• justgeni

    I am really enjoying reading these!I think they are well written and just the right ammount of creepy!I can’t wait for the next one…I also like the suggested tracks at the begining!I have yet to play one while I read but can imagine knowing most of the tracks that it would enhance the story:)

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: +4 (from 4 votes)
    • little miss black cat

      I know these are so good I wonder who would be the 4th victim of Jeff what do you think???

      VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
      Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
      • justgeni

        After tucker I just don’t know…maybe then another set of parents?or better yet,a move to a new town and a whole new string of events?:)

        VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
        Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
  • Something

    sorry but the suggested track was awful. How was it supposed to fit with the creepypasta ?

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
    • justgeni

      Same effect as the intense background music in a scary movie I guess…helping with the build up and suspense?you gotta admit it gives a uniqe something that I haven’t seen in my time on creepasta:)

      VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
      Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
    • Angel Rocket

      It’s just the first song that popped into my head.I know there are probably more fitting songs out there. That’s why its only suggested but I appreciate that you gave it a listen.

      VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
      Rating: +1 (from 3 votes)
  • http://MattMHorror.Wordpress.com Matt M

    This is like a better, more realistic version of Jeff the Killer. THIS Jeff, I like.

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: +11 (from 15 votes)
  • http://cartoonnetwork.com Angela

    I love this story creepy scary and awesome but poor abby tucker and wendy though

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: +2 (from 4 votes)
  • Night

    I like this story better than the original jeff the the killer.It brings out a more realistic version of him,one that we can’t question and say that its fake.Kudos to you.

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: +5 (from 7 votes)
    • Sky Grey

      Although this is a great story no… Just no… I am not trying to start a fight. Nothing will ever EVER compare to the original Jeff The Killer story. Nothing this story is great and all but it made Jeff seem very weak unlike the original killer I fell in love with and have an obsession over, but it is your opinion and you are free to think what you want I just very strongly disagree with the statement you have made.

      VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
      Rating: +2 (from 4 votes)
  • Happy Taco Penguin

    The actions here seem a bit more… Well, stereotypical Jeff the killer kind of actions.
    Don’t get me wrong, it isn’t bad- I’m still actually excited for the next installment.

    But there are a few plot holes, though very minor. Maybe I’ll point them out at the end of the series- don’t wanna spoil it for the people who are really enjoying it. :) Overall, it’s still some tasty pasta and I’m excited for the next act. 8/10

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: +1 (from 3 votes)
  • Slenderman

    Really good pasta. Can’t wait to eat the fourth coarse!

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: +1 (from 3 votes)
  • Jeff’s photo

    Really good pasta. Can’t wait to eat the fourth coarse!

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: +1 (from 3 votes)
  • https://youtube.com/blastissimo218 Dave

    Great pasta, though I feel the plot is plausible: why would anyone track down a psycho killer without bringing some sort of weapon?

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: +4 (from 4 votes)
    • Devin

      Yeah, I wanted to write my own version of that act. Where Tucker walks into the house wearing aviators and a “I <3 LIBERTY" T-shirt and unloads a Glock 45 into Jeff and just walks out of there without any trauma and goes to McDonald's and eats a Victory Big Mac.

      VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
      Rating: +4 (from 4 votes)
      • AngelRocket

        I like it.

        VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
        Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
  • Anonymous

    omg! best pasta i have ever had!!!!

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: +1 (from 3 votes)
  • pinkamina

    This gives Jeff a realistic aspect. Not just showing him as an invincible urban legend, but as a real person. I could see some twisted person doing this.

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: +3 (from 5 votes)
  • http://creepypasta.com Dustin

    great pasta good storie should be a book

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: 0 (from 4 votes)
    • http://trolololololololololol The CupcakeCat

      Agreed!!!!! MAKE IT A BOOK :O

      VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
      Rating: 0 (from 4 votes)
  • http://creepypasta.com Dustin

    good pasta should be a book

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: +1 (from 7 votes)
  • Madison Paine

    This Is Jeff The killer! I Read Te First Ones And I Knew It Was Jeff. Boy, I Love Jeff Soooooo Much! But This, This Is Heaven. This Is Soooooo Much Better Then The Real Jeff. It Brings Out More Of Jeff, Then The other Story. But The Other Story Explained How He Went Insane More. This Is Still Alot Better <3

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: 0 (from 4 votes)
    • Rad-ish

      Wasn’t the series written to stop people like you from falling in love with psychotic killers?

      VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
      Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
  • Elizabeth

    Omg I love it so much I couldn’t stop reading.i literally starting cryin though cause it was so sad with the whole Abby and tucker thing cause their realationship reminds me of me and my boyfriends…this should be a book!!:)

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: 0 (from 4 votes)
  • Kylie

    This is a REALLY REALLY good series. May you PLEASE make another Jeff the Killer series?

