Scary Paranormal Stories & Short Horror Microfiction

Creepypasta

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Hello, beautiful. If you can read this, please listen to my confession. You probably don’t know me, but I’ve known you for a very long time. And I don’t know if I should say this yet, but… I love you.

I do, I love you. I do, I really do.

I love you so much, that I built your entire world for you, so you may live on and on and on. I built it just after I met you. You were so beautiful lying there, with your dreamy eyes tenderly shut. Your near-translucent skin, which seemed to be growing paler and paler by the second. The way your limbs were twisted, delicately mangled at the joints to form such an unearthly vision of vulnerability. Oh, that must have been such a long fall. Not only did the building possess incredible height, but I know how the most glorious of angels must fall the furthest. Oh, my angel. My contorted angel on the pavement. Your soft flesh had been scraped away in just the right places, revealing your inner body’s artistic formation. No one could ever appreciate such a sight but I. No one but I could ever admire the curvature of your neck, bent a perfect ninety degrees to the right and twisted around twice, and only twice. As soon as I saw you there, I just had to reach out and touch you. I shivered in anticipation as I traced my fingers down your body, right to where it was already beginning to split. It stunned me with excitement, making me wonder at every second whether you’d burst apart.

And I carried you. I was ever so careful, making sure I didn’t damage what was left of your body. Some fragments of your skull fell out on the way, but I was quick to push them back in. Don’t worry, you were still in one piece when I brought you home. I brought you to lay on my bed, shattered arms crossed over your chest. You looked just like the pretty corpses in old fairytales. Even more so when I dressed you in my mother’s wedding gown. I took out my spellbook, ready to resurrect you. But no, the time wasn’t right. I was afraid I would frighten you away. So I created your afterlife, one just like the world you knew. Then I could keep loving you, you and your wounds, for what could be eternity.

But I think you’re ready to be revived now, to gaze upon the blackened eyes of me, your savior from below. You will live again, with love and beauty that will never die, as your wounds will always be fresh, and your bones just as mangled as they were when I met you. You’ll be able to feel my touch for the first time. Our fluids mingling together… your cold blood…

Don’t worry, my love.

I’ll be just as gentle as I’ve always been.


Credited to Lindsay S. (HackerOnHacker)

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  • http://Myspace.com/Roachirl05 Alexandra Roach

    Uh…thats..interesting?

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    • Isaac Clarke

      interesting? i vomitted in my mouth a little

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  • http://Myspace.com/Roachirl05 Bethany

    That was…definitely creepy.

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  • Anthony

    I am speechless. You are fantastic.

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  • Zslbfnas

    O shi-

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  • Samhain

    :O I like! I like! It gave me chills. XD

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  • WHO WAS PHONEY?

    Necrophile alert

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  • Tezmara

    I applaud. I thoroughly enjoyed this pasta.

    It had enough detail to make it fascinatingly creepy as well as the whole, this isn’t really the true world-ness to be wonderful

    Thank you for darkening my day

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  • Ma Cherie

    I imagined a mad demon/necromancer and his mangled, vacant-eyed zombie bride sitting on a porch swing hand in hand watching their half-mangled-zombie spawn play on the lawn.

    I have a really terrible sense of humor.

    Ignoring my bullshit, this story is amazing.

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  • James

    necrophilia much?

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  • Lulz Samurai

    @4, worse than necrophelia, necropheliacs aren’t normally attracted to TWISTED FUCKING NECKS and EXTREME LEG WOUNDS.

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  • ???

    fail

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  • lolol

    hmmmmm…not much to say about this one. It wasn’t good, but it wasn’t bad. It was more of a “Meh”.

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  • Anony Moose

    That was fairly awesome.

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  • http://misterwelldone.wordpress.com Mr. Welldone

    Hello.

    I am moved.

    Mr. Welldones last blog post..On Curiosity

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    • Cucumberr Souppp

      marry me babe. I adore you. pls love me </3

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    • A

      I was just about to say, this is like a love story Mr. Welldone would write!
      You beat me to it, man. Congrats on your new girl though.

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  • http://hack.cl GraveOne

    WTF Mr Welldone is back YAY!!!!

    kind of a weird post….

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  • Allie

    Weird, but super awesome at the same time :) I really liked it.

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  • http://www.cafepress.com/cutelyevilinc Addish

    That’s fucked up. One of the best I’ve seen in a while.

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  • Girlie

    …That’s like… ew, but awesome at the same time. xD Love it.

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  • Anonymous

    It reminds me of a Black Dahlia Murder song lol. Really well written and very chilling.

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  • MrSkary

    Edgar Allan Poe? Is that you? *tears up*

    I missed you Q.Q

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  • Anonymous

    BUT WHO WAS CREEPY NECROPHILIAC?!

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  • Chimera

    Positively exquisite. I adored this pasta.
    Also, good to see you are still lurking in the shadows, Mr. Welldone. A tip of the hat to you.

    Good day.

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  • Wheat

    Wasn’t my style of pasta.

    That having been said, I agree: it was very good. Very well written. The narrator unflinchingly details what he finds beautiful, rather than trying to creep us out. In the end that’s always more creepy, innit?

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  • The Person Formerly Known as ‘Noneya’

    That made me laugh, cough in embarassment, and get the chills all at the same time.

    Good pasta, well written. I would hate to be her when she wakes up.

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  • Anon E Mouse

    Not creepy in the gives-me-chills sense.
    Creepy in the that’s-pretty-disgusting sense.

    But a very good story nonetheless.
    Great job!

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