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Have you ever wondered about what happens when you die?

Well, something does. Your body dies, but your conscience lives on.
The night you die, you will be in an eternal dream. You will live that dream for all eternity, and it will be like reality. Whatever you dreamed that last night will be what you are going to be “living” in for eternity, and you will never wake up again, in the comfort of your house.

Let’s hope you don’t have a nightmare that last night.

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  • Anon

    But what if I don’t dream that night ._.?

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    • http://www.dog.com Anonymouse

      You dream every night but you may not remember it.

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      • Hannah

        Actually, there is a rare condition that some people have in which they cannot reach REM sleep, or dream sleep, and constantly wake up as they draw close. Therefore, some people do not dream.

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        • Girl26

          Thats true i didn’t dream last night.

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  • Mike Litoris

    :/

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  • Stant

    Interesting idea, but poorly written.

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  • Fun Guy

    Terrible. Terrible terrible terrible.
    Right up there with “Who was phone?”

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    • Girl26

      How is that terible?

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  • RiaDiga

    BUT WHO WAS DREAM?

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  • blehgh

    This is exactly how I envision the afterlife. Good job.

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  • Comment Leaver

    That was awful.

    Sorry, but no.

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    • Girl26

      It wasn’t awful you just don’t get it.

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      • -_-

        We get it, it’s just stupid.

        It was basically a stoner commenting on death, and then trying to make it creepy by throwing in a “Don’t have a bad dream!”

        This was bad.

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  • MisterVercetti

    What if you die while you’re awake?

    This fails in its very concept.

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    • jayden :3

      It said the last dream you had you will live in. It didn’t say that you had to die dreaming.

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  • HackerOnHacker

    Interesting idea, but it raises more questions than it answers. I understand a pasta’s general need to be mysterious and vague, but in this case it doesn’t help the concept much.

    Besides, nightmares are so because of the physical stress they impact on the dreamer’s body. If the body is dead and unable to feel stress, then what’s the point?

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  • UNDEAD

    Grammar = BLEH!

    Story = ehhh (Good but not Great)

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  • OAIEBH

    Terrible.

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    • Keely

      Really lets see you make a better one.

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      • -_-

        It is the most annoying, idiotic thing to response with “Let’s see you do better.”
        You don’t need to be an expert writer to know a good story from a bad one.

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  • gfjsdrtbdfg

    @Anon,
    everyone dreams.
    Maybe you don’t remember your dreams,
    but everyone dreams. Always.
    Whether you remember them apparently plays no part in this.

    @MisterVercetti,
    It never said you had to be asleep.
    Did it not say what you dream “that last night” which refers to, the last night that you’re alive. What you dreamed the night before. Yeah? No?
    I dunno.
    Maybe I’M the one that’s misunderstanding.

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  • hoothoot

    Theoretically, now that we know this if we find ourselves trapped in a dream for a long time we can safely assume we’re dead and are indeed dreaming, so we could become lucid and dream about whatever the fuck we want.

    So BALLS. WHO WAS SUCKY PASTA?

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  • eep.

    Well, while this IS vaguely like I used to picture the afterlife, it still fails. It’s just not compelling enough.

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  • katie

    dumb

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  • It’s a Secret

    wat

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  • K!TTY KRaMeR

    How do I know I’m not already IN that dream right now? ^_~#
    I kinda like the whole idea.

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  • Diddler

    Wut.
    Decent idea. I wish we could have someone write it who could actually execute it properly.

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  • Kaida

    A mediocre concept spoiled by poor writing.

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  • ArtVandelay

    I liked it, good concept, but I saw the ending coming as soon as I started reading it. 7.5/10

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  • Anonymous

    In Soviet Russia, dream lives you.

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  • hippie

    nice idea but the writing was terriable

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  • Anonymous

    Kinda cool, but I’ve never had a nightmare. Hear of lucid dreaming? I think death’ll be like that. Maybe depending on how strong your mind is.

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  • 99% human

    wouldn’t the dream only last untill your brain rots away?

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  • Nick/Dfork

    It’s eternally eternal, but only for eternity, I’m guessing.

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