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Children of the Moon



Estimated reading time — 2 minutes

In the town of Bisden, nobody leaves their home after dark. As soon as the sun begins to set — shutters are drawn shut, candles are snuffed out, and doors are locked tight. Before the moon is fully risen, the entire town appears deserted, and silence reigns supreme.

“Did you hear that?” whispered Freja, sounding very small and afraid in the dark.
“Shut. Up.” Her older brother, Freud, hissed through clenched teeth as he eyed the black windows of the house nearest to them. They were probably locked. Nobody in their right mind would leave their windows unlocked at night. Not in Bisden, anyway.
“I told you we shouldn’t play in the forest,” continued Freja. “I said we should go back sooner.”
“And I said to shut up,” Freud went on. “Whining about the past doesn’t change the present.” Freud looked at his sister, shivering in the dark. “It doesn’t change the situation we’re in.”

Before Freja could respond, the faint sound of a child’s laughter floated across the wind. Goosebumps erupted along Freud’s neck and arms. Something about the sound seemed…wrong.

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“Maybe there’s other–“, Freud clasped his hand over Freja’s mouth. Pulling her in close, he shrank back into the shadows of the alley. Again, the unearthly sound drifted across the air. Freja tensed in Freud’s arms as she realized the magnitude of their situation. A child’s voice, oddly distorted, broke the silence of the night like a fist through glass.

“Come out, come out, wherever you are!”

The Thing lumbered across the mouth of the alley — just a few feet from Freud and Freja’s hiding place. It was roughly the size of a child, yet shuffled with its arms hanging grotesquely close to the ground — making its disproportionate body appear markedly apelike. It was completely nude, and had skin so shockingly white that it reflected the glow from the moon. The Thing turned its shimmering bald head toward the alley as it crossed. Its face was perfectly smooth, and entirely devoid of feature — save for an impossibly wide smile with thin lips the colour of blood. The crimson slash of its mouth appeared to stretch from ear to ear. Freud felt warmth spread down his thigh as his bladder let go.

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Freja whimpered.

The Thing froze mid-stride, its body becoming as rigid as stone. Slowly, it turned its torso until it was facing the alleyway. It took a tentative step forward. Freja sucked in a sharp breath through her nose as she began to hyperventilate. Freud clamped his hand over her mouth, but he was too late. Impossibly fast, The Thing twisted its head toward their hiding place, producing a sickening crackle from its neck.

“Found you!”

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In the town of Bisden, nobody leaves their house after dark. Every day, young ones are sternly told to be home by dusk. They are told of the evil that haunts the streets at night. They are told to always remain silent, because if they hear you — The Children of the Moon will tear you limb from limb.

Credit: RadLad

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16 thoughts on “Children of the Moon”

  1. I really love this story for my drama class we have to pick a scary story to act out for finals and we chose this one LOVE IT!!!

  2. Hello! I would love to read this story for my youtube channel. Let me know if this is ok. (im having trouble getting ahold of people. :p

  3. The flow of the story was really nice and has a cool mysterious vibe to it. Really enjoyed it. If you wrote a longer version, I’d be glad to read it. The Things description could use a little work though, but great job! 8 out of 10

  4. Norris Vaughn III

    I really enjoyed this. Although some of the wording and grammar was off in places, they were fewI really enjoyed the descriptive nature of it. I particularly liked your Moon Child character. I also would have liked some back story of the children as well; I would like to see more of how they got into the situation they were in.

  5. Really enjoyed this, although short it was very descriptive, hooked me in from the start. Although didn’t give much away at the end, it really worked.

    Solid story 8.5/10

  6. Short but sweet, I liked it. I liked the premise, and I thought your writing style flowed nicely. If I had to complain, it would be about the length. You did such a good job setting up a mysterious premise, it made me want to know more about the setting and lore. Also I thought the monster’s description was a bit unoriginal and cliche, but other than that I enjoyed the story and look forward to more of your work. A solid 8 out of 10 for me.

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