Eternal Dream
Have you ever wondered about what happens when you die?
Well, something does. Your body dies, but your conscience lives on.
The night you die, you will be in an eternal dream. You will live that dream for all eternity, and it will be like reality. Whatever you dreamed that last night will be what you are going to be “living” in for eternity, and you will never wake up again, in the comfort of your house.
Let’s hope you don’t have a nightmare that last night.
Eternal Dream,
But what if I don’t dream that night ._.?
You dream every night but you may not remember it.
Actually, there is a rare condition that some people have in which they cannot reach REM sleep, or dream sleep, and constantly wake up as they draw close. Therefore, some people do not dream.
Thats true i didn’t dream last night.
:/
Interesting idea, but poorly written.
Terrible. Terrible terrible terrible.
Right up there with “Who was phone?”
How is that terible?
BUT WHO WAS DREAM?
This is exactly how I envision the afterlife. Good job.
That was awful.
Sorry, but no.
It wasn’t awful you just don’t get it.
What if you die while you’re awake?
This fails in its very concept.
It said the last dream you had you will live in. It didn’t say that you had to die dreaming.
Interesting idea, but it raises more questions than it answers. I understand a pasta’s general need to be mysterious and vague, but in this case it doesn’t help the concept much.
Besides, nightmares are so because of the physical stress they impact on the dreamer’s body. If the body is dead and unable to feel stress, then what’s the point?
Grammar = BLEH!
Story = ehhh (Good but not Great)
Terrible.
Really lets see you make a better one.
@Anon,
everyone dreams.
Maybe you don’t remember your dreams,
but everyone dreams. Always.
Whether you remember them apparently plays no part in this.
@MisterVercetti,
It never said you had to be asleep.
Did it not say what you dream “that last night” which refers to, the last night that you’re alive. What you dreamed the night before. Yeah? No?
I dunno.
Maybe I’M the one that’s misunderstanding.
Theoretically, now that we know this if we find ourselves trapped in a dream for a long time we can safely assume we’re dead and are indeed dreaming, so we could become lucid and dream about whatever the fuck we want.
So BALLS. WHO WAS SUCKY PASTA?
Well, while this IS vaguely like I used to picture the afterlife, it still fails. It’s just not compelling enough.
dumb
wat
How do I know I’m not already IN that dream right now? ^_~#
I kinda like the whole idea.
Wut.
Decent idea. I wish we could have someone write it who could actually execute it properly.
A mediocre concept spoiled by poor writing.
I liked it, good concept, but I saw the ending coming as soon as I started reading it. 7.5/10
In Soviet Russia, dream lives you.
nice idea but the writing was terriable
Kinda cool, but I’ve never had a nightmare. Hear of lucid dreaming? I think death’ll be like that. Maybe depending on how strong your mind is.
wouldn’t the dream only last untill your brain rots away?
It’s eternally eternal, but only for eternity, I’m guessing.