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: +1 (from 5 votes)
  • http://trolololololololololol The CupcakeCat

    WAY better then the original Jeff the Killer. This is realistic and scary enough to not be able to fall asleep for awhile :P
    Best series on Creepypasta.

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: 0 (from 6 votes)
  • GoToSleep

    i kinda like the original better. not that this isn’t great, but im one of those people who likes the originals, bad or not. but this is still a very delicious pasta. XD

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
  • Anonymous

    guys if you have figured this out yet Jeff the killer might be the one who made slenderman and also slenderman might also be a women because in the third act there is officer slenderman who is a women but who would have that last name or maybe it is the daughter of slenderman before slenderman was pinned to a fucking tree by his wife after they were married for about a year and then she brought him to the woods drugged him and did what they did to jesus but onto a tree and then i think that slenderman must obey jeff or jeff will kill him just a thought also i have done a bunch of research on him and i realized a pattern between him and saw so i think the saw movie line is based on jeff the killer also just a theory and i think what was on wendy’s computer was the same messages and somehow jeff had found out and stole them both because we know that wendy and abby or do we because abby was cut open and layed on a bed it says it in act 3 so who was the one in the closet with wendy i wonder if it was one of abbys friends or even one of wendys friends that was in there with her and also why did he not fight back he could have killed him if he was strong enough and back to the slenderman thing maybe tucker is slenderman because the other story i had is just a belief but now that i read this i think my other one is correct that tucker was stretched out on the operating table and then he cut off all of the part of the body on the face the nose the eyes and the mouth because slendermans face is smooth so i believe that jeff cut those parts out for himself and then something happened and tucker(slenderman) got powers to teleport and grow multiple arms so just a though dont know plz comment back if u have any holes or questions about this also sorry i didnt have time to do to put period and comas because someone is outside my house and i have to get out sorry now bye dont know if i will even stay alive bye hope u like this oh god he just came into the house got to go NOW

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
  • adam

    This story feels contrived. Everyone but me seems to like it though, so who am I to say it isnt any good. The whole aspect of characters giving up and letting jeff just kill them feels really cheap. The progression is either overstated and obvious or non existent, the story never hits that sweet spot that draws you in and makes you eager to see what happens. Thats just me, but I also think thats why it would take a lot of work to make this a “book”.

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: +1 (from 3 votes)
    • AngelRocket

      Challenge Accepted.

      VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
      Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
  • Jeff the killer

    All the love story’s I listen to or read its when jeff wouldn’t lay a hand on his gf

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
  • KittyKween

    Your kidding me right? if your going to make a one of those fan-girl Creepypasta stories about Jeff the Killer at least get it straight that Jeff cut his checks and burned his eye lids off before he killed his family, not after he met Wend and crap. And anyway, since his family is already dead in this I would say that this has false information about Jeff the Killer. Sorry if I`m being rude and really you just wanted him to like Wendy that much, but I can`t stand it when people do stuff like that. And by the way… Jeff is 13 why would he have sex with Wendy.

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: 0 (from 2 votes)
    • Anonymous

      This is a spin-off, meaning its my own version of Jeff the Killer, not necessarily a sequel to the original. And it’s not a fan girl love story, it’s a warning to fan girls. Also, he’s 19 in my story.

      VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
      Rating: +2 (from 2 votes)
    • AnimeAndCreepypastaLover

      Jeff was killing people for 6 years before meeting wendy. Dont you pay attention Kittykween?

      VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
      Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
  • KittyKween

    Stop making stupid false Jeff The Killer love stories. its just really immature. at least get your facts right when you talk about him. and he is 13!

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
    • AnimeAndCreepypastaLover

      As i said, it was SIX years of phsycotic murders before meeting wendy. And i also got confused that jeff burnt his eyelids and other stuff with his face only after meeting wendy. But i still liked this pasta. And will keep replying to yur comment telling you that hes 18 or 19 when he met wendy. Until you finally reply to my replies to your comment.<:)

      VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
      Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
    • AnimeAndCreepypastaLover

      “As you could imagine, for six years I`ve been on the run from my past. I`travel from city to city…” this is what jeff said as he began his story. And could`ve been 12 or 13 went he went nuts.

      VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
      Rating: 0 (from 0 votes)
  • angel beats

    i like it if i was the guy i would of knocked the door down if u had that call and u got there fast just knock it down dont stand around!!! please dont…. the story is like me i watched my friend die in front of me and i couldent do anything this huants me to now and it will forever let her be in my heart forever my friend….

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
  • JaiAndTheSpear

    Can we please have some brand new installment where it turns out Wendy lived and her love for him turned her into a psychotic killer as well?

    VA:F [1.9.22_1171]
    Rating: +1 (from 1 vote)
Back to top