that part.

    The last paragraph kinda killed it for me. :(

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  • Caedus

    Ha…I see you.

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  • Woo!

    Look out!!

    Fuck yea!

    Great story.

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  • Reptilian Liar

    Beautifully written, but…just not that creepy.

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  • http://creepypasta.com Somone is here now

    Bring it on bitch!
    ill imperfect the crap out of you before you even get past the last few layers of glass!

    This is like my fav story ever!

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  • carrot

    I @PPR0V3.

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  • http://metalganon.deviantart.com G.R. Ramírez

    Pretty damn good, but could have used a somewhat different ending.

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  • VDV

    That last line got me…

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  • http://myspace.com/darkwolf4ever Father Crow

    Oh my god. o_o
    Well. Looks like I have more to be paranoid about.

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  • http://www.mybloghasadd.blogspot.com Addish

    Fucking nice, that’s all I can say.

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