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If you call yourself on your own cellular phone, sometimes you will get an answer. You won’t hear anything other than heavy breathing, so don’t bother waiting for them to speak. If you then say the name of a person you know and a reason that they should die (reasons like “I just want them dead” do work), then they will die a gruesome death within the next 24 hours. Their horribly mangled corpse will be completely unrecognizable, and there is never any evidence pointing to a specific perpetrator so the person(s) that performs this service has never been caught. This was how the infamous Black Dahlia murder was perpetrated.

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  • Cyarm

    BUT WHO WAS PHONE?

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    • Phone

      Me. I am phone.

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      • Johnny C.

        Well, hey phone! How have you been?

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        • DeathMakara

          XD HAHAHA

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      • Anonymous

        Hahaha

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  • http://www.myspace.com/rukia_loves_ichigo Suicide7Days

    damn can this really work

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    • Darkmagiciangirl

      yes it happened to me!!!!!!!!!!!

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      • Anonymous

        What Happend???

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  • Readman

    Interesting idea.

    So, if I call my own cell phone at the right time, some unknown organization/person will kill anyone I want, for free!? This isn’t a creepypasta, it’s an advertisement. Does anyone here know exactly how valuable an untraceable hitman is? You could send him/her/it/them after the world’s most undesirable people; Osama Bin Laden, for example. Or, maybe, you could send it after people you think

    Too bad this is just a creepypasta. It would have been interesting to have the death of at least one infamous terrorist on my hands. The weirdest thing about it it that I’m not sure whether it’s a terrorist organization or a charitable organization.

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    • Jhe

      I don’t see why it can’t be both.

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    • HEY HEY HEY IT’S SLENDY

      This kind of makes me think you are a homicidal maniac but, so am I

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      • HAi

        Too late Osama is Dead.

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        • Anonymous

          With means that the breathing on the phone was really seal team six!

          Kick ass.

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    • RedEyesCelery

      Well, if you think about it, hit men don’t work for free. Even if this did work, there would probably end up being some horrid kind of payback that would come about you later. Whether it be a curse, or the hit man might even hold it over you as some sort of ransom for something or other. You never know >.>

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  • Readman

    Sorry, typo.

    In my unfinished sentence, I meant to say:

    “Or, maybe, you could send it after people you think are undesirable, that the world would do better without.”

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  • http://www.creepypasta.com WHO WAS PHONE?

    @Readman – the whole idea is very Death Note. I assume that’s where the author got the idea, now that I think about it.

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    • MadIsTheKing

      Actually for me its sounds more Chakushin ari (One Missed Call) too me. If you haven’t seen that movie, you should.

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  • Cara

    I tried and got my phones voice mail, guess now isnt the right time

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    • Endoplasmic Reticulum

      Or maybe you are the hitman!

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  • Readman

    @WHO WAS PHONE

    You know what, when I read it back at myself, that does sound very Death Note. That wasn’t my intention, though.

    But, still. The ability to kill one person. There would be no evidence that you perpetrated the crime, and you don’t even have to get your hands dirty.

    Don’t get me wrong, I don’t think I could muster the nerve to actually use this hitman, but it is an interesting prospect, in a hypothetical sense.

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  • NO U

    The logic in this one is kinda flawed though…there were no cell phones when the Black Dahlia murder occurred, although maybe they used regular phones instead.

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  • http://www.museumofawesome.we.bs Tom Fulp

    1 Missed call? Lulzordz.

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  • Yuyuke

    Ah, I knew this would show up eventually. This is actually based off an early plot point from an old PS1 RPG called “Persona”. Look it up. It’s a good creepypasts, but it’s not exactly original.

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  • http://www.creepypasta.com WHO WAS PHONE?

    @Yuyuke – ha, really? I’m playing Persona 3 right now and was planning on getting 1 & 2 soon. Cool.

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  • Anonymous

    Cell phones in the 1930s? That’s awesome.

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  • ShortGirl

    What an idea. One person dead, anyone you want. ANYONE. Shit, that would take forever to decide who. Someone in your personal life, a celebrity, a politician, or a world wide terrorist?
    Decisions, descisions.

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  • emogirl

    If you call ur self won’t your listening to yourself breathing. Right? Unless the government is tapping your phone.

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  • Kitty.

    Hmmm… Perhaps a few political leaders currently running the country that I could definitely do without. ^^

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  • Anonymous

    Way to steal shit from Persona. As soon as I read the dialing your own number part,I knew where this was going.
    Still,not bad.

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  • hi_ppl

    I’ve tried callin myself and all i get is my voicemail. :(

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  • Emma

    When I call myself on my cellphone, I get my voicemail.

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  • Anonymous

    I can’t afford a phone ;_;

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  • Sigma

    When I save up enough to get a Mio (accept no less!) I am SO doing this.
    But what would happen if you said “god” or “you” or something? What if you said a group?

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  • Someone

    :[ all I got was my voicemail when I called. How will I know when it's the right time to try this? Because I already know who I want dead x]

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  • lalalala

    wouldnt it be you answering the phone? you would hear yourself breathing, thats why it says to not bother saying anything cause they want you to believe that it’s actually someone else.

    idk, pretty good though.

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  • Aspire

    This is actually Persona 2: Eternal Punishment (which actually might as well have been Persona 3). And he was identified: Tatsuya Sudou… the JOKER killer. Also, whoever uses this “service” is forced to take on the persona of the Joker and kill the same person they request… as well as anyone else. It was a great game.

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  • PoopyButthair

    I would kill the fucking idiots who vote for people like bush then complain that bush is an awful president, ANd now there going to vote for mckain and i hope to god he doesnt fucking win the election. Of course I wouldn’t kill anyone at all if i really could because it’s not my place to judge who lives or dies and it seems unfair to use that kind of powe, it seems like (You could probably kill me in one hit so im going to hide behind a device that can kill you without me doing work)
    I choose this because I hated light yagami so much. I was laughing when he died.

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    • (=^.^=)

      da fauq? political problems on creepy pasta? sad life…

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  • Kyle

    When I called my phone I got this creepy, almost robotic sounding voice that said “You have 1 new voicemail, and 1 saved voicemail, press 1 to listen to your voicemail, press 2 to delete all.”

    Creepy.

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