• http://q.com firewolf

    first?

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    Rating: -11 (from 23 votes)
    • Hello

      I DON’T GET IT!!!!!!

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      Rating: +4 (from 10 votes)
  • baerz

    so, the guy wasnt a zombie, but he wanted the zombies to control the earth because he hated actual people?

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    • http://aol I’m coming for you

      No he was one of the last hummens left so he’s a monster zombies are like norml now

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      Rating: +3 (from 9 votes)
      • Sasha Blause

        Nice spelling

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  • Fugu

    awesome story.

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  • Lolz.

    So, guy hated the world before, loses his mind during zombie apocalypse, and now kills his own people because he’s a selfish nut?

    LOLZ.

    Also, dumb.

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  • Jonny

    Oh fuck off. “First?” Why not just say “Shopped” as well and get the double whammy of tedious, cliched pointlessness over with. At least add something of even the tiniest amount of worth to your over-used and utterly unoriginal post.

    Anyway, story has elements of “I am Legend” don’t you agree? Kind of feels like it needs a follow-up to sort out what ends up with this guy.

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    • Sour Skin Seamus

      I second this motion! A few gramatical errors and spelling mistakes, but I personally dont believe pastas should get low ratings because of that. If the story is good (like this one) they deserve a good rating. 5 mutated zombie thumbs up! :D

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  • child

    second?

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  • http://thehungryreader.com Krepta

    Ehhh. Zombie apocalypse trope is so over and done that you didn’t even have to explain it to the reader. Generally that means it’s time for an overhaul. Not much emotional connection to any character, either.

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  • Anonymous

    Lame.

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  • Suckmy Nuttzack

    That sucked.

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  • http://dirjel.deviantart.com Dirjel

    ._.

    I liked it.

    Crazy bastard.

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    Rating: +7 (from 13 votes)
  • Anonymous

    THEN WHO WAS PIPE BOMB?

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  • Circé

    Entertaining to say the most.
    Writing was a little fragmented in places and I don’t feel like the character was developed enough to give the real impact at the end.
    Mediocre pasta, would eat again if there really wasn’t anything else.

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    Rating: +3 (from 5 votes)
  • Iron Knight

    Bad. Made no sense.

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    Rating: -1 (from 7 votes)
  • aCJohnson

    God awful. I am a pretty open-minded pasta eater, but this had me face palming the whole time. I expected a “You are the demons” ending it was so horribly written.

    -1/10

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    Rating: -2 (from 14 votes)
  • Anonymous

    Meh, subpar pasta is subpar.
    4/10.

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    Rating: +6 (from 8 votes)
  • Violent Harvest

    What the fuck was this. I think the Margaritaville shirt was the worst part, but mostly the whole thing made me want to kill myself. Jimmy Buffett fans belong elsewhere than creepypasta.

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    Rating: +2 (from 14 votes)
  • This Is What

    coolio

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  • Katlynne

    Hmm……kinda interesting.

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    Rating: +1 (from 5 votes)
  • DeclinedDoomed

    “They had heard two rifles firing at once, and knew from experience a man could only fire one at once.”

    This is where I stopped. Are you serious? This is like saying “He a glowing burner on a stove, and knew from experience that touching it would burn him.”

    Atrocious writing is atrocious.

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    Rating: +2 (from 10 votes)
  • JoE

    How is this creepy? Why is this here? Who has zombie?

    These are the questions I bring forth, I would be pleased to have them answered by OP.

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  • Lolwut?

    terrible. sorry, but its true.

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    Rating: -1 (from 9 votes)
  • Lolwut?

    terrible. sorry, but its true.

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    Rating: -2 (from 8 votes)
  • lol

    SUPER FREAK SUPER FREAKY

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  • Silarial

    The first few paragraphs drove me effing crazy. WE GET IT HE’S A FREAK. Repetition’s cool but seriously overused in this story.
    Other than that, it was decent. Nothing crazy but entertaining enough.

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    Rating: +3 (from 7 votes)
  • Anonymous

    This is so fucking awful.

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    Rating: +2 (from 8 votes)
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