Eternal Dream
Have you ever wondered about what happens when you die?
Well, something does. Your body dies, but your conscience lives on.
The night you die, you will be in an eternal dream. You will live that dream for all eternity, and it will be like reality. Whatever you dreamed that last night will be what you are going to be “living” in for eternity, and you will never wake up again, in the comfort of your house.
Let’s hope you don’t have a nightmare that last night.
But what if I don’t dream that night ._.?
:/
Interesting idea, but poorly written.
Terrible. Terrible terrible terrible.
Right up there with “Who was phone?”
BUT WHO WAS DREAM?
This is exactly how I envision the afterlife. Good job.
That was awful.
Sorry, but no.
What if you die while you’re awake?
This fails in its very concept.
Interesting idea, but it raises more questions than it answers. I understand a pasta’s general need to be mysterious and vague, but in this case it doesn’t help the concept much.
Besides, nightmares are so because of the physical stress they impact on the dreamer’s body. If the body is dead and unable to feel stress, then what’s the point?
Grammar = BLEH!
Story = ehhh (Good but not Great)
Terrible.
@Anon,
everyone dreams.
Maybe you don’t remember your dreams,
but everyone dreams. Always.
Whether you remember them apparently plays no part in this.
@MisterVercetti,
It never said you had to be asleep.
Did it not say what you dream “that last night” which refers to, the last night that you’re alive. What you dreamed the night before. Yeah? No?
I dunno.
Maybe I’M the one that’s misunderstanding.
Theoretically, now that we know this if we find ourselves trapped in a dream for a long time we can safely assume we’re dead and are indeed dreaming, so we could become lucid and dream about whatever the fuck we want.
So BALLS. WHO WAS SUCKY PASTA?
Well, while this IS vaguely like I used to picture the afterlife, it still fails. It’s just not compelling enough.
dumb
wat
How do I know I’m not already IN that dream right now? ^_~#
I kinda like the whole idea.
Wut.
Decent idea. I wish we could have someone write it who could actually execute it properly.
A mediocre concept spoiled by poor writing.
I liked it, good concept, but I saw the ending coming as soon as I started reading it. 7.5/10
In Soviet Russia, dream lives you.
nice idea but the writing was terriable
Kinda cool, but I’ve never had a nightmare. Hear of lucid dreaming? I think death’ll be like that. Maybe depending on how strong your mind is.
wouldn’t the dream only last untill your brain rots away?
It’s eternally eternal, but only for eternity, I’m guessing.
Generic, generic, generic.
The most bland piece of round the campfire pith I’ve had the bad luck to chance over in recent months.
Really, you should feel bad for having wrote this.
What if you dream that you began life again?
Paradox dream is paradoxical.
LAME
not interseting, not written good. sorry but this was uttaaa bullshit
Yeah, I expected that.
yawn.
BUT WHO WAS NIGHTMARE?!. :O
What if I die at the daytime?
dream about meatspin
well, i’m alright then. i dreamed i was making out with my bf XD
There was a super hot guy in my dream. I also had a job, and was in a really cool building, along with Spyro the Dragon and my best friend. Winning situation? I think yes.
Not amused.
Basically, if you have a good dream, you should kill yourself as soon as you wake up
This is more like an idea then a pasta.I dont like critisize but this is actually fail considering nightmares are not dreams and use an entirely different part of the brain (memory) this would be something better placed in a forum somewhere then here.
Anyone notice the poor quality of recent updates?
This one sucks.
This was not written well.
this was sorta a stupid idea if i had to say, and im usually pretty generous with my reviews, its said that u have over a million dreams in one night just your mind interperets (no idea if that spelled correctly) which one had the most relevance in the last day or couple days, so just as a tip do some research before writing a pasta that just came to your head. good idea but could have been much better
That’s stupid, and you’re stupid for suggesting it. Not to mention, not creepy, not creepypasta material, not entertaining, not story material. Maybe you can amaze all your friends while you’re all high because your ideas are so deep, but you should really just keep those ideas between you and your drug buddies.
Rating: N/A. Doesn’t deserve a 1
Thats about what I actually believe happened only a little different
I had a dream I was sneeking people across the border last night. FUCK YEAH.
hoothoot pretty much won the pasta.
My dreams are always awesome, and I haven’t had a nightmare since I was in 3rd grade.
Last night I dreamed that I was at a waterpark, and then I sang karaoke with my favorite singer. FUCK YEAH, DEATH.
interesting???……….
lolwut?
What if I died of not sleeping? If I didn’t sleep the last night then it would have been impossible for me to have dreamt anything…
Interesting idea, but poorly written.
Not enough of an impact here for me. Wasn’t the best way of writing it, good concept though.
No, i do not believe in such a theory.
@Testler
The last dream you had is what you will be living in for eternity. You guys are taking everything the wrong way.
An okay pasta, but the writing style is iffy. If someone could elaborate on this concept enough to extend it into a sizeable story, it could be good.
Interesting reading this just after playing Yume Nikki.
HEY EVERYONE OP HERE TELLING YOU ALL THAT I STOLE THIS FROM HAMLET ROFLROFLROFL
Piece of shit compared to Shakespeare’s wording for this.
HOW DO I DARK PRINCE OF DENAMRK?
What if I dreamt I was alive?
yucky
Bad pasta is bad.
BUT WHO WAS ETERNAL DREAM?
BUT WHO WAS HAMLET
thats how i always thought death to be like
Maaaaan, what if you be wakin up dead? then you dream that your ‘sleep.
I want to dream of Pokemons >:3
The weird thing about this is, I find the concept terrifying regardless of whether the dream is good or bad. I have no idea why this is .__.
hope i get screwed in my last dream
So basically, someone watched Waking Life and decided to poorly quote the movie. Grats.
part of me just died. or wait… is it dreaming? shit, now im confused.
Wait, what if you have a dream in a dream?
i dreamt that i was in a hotel with 12 girl lying beside me asking for more…
I apologize for this, I don’t normally leave such crude comments but….
I apologize for this, I don’t normally leave such crude comments but….
THIS WAS FUCKING GAY.
A disturbing concept if you dwell on it.
Yeah but dreams change.
what if in your dream, you die?!?!?! O.o
good concept, poor writing, as depressing as it seems, an ongoing dream like state seems the most likely occurence of death, more likely than most theories in my opinion, though i dont think it depends on the dream you had the night before. however since this is more of a concept than a pasta, the pasta gets 0/10, but concept gets 9/